1. goodbye (5 stars, 321 notes)
2. Hard (4.5 stars, 141 notes)
3. Kiiwa (4.86 stars, 257 notes)
4. Normal (2.65 stars, 94 notes)

le oni wrote:

Umm..
Can you continue "Hard" ??
Because it is a good beatmaps ~

le oni wrote:

Umm..
Can you continue "Hard" ??
Because it is a good beatmaps ~

Autumn wrote:

Hi Eveless
M4M here ^^

[eveless]
00:14:664 (2) - Flow建议:

SPOILER

00:20:139 (5,1) - 希望距离能与00:25:314 (3,4) 一致 是否与00:19:014 (7) stack意义倒不大
00:26:814 - ADD a circle? 能听到一声娇喘

SPOILER

00:32:814 (3) - 试试Ctrl+G
00:41:060 (3) - Stack: X=305 Y=90
从00:29:964 到 00:34:464 可以加上2,4 Clap
00:37:164 (1) - 试试Finish?
01:22:131 (3) - 什么音效都不下有点空虚..可以试试Whistle(Additions选Normal)

[Hard]
00:33:114 - 根据vocal可以叠两个音上去:

SPOILER

01:06:410 (5) - NC从这里开始比较好
00:49:460 - Clap?
01:06:860 - Clap?

Normal没看出问题
Kiiwa太神Mod不能
That's all..Sorry for my poor mod
Hope it will help~
GL~

1. So lazy? T_T Why no Easy?

1. 00:01:164 (1) - Do you really like this shape? I find it a bit wry but if you want to keep it.. I guess this is about taste.
2. 00:57:860 (2) - Missing clap on the end to keep it consistent.
3. 00:59:210 (3) - Could be a bit hard to read for beginners due to hitburst. I'd like it if you moved both Sliders a bit up.
4. 01:01:460 (5) - Also missing clap? But it could be that you did this intentionally because of the whistle, I dont know.
5. 01:06:410 (1) - Finish sounds more powerful and would be consistent with 01:10:010 (1) -
6. 01:22:431 (6) - Ehh, increase distance? Current spacing is much too confusing for newbies.
7. 01:22:592 (1) - End is not snapped
   

1. 00:25:164 - I don't see any reason to skip this beat, it's pretty prominent in the music.
2. 00:26:964 (3,4) - Play a bit oddly, how about deleting 4 and add a repeat to 3?
3. 00:38:064 (2) - Finish on the start? Sounds lovely with the vocals.
4. 00:40:460 (2,1,2) - Just a suggestion you can apply if you like but how about adding a finish to this Slider starts?
5. 00:44:060 (2) - To this one and the following like this aswell ofc if you like it; but only if you want ofc, you could think of it as spamming if you dislike.
6. 00:54:410 (1) - Finish to the start? Follows nicely with the vocals.
7. 01:07:610 (3) - I don't understand why this is the only one without finish? Seems a bit odd to me ~
8. 01:11:360 (1) - Missing a finish on the start? I think so.
9. 01:22:581 (1) - Remove finish from this Spinner, it is too loud and inconsistent with the other difficultys.

1. 00:15:864 (2,3) - What the hell is with that Sliders? D:
2. 00:38:514 (2,3,4,5,6) - So mean T_T at least NC?
3. 00:56:360 (3) - Reduce the volume of this finish a bit?
4. 01:03:710 (2) - This note is much too hidden, it's not even good to play if you know that it's there xD
5. 01:15:485 - Add a note here maybe? It will follow the drums.
6. Can't really much suggest here lol, can barely play it xD

1. 00:24:114 (4) - Hue, change the shape to a straight one to fit 3?
2. 00:25:164 (1) - Finish here, you do have it on Normal.
3. 00:56:810 (1) - You're missing a finish on the start xD
4. 01:06:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh my god, I love this pattern!

Konei wrote:

Ohi eveless, m4m here \:D/


[General]

1. So lazy? T_T Why no Easy?

[Normal]

1. 00:01:164 (1) - Do you really like this shape? I find it a bit wry but if you want to keep it.. I guess this is about taste.
2. 00:57:860 (2) - Missing clap on the end to keep it consistent.
3. 00:59:210 (3) - Could be a bit hard to read for beginners due to hitburst. I'd like it if you moved both Sliders a bit up.
4. 01:01:460 (5) - Also missing clap? But it could be that you did this intentionally because of the whistle, I dont know.
5. 01:06:410 (1) - Finish sounds more powerful and would be consistent with 01:10:010 (1) -
6. 01:22:431 (6) - Ehh, increase distance? Current spacing is much too confusing for newbies.
7. 01:22:592 (1) - End is not snapped
   

[Hard]

1. 00:25:164 - I don't see any reason to skip this beat, it's pretty prominent in the music.
2. 00:26:964 (3,4) - Play a bit oddly, how about deleting 4 and add a repeat to 3?
3. 00:38:064 (2) - Finish on the start? Sounds lovely with the vocals.
4. 00:40:460 (2,1,2) - Just a suggestion you can apply if you like but how about adding a finish to this Slider starts?
5. 00:44:060 (2) - To this one and the following like this aswell ofc if you like it; but only if you want ofc, you could think of it as spamming if you dislike.
6. 00:54:410 (1) - Finish to the start? Follows nicely with the vocals.
7. 01:07:610 (3) - I don't understand why this is the only one without finish? Seems a bit odd to me ~
8. 01:11:360 (1) - Missing a finish on the start? I think so.
9. 01:22:581 (1) - Remove finish from this Spinner, it is too loud and inconsistent with the other difficultys.

[Kiiwa]

1. 00:15:864 (2,3) - What the hell is with that Sliders? D:
2. 00:38:514 (2,3,4,5,6) - So mean T_T at least NC?
3. 00:56:360 (3) - Reduce the volume of this finish a bit?
4. 01:03:710 (2) - This note is much too hidden, it's not even good to play if you know that it's there xD
5. 01:15:485 - Add a note here maybe? It will follow the drums.
6. Can't really much suggest here lol, can barely play it xD

[eveless]

1. 00:24:114 (4) - Hue, change the shape to a straight one to fit 3?I think curved one is better for ballance at this position, so keep it xD
2. 00:25:164 (1) - Finish here, you do have it on Normal.
3. 00:56:810 (1) - You're missing a finish on the start xD
4. 01:06:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh my god, I love this pattern!

And that's kinda all, nice mapset eveless :3

Good luck ~

Irreversible wrote:

hi!

[General]

looks fine!

[Normal]

00:03:564 (3,4) - I think a nicer blanket would fit pretty well here, i mean between the slider end of 3 and the first wave of the wavy slider
00:36:264 (2) - I think you could get a better rhythm here, to me it seems a little bit confusing for normal players, .. I know it's starting on the 'wo' or w/e he's saying, but I got another suggestion: http://puu.sh/35Ow8.jpg
00:49:460 (3,1,2) - Can you see the distance snap fail here? it's not the same between them, at least it seems like that. fix it please
01:22:431 (6) - o.o Do you think a normal player can get that? Try to move it to another place, or leave it away, hm.. up to you

nice diff !


[Hard]

01:19:768 (1) - there are two unnecessary red lines in there, remove them please (if you find another one, as well )

Can't say much about it, the only thing i'm a bit worried about is: 00:08:964 (1,2,3) - , it's a anti-jump, dunno if it's a good idea o: players might think it's a triplet or something.


[Kiiwa]

This diff is just !! It's so slow, yet hard to play, great job! I'm going to focus the readability, which is i guess on purpose, but sometimes it's just too confusing


00:04:689 (4) - Is there a possibility to make this another color? Or move it differently? I had problem seeing that it's a 1/4 circle, i just thought there is the green one, and yeah.. i don't suggest that you stack here!
00:21:564 (2,3) - This is a bit hard to read, because of the distance snap, it looks good but maybe consider reducing the DS between 2 to 3 a bit .
00:31:014 (3) - Move some grids to the right? it will cause an overall nicer looking pattern between00:30:714 (2,3,4) - and makes it slightly more readable
00:35:064 (2,1) - Here i didn't know where the second slider was going to: to the top or to the bottom, i couldn't see the number what confused me a bit..
00:38:514 (2,3,4,5,6) - xD Nice but hard to read
01:03:710 (2) - Please, please plase move this a bit differently. Me and Konei tried this diff over 30 times, and we couldn't see this circle! xDD If i'm right, people tend to go directly to 01:03:860 (1) - . If you don't wanna move it, at least remove NC 01:03:860 (1) - from here, so the people playing this instantly know that there must be a 2 somewhere.



[eveless]

Well i like to make mods based on my feelings by playing, but i can't really play it, it's too hard for me.

00:40:910 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/35OVj.jpg try this? it would cause a funny jump to the next one and looks nice as well.
00:55:460 (2,3) - Ctrl + G is highly recommend xDD I think player will always go to three first, well at least not soooo good ones try it, if not leave it

i wish i could play it properly, it seems much funnier then :3 good job


hope i could help a bit!

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
N跟H的lead-in=1000~1500足够了
这timing我觉得有点蛋疼，我明天起来再看看，太困了lks的timing 233

[Normal]
01:22:592 - 感觉note放这里好点。。好

[Hard]
00:05:964 - 强烈建议加个note估计是个人习惯不同吧对于这种我向来是spin过而不是note+spin...没改，后同。
00:57:560 - 考虑slider停在这跟vocal么，之后可以加个note之类的，kiai段正好节奏可以复杂点
00:59:960 - ^
01:07:160 (2) - 可以换成1/2折返slider试试折返还要重排好麻烦我直接加1/2note了！
01:08:360 (4) - ^，感觉这节奏有点简单了点
01:19:768 - 同00:05:964 -
01:22:592 - ^

[goodbye]
00:15:414 - 这里有个跳就好了，可以试试00:15:114 (4) - ctrl+g
00:19:839 (3,4,5) - kick sliders建议别蓝线起，有点违和0.0.没这里是故意的想要一种抛出去的感觉……能打大丈夫。
00:27:414 (3) - 这个感觉可以再快点，有种蓄力的感觉就好，现在这速度有点感觉不出0.01.5了都不行吗233改成1.8试试
00:29:214 (1,2,3) - 留白的处理可以试着把这个反过来stack到^上面，个人感觉好点我也想过这种，最后决定配合MV……因为前面是从左伸手到右所以是上面27那边的，然后留白结束后在这边画面切换配合左上角那个……蛋（？）才放这边
00:37:164 (1) - 感觉放到x:48 y:48之类的位置更合曲点
00:54:560 (1,2,1) - 这里很明显是12312312的节奏，所以我建议前面这三个slider可以拆一拆，slider circle slider circle这样唔我觉得把一16分音符4拍子的小节划分为三个三个一组有点略不太符合乐理的感觉（个人理解），所以没改
01:08:660 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 五边形可以漂亮点其实0.0..。眼拙，略微移了一下感觉估计还是没法完美

总感觉H有点简单0.0……bushiwodecuo

wcx19911123 wrote:

Kiiwa diff有unsnap，顺带timing我看了看，前面还行，后面减速的那一段感觉有些线早了点，总体需要+4~8的样子（特别是刚开始减速的时候，01:16:152 - 附近）

1. fix kiiwa's audio lean-in to 2000ms (as goodbye diff
2. 00:29:214 - need some extra red sections here imo, sound quite off in kiiwa/goodbye diff. did some try but better get a double check.
   
   1. 29192 - 200bpm <--1/6 snap here.
   2. 29352 - 200bpm
   3. 29964 - 200bpm
3. over 1000kbps video as 720x576 is odd, as the video should be 16:9. try: http://puu.sh/3j5R0.flv
4. is there really a site link on your BG o_o?

1. 00:18:714 (3,1) - prevent them from overlapping?
2. 01:17:384 (1) - unsnapped note.
3. 01:19:351 (3) - wrongly snapped?
4. 01:19:749 (1) - ^
5. 00:38:514 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - wrongly snapped?

1. 01:24:992 (1) - consider add a note here and start spinner later, to keep consistence with 01:22:592 (5,1). and provide a better experience with hitsound.
2. 00:54:560 (1,2,1,2,3) - this sound more like a OXXOXXOO. it can be much better if you arrange your pattern in this way.
3. the long empty is a bit evil, but as it's only 1/4 HP drain won't hurt much though.

1. 00:27:564 (1) - how about increase the volume from 10 to 35 little by little from 00:28:314 till the end? of course change the initial volume to 10. (same in hard

1. 01:17:358 (4) - new combo

Colin Hou wrote:

/me cheapshot.

[General]

1. fix kiiwa's audio lean-in to 2000ms (as goodbye diff
2. 00:29:214 - need some extra red sections here imo, sound quite off in kiiwa/goodbye diff. did some try but better get a double check.Just like what I've talked with you and NatsumeRin, I decided to remove this part from all my mapset since they're really hard to timing/mapping, well, I'm lazy you know.
   
   1. 29192 - 200bpm <--1/6 snap here.
   2. 29352 - 200bpm
   3. 29964 - 200bpm
3. over 1000kbps video as 720x576 is odd, as the video should be 16:9. try: http://puu.sh/3j5R0.flv
4. is there really a site link on your BG o_o?o_o?

[kiiwa]

1. 00:18:714 (3,1) - prevent them from overlapping?
2. 01:17:384 (1) - unsnapped note.
3. 01:19:351 (3) - wrongly snapped?
4. 01:19:749 (1) - ^
5. 00:38:514 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - wrongly snapped?

[goodbye]

1. 01:24:992 (1) - consider add a note here and start spinner later, to keep consistence with 01:22:592 (5,1). and provide a better experience with hitsound.
2. 00:54:560 (1,2,1,2,3) - this sound more like a OXXOXXOO. it can be much better if you arrange your pattern in this way.as what i've said before(just check the post which i answered to wcx), I'd like to keep them.
3. the long empty is a bit evil, but as it's only 1/4 HP drain won't hurt much though.I think they're ok

[Normal]

1. 00:27:564 (1) - how about increase the volume from 10 to 35 little by little from 00:28:314 till the end? of course change the initial volume to 10. (same in hard

[Hard]

1. 01:17:358 (4) - new combo

/me vanished.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Normal]
00:37:764 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/3ozTx.jpg maybe, stack in easiest diff is usually not the best way
01:08:810 (1,2) - personally i think a slider here should be enough..just keep pace with other bar in this part so i think they're ok

[Hard]
00:29:964 (1,2) - sounds strange, any better way?
00:58:460 - add a note?
01:00:860 - ^