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MillhioreF

Pro Tester

Joined July 2011

MillhioreF 2013-03-31T21:51:39+00:00

[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps.
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too.

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.

It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-31T22:39:19+00:00

MillhioreF wrote:
[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps. roger. but, Drum sampleset is small sound._. so, i changed 90→80% :3
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine. i hope this parts fine._.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too. fmm, this is harder jump part. but, It is not difficult if I catch flow, and enjoy part

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.
thanks you
It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM

thanks testplay and suggestion

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-04-02T22:48:47+00:00

こんにちは
From My queue

your request normal only

[Hibari's Normal]
01:34:562 (2,3) - リズムがとりづらいと思いました。２，３のnoteを１つのスライダーに変更することをお勧めします

lol

awesome diff~ no kudosu plz!
rank go~ ></

Kitsuneko

709 posts

Joined June 2010

Kitsuneko 2013-04-03T08:57:02+00:00

domodomo
modding from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

General

ものすごい位置のブックマークが気になって仕方ないいらなければ消しちゃおう

Hibari's Normal

Setting

Clear

Hitsounding

Nice

Mapping

00:16:187 (3,4,1) - (1)が中央で終わるように調整 00:15:187 (2)から動かす必要があるかも
01:54:187 (1) - 横直線部分が安直過ぎるかなカーブにしてみては
02:10:187 (2) - Good job

Niva's Hard

Setting

Clear

Hitsounding

GOOD

Mapping

00:03:687 (6) - out of screen
00:13:937 (7) - 1grid down, try check to use Ctrl+J.
00:24:187 (1) - out of screen
00:30:187 (1) - move down a little
00:34:562 (2,3) - out of screen
00:40:062 (7) - out of screen
00:47:562 (6) - out of screen, down a little
01:01:937 (8) - out of screen
01:03:562 (8,9,1) - out of screen
01:05:937 (8) - out of screen
01:21:562 (5) - ^
01:22:562 (2) - out of screen
01:26:062 (7) - out of screen
01:29:562 (5) - out of screen
01:43:187 (2) - out of screen
01:47:187 (1) - out of screen
01:51:187 (1) - out of screen
01:54:187 (1) - out of screen
01:56:187 (1) - out of screen
02:12:937 (3) - out of screen

checked notes out from Edit screen, I could not be overlooked that.
(I try check with other screen resolution but same. Or rule was changed? I heard it is Unrankable.)
However, it easily fix since you're nice mapping style. just move some grids.
your map is pretty fun. Good job!

Insane

Setting

Clear

Hitsounding

00:36:062 (4) - Finishここじゃなくて00:36:187 (1) - だね
02:14:187 (1) - Soft finishのほうがいい感じ

Mapping

Unrankableなのは見つからなかったのでok

ひとまずこんなもんでした
Good luck

Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-04-03T10:51:23+00:00

Kitsuneko wrote:
domodomo
modding from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

General

ものすごい位置のブックマークが気になって仕方ないいらなければ消しちゃおう削除しました・・
　

Insane

Setting

Clear
Hitsounding

00:36:062 (4) - Finishここじゃなくて00:36:187 (1) - だね最初はそうだったのですが、指摘されて現在に至っています。厳密な音取りをすると１テンポ遅れたfinishが入ると思うので変更は無しです。ただ、このようなFinishがプレイヤーを混乱させる原因になるなら、変更を考えます。
02:14:187 (1) - Soft finishのほうがいい感じ fixed

Mapping

Unrankableなのは見つからなかったのでok roger

ひとまずこんなもんでした
Good luck

Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

thanks modding!

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-04-03T11:52:42+00:00

Satelliteさんの意見は採用させていただきました！ドモです！！

Kitsuneko wrote:
domodomo
modding from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

Hibari's Normal

Setting

Clear
Hitsounding

Nice
Mapping

00:16:187 (3,4,1) - (1)が中央で終わるように調整 00:15:187 (2)から動かす必要があるかも　そっちのほうが綺麗ですね！
01:54:187 (1) - 横直線部分が安直過ぎるかなカーブにしてみては　Rの形を変えたくないので、保留で。
02:10:187 (2) - Good job　　Yeah! Nivaさんに感謝！！

Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

Marcin

osu! Alumni

4,944 posts

Joined March 2011

Marcin 2013-04-03T12:13:44+00:00

What kind of mix is that? Just asking, because original song sounds different, and even though, you use the same name.

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-04-03T12:22:11+00:00

Marcin wrote:
What kind of mix is that? Just asking, because original song sounds different, and even though, you use the same name.

http://lapfox.bandcamp.com/album/because-maybe
source.
this name correct

Marcin

osu! Alumni

4,944 posts

Joined March 2011

Marcin 2013-04-03T12:23:07+00:00

Oh well, my bad

Sorry

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-04-03T14:32:42+00:00

Umm, about the objects...

I'm using 4:3 (800x600) currently, and there's no objects off the screen when I played it/on the Test mode >_< - I know they *may* look off-screen in edit mode, but actually it's not when you play it~ (I also have some ranked maps/GDs with objects placed on ~y:384 btw)

Fixed some and that 1 grid down issue though, thanks for mod :3

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Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-04-04T09:26:24+00:00

Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music...

Hibari's Normal:
AR+1 since this is not easy and 240bpm, (if you afraid about star rating its not a big deal 3.05 or 3.1) but with AR5 this plays better
OD+1 since this is normal
01:31:187 (3,4) - this, I suggest you to do this http://puu.sh/2tCF6 because this is better way imo to jump from vocal back on music
01:54:187 (1) - why why why, lets make this nicer http://puu.sh/2tCJP http://puu.sh/2tCK1 annnnd finally http://puu.sh/2tCKt
02:10:187 (2) - take my heart <3 http://puu.sh/2tCQd

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Niva's Hard:
this was soooooo awesome until I saw 01:42:187 (1,2,1,2) - eh, such an disappointment Niva. Maybe change this 2 repeat sliders in something... or just add circles instead of second repeat, think about this please, this plays really not so fun as it can be.
01:48:187 (1,2) - ^
01:56:187 (1,2) - ^

Insane:
00:27:062 (1,2,3) - this is sudden jump, reduce a little to 1.5x DS maybe?
01:59:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - seems a little random placement to me
masterpiece

Good Luck!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-04-04T11:29:36+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music... fmm,i keep this. if people same opinion, i'll change this.

Insane:
00:27:062 (1,2,3) - this is sudden jump, reduce a little to 1.5x DS maybe? maybe ok ._.
01:59:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - seems a little random placement to me yeah,bit random, but harder part good fit.
masterpiece

Good Luck!

thanks modding and star

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-04-04T11:48:19+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music...

Hibari's Normal:
AR+1 since this is not easy and 240bpm, (if you afraid about star rating its not a big deal 3.05 or 3.1) but with AR5 this plays betterok
OD+1 since this is normal Umm, I'd like to be easy this map's OD
01:31:187 (3,4) - this, I suggest you to do this http://puu.sh/2tCF6 because this is better way imo to jump from vocal back on music I completly catch the drum sound, and now is exciting I think.
01:54:187 (1) - why why why, lets make this nicer http://puu.sh/2tCJP http://puu.sh/2tCK1 annnnd finally http://puu.sh/2tCKt OK
02:10:187 (2) - take my heart <3 http://puu.sh/2tCQd
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Sorry, Sorry, Sorry...This slider is made by Niva. I'd like to use his. sorry..

Good Luck!

Thanks for modding!

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-04-04T11:54:24+00:00

hibarirailwayz wrote:
Sorry, Sorry, Sorry...This slider is made by Niva. I'd like to use his. sorry..

Eh..

okay

[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2013-04-04T17:17:57+00:00

hi

[Hibari's Normal]

00:34:187 (1) - softl finish
00:42:187 (1) - ^
01:02:687 (2) - whistle here isn't sounding good imo, remove it?
01:35:562 - whistle to be consistent
01:54:187 (1) - LOL
02:10:187 (2) - nice heart

[Niva's Hard]

This diff is absolutely perfect

00:26:687 (4) - make this blanket with (5)?
01:09:937 (3) - was this intentional?

tfw hard is 5 stars while insane is 4,96 lol

[Insane]

00:03:187 (5,6,7) - sorry, this is a no no. The overlap is really weird and I personally don't like the stack
Try this

SPOILER

(7)'s end is stacked with 00:01:937 (3) -

00:12:687 (3) - Rotate 9°
00:12:937 (4) - ^fix the angle if you did this
00:57:874 - add note here, there is a 1/4
01:09:437 (5,1) - this jump is too aggressive imo o_O. select 01:09:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - and ctrl g?
01:09:937 (1) - remove nc and ^if you didn't fix this, put ir between 01:09:812 (5) - and 01:10:187 (1) - using spacing

SPOILER

01:22:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make all the jumps with the same spacing? something more circular like this

SPOILER

use the polygon tool

01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream starts too early, there's no 1/4 here 01:39:749 (2) -
01:54:187 (1) - this part is so epic ;_____; why spinner? map it pls
02:02:437 (2) - ctrl g?
02:02:937 (4) - ^?
02:14:187 (1) - normal finish

I hope I could help
good luck o3o

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-04-04T17:49:41+00:00

[Luanny] wrote:
:o
hi

[Insane]

00:03:187 (5,6,7) - sorry, this is a no no. The overlap is really weird and I personally don't like the stack no, this overlap good. no problem!
Try this
SPOILER

(7)'s end is stacked with 00:01:937 (3) -
00:12:687 (3) - Rotate 9° Edit: Finally Done
00:12:937 (4) - ^fix the angle if you did this ^
00:57:874 - add note here, there is a 1/4 fmm, but keep is good sound i feel.
01:09:437 (5,1) - this jump is too aggressive imo o_O. select 01:09:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - and ctrl g? Edit: easily done.
01:09:937 (1) - remove nc and ^if you didn't fix this, put ir between 01:09:812 (5) - and 01:10:187 (1) - using spacing spacing is no problem.
SPOILER
01:22:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make all the jumps with the same spacing? something more circular like this sorry, i like little jump. if, other people same opinion.. i'll change this.
SPOILER

use the polygon tool
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream starts too early, there's no 1/4 here 01:39:749 (2) - playable and i heard this sound. no probmlem.
01:54:187 (1) - this part is so epic ;_____; why spinner? map it pls rest and feel no problem spinner part.
02:02:437 (2) - ctrl g? finnaly done
02:02:937 (4) - ^
02:14:187 (1) - normal finish ok

I hope I could help
good luck o3o

sorry, almost not change, but, Is great; referred to it. Thanks modding!

Last edited by P o M u T a 2013-07-07T03:14:49+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-04-05T07:41:49+00:00

[Luanny] wrote:
[Niva's Hard]

This diff is absolutely perfect

00:26:687 (4) - make this blanket with (5)? Ah, I can't make this fully blanketed here, moved the waypoint a bit upper btw~
01:09:937 (3) - was this intentional? Yep (:

tfw hard is 5 stars while insane is 4,96 lol

Sieg : Umm, I agree that four 2x repeating slider in a row looks a bit boring, however two (01:48:187 (1,2) - for example) plays fine for me though... Remapped that first part you mentioned though, yep it's a lot better now :3

Thanks both xD

SPOILER

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hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-04-05T15:31:43+00:00

[Luanny] wrote:
:o
hi

[Hibari's Normal]

00:34:187 (1) - softl finish ok
00:42:187 (1) - ^
01:02:687 (2) - whistle here isn't sounding good imo, remove it? fixed
01:35:562 - whistle to be consistent I think, I can save consistent...
01:54:187 (1) - LOL Yeah!
02:10:187 (2) - nice heart Thax

I hope I could help
good luck o3o

Thanks modding!!

IchiGUN

778 posts

Joined July 2010

IchiGUN 2013-04-07T00:14:08+00:00

こんにちは P o M u T a-さん

m4m, so let's go :3

General
● OK

===========================

Hibari's Normal
>Settings
● Good
>Mapping
● 01:28:187 (1) - remove NC and add on 01:28:562 (2) ?
● 01:31:937 (4) - add NC remove on 01:32:187 (1) ?
● 01:35:937 (4) - ^
● 01:38:937 (2) - maybe change a little slider form? looks more accuracy
---->
● 01:54:187 (1) - I think it's too hight for score bar...please down it :3

>Hitsounds
● Sounds good
__________________
Pretty nice, but in taiko looks at Hard

===========================

Niva's Hard
>Settings
● Good
>Mapping
● 00:34:562 (2,3) - y:0 it's too hight, please down it :3
● 00:47:562 (6) - ^ y:4 =.=
● 01:26:062 (7) - again score bar overlaps
● 01:33:937 (6,7) - ^
● 01:56:187 (1) - ^
● 02:12:937 (3) - ^
>Hitsounds
● Sounds good
___________________
Hm, good diff's...but looks like Insane so many jumps

===========================

Insane

>Settings
● Good
>Mapping
● Good
>Hitsounds
● Good
___________________
Really nice insane, i can't find any problem

===========================

So, all it's just suggestion, i hope it's help you

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-04-07T11:41:03+00:00

IchiGUN wrote:
===========================
Hibari's Normal
>Settings
● Good
>Mapping
● 01:28:187 (1) - remove NC and add on 01:28:562 (2) ? There are pattearn, sorry..
● 01:31:937 (4) - add NC remove on 01:32:187 (1) ? ^
● 01:35:937 (4) - ^^
● 01:38:937 (2) - maybe change a little slider form? looks more accuracy ok
---->
● 01:54:187 (1) - I think it's too hight for score bar...please down it :3 ok

>Hitsounds
● Sounds good
__________________
Pretty nice, but in taiko looks at Hard

Thanks modding!!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-04-08T09:04:02+00:00

IchiGUN wrote:
===========================
Niva's Hard
>Settings
● Good
>Mapping
● 00:34:562 (2,3) - y:0 it's too hight, please down it :3 Done~
● 00:47:562 (6) - ^ y:4 =.= Done~
● 01:26:062 (7) - again score bar overlaps ...it's not in play mode? I'm really sure about this one... I fixed the slider's tiny grid error though
● 01:33:937 (6,7) - ^ Ah, I want to keep the encircle here ._.
● 01:56:187 (1) - ^ orz, it's intentional o.o
● 02:12:937 (3) - ^ Moved down a bit
>Hitsounds
● Sounds good
___________________
Hm, good diff's...but looks like Insane so many jumps

Thank you for mod (:

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Tshemmp

1,405 posts

Joined June 2011

Tshemmp 2013-04-08T11:24:13+00:00

[Insane]

00:11:937 (10) - ctrl+g on this one? Because 00:10:687 (3,4) - are going in opposite directions, so I feel like (9,10) should aswell. Or do ctrl+g on 00:10:937 (4) - .
00:13:937 (8) - ^
00:34:187 (1) - add NC here?
00:55:437 (6,7) - mh, the rhythm is a bit awkward here imo, what about this instead, it would fit the music better imo:
SPOILER
second kiai time should end at 01:10:187 - ? (also to make it consistent among all diffs)
01:12:937 (3,4) - hm, can't really explain why, but I don't like this stack. Maybe put (4) on (5) instead?
01:26:187 (1) - combos with only one note in in look bad most of the times imo, so maybe remove the NC here?
02:03:937 (6,7) - I would do an 1/2 slider instead here, makes the transition into the triplets easier, right now it is really hard imo ._. (then again I suck, so maybe you shouldn't listen to me here)

This map rocks!

[Niva's Hard]

uhm, to be honest, this is an Insane o.o
00:31:937 (6) - I really don't like the position of this circle, it comes rather unexpected and totally kills the flow imo, I would just stack it on (7)
01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - imo you could use jumps here, this is kinda the climax of the song, this low spacing doesn't fit too much imo. Goes for 01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too, of course. At least use 1,0x spacing. x_x

[Hibari's Normal]

Slider tick rate 1 maybe. I know, it is recommended to have the same tick rate in all diffs, but come on, tick rate 2 just looks plain ugly in this diff.
02:02:187 (1) - ctrl+g maybe. Makes it a little bit more interesting imo but you can aswell leave it so.

I have to say the difficulty gap between Hard and Normal is pretty huge imo, mainly because the Hard is more like an Insane (and while we are at it the Insane is an Extra of course). Great mapset nonetheless, all diffs are really well made, I would even say flawless. 3 stars.

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-04-08T13:35:05+00:00

Tshemmp wrote:
[Hibari's Normal]
Slider tick rate 1 maybe. I know, it is recommended to have the same tick rate in all diffs, but come on, tick rate 2 just looks plain ugly in this diff.ok
02:02:187 (1) - ctrl+g maybe. Makes it a little bit more interesting imo but you can aswell leave it so. for the spacing, I'd like to skip your request... sorry

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-04-08T13:56:42+00:00

Tshemmp wrote:
[Insane]
00:11:937 (10) - ctrl+g on this one? Because 00:10:687 (3,4) - are going in opposite directions, so I feel like (9,10) should aswell. Or do ctrl+g on 00:10:937 (4) - . you're right. but, i like this pettern. sorry keep for now.
00:13:937 (8) - ^ same
00:34:187 (1) - add NC here?　oh, thanks
00:55:437 (6,7) - mh, the rhythm is a bit awkward here imo, what about this instead, it would fit the music better imo:
SPOILER
umm, no problem i think np now, but, nice suggestion, I will use that as reference next time.
second kiai time should end at 01:10:187 - ? (also to make it consistent among all diffs) i'll fix this.all diff
01:12:937 (3,4) - hm, can't really explain why, but I don't like this stack. Maybe put (4) on (5) instead? another pettern fixed
01:26:187 (1) - combos with only one note in in look bad most of the times imo, so maybe remove the NC here? I use a regularity. And the NC prevents confusion.
02:03:937 (6,7) - I would do an 1/2 slider instead here, makes the transition into the triplets easier, right now it is really hard imo ._. (then again I suck, so maybe you shouldn't listen to me here) yes, so, bit harder, but, no problem feel.
This map rocks!

I have to say the difficulty gap between Hard and Normal is pretty huge imo, mainly because the Hard is more like an Insane (and while we are at it the Insane is an Extra of course). Great mapset nonetheless, all diffs are really well made, I would even say flawless. 3 stars.

thanks modding and three stars

!!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-04-10T10:58:13+00:00

Tshemmp wrote:
[Niva's Hard]
uhm, to be honest, this is an Insane o.o
00:31:937 (6) - I really don't like the position of this circle, it comes rather unexpected and totally kills the flow imo, I would just stack it on (7) Agree with this one, changed~
01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - imo you could use jumps here, this is kinda the climax of the song, this low spacing doesn't fit too much imo. Goes for 01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too, of course. At least use 1,0x spacing. x_x ...ah, I liked this slow section personally though >_< - also 01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)'s concept is second combo's spacing is sparser than the first one actually (:

Thanks Tshemmp :3

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HeatKai

osu! Alumni

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Joined April 2010

HeatKai 2013-04-10T11:08:11+00:00

GOGO P O M U T A,Hibarirailwayz and Niva XD!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-04-10T11:09:09+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
GOGO P O M U T A,Hibarirailwayz and Niva XD!

thanks HeatKai :3/

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

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hibarirailwayz 2013-04-12T15:34:00+00:00

HeatKai wrote:
GOGO P O M U T A,Hibarirailwayz and Niva XD!

Thank you ~♪

those

3,136 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2013-04-14T07:44:38+00:00

[General]

Letterboxing during breaks cuts off the background pretty strangely. I'd suggest you uncheck that box.
Something about the diff spread irks me. There's something missing between the two easier difficulties. Grab a few more opinions on this; it would help.

[Insane]

01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this spacing, but if you want to keep it, perhaps reversing these 10 circles will be more comfortable even though spacing will be the same; if it's reversed the centre will be more of a focal point, and the spacing to 01:09:937 (1) - will be better.
01:16:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is over simplified, and so is everything until the break. A more intricate rhythm can be found here. Additionally, there lacks a good transition to hint at the new rhythm found at 01:22:187 (1) - ; a player shouldn't have to rely on the approach circles to guess what the rhythm is going to be.
01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - Awkward break. Appears to play without break.
01:38:187 (1,1) - Awkward break here, too.
02:00:687 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These just appear to be sliders converted into streams. While symmetrical sliders work nicely, circles aren't the same because there isn't as much leniency. These should be repositioned in their own pattern.
02:03:187 (1) - Drum sampleset?

[Hard]

00:03:562 (5) - Because of 00:01:562 (2,3) - , the spacing here is really awkward. Much better is if you have 00:05:062 (6,7) - first to introduce this rhythm pattern, since this is much more clear with just circles.
01:42:187 - 01:57:937 - Arguably, inappropriate Kiai usage. While the music suggests a high point, the mapping does not reflect the same. A group of simple 1/1 rhythm, compared to the more intricate 1/2 rhythms throughout the map does not warrant Kiai.

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-04-14T08:29:56+00:00

those wrote:
[General]
Letterboxing during breaks cuts off the background pretty strangely. I'd suggest you uncheck that box. ok.
Something about the diff spread irks me. There's something missing between the two easier difficulties. Grab a few more opinions on this; it would help. i think no problem. I think that the revision of the degree of difficulty is not born so much even if I add simple mapset between.
[Insane]
01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this spacing, but if you want to keep it, perhaps reversing these 10 circles will be more comfortable even though spacing will be the same; if it's reversed the centre will be more of a focal point, and the spacing to 01:09:937 (1) - will be better. sorry, this mapping i like. keep for now.　However, I examine it if there is a good plan.place etc...
01:16:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is over simplified, and so is everything until the break. A more intricate rhythm can be found here. Additionally, there lacks a good transition to hint at the new rhythm found at 01:22:187 (1) - ; a player shouldn't have to rely on the approach circles to guess what the rhythm is going to be. umm, this map easily part. so, simply rhythm is fit. keep. and, 01:20:187 (1) same place, so, people not confused (1).
01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - Awkward break. Appears to play without break. why? no. vocal fit. and,not confused this.
01:38:187 (1,1) - Awkward break here, too. ^
02:00:687 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These just appear to be sliders converted into streams. While symmetrical sliders work nicely, circles aren't the same because there isn't as much leniency. These should be repositioned in their own pattern. yes, sliders converted into streams. but, i feel good now.if, nice suggestion find, i'll change this.
02:03:187 (1) - Drum sampleset? you right fix

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Last edited by P o M u T a 2013-04-14T11:06:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Niva

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Niva 2013-04-14T10:24:00+00:00

those wrote:
[Hard]
00:03:562 (5) - Because of 00:01:562 (2,3) - , the spacing here is really awkward. Much better is if you have 00:05:062 (6,7) - first to introduce this rhythm pattern, since this is much more clear with just circles. Done
01:42:187 - 01:57:937 - Arguably, inappropriate Kiai usage. While the music suggests a high point, the mapping does not reflect the same. A group of simple 1/1 rhythm, compared to the more intricate 1/2 rhythms throughout the map does not warrant Kiai. ...I don't even remember why there's a kiai time there orz ._. - Removed

Thanks for mod~

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Saten

Global Moderator

3,866 posts

Joined August 2010

Saten 2013-05-04T07:16:12+00:00

hi o.o

[General]
There's a huge gap between Normal and Hard. Most likely because Hard isn't a Hard imo

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5,6,7) - I find this part somewhat unpredictable. Can you make the slider-head more visible?
00:25:937 (1,2,1) - any reason why you have NC here? it looks confusing imo
00:31:437 (6) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) this maybe? It would become more interesting imo
00:31:687 (7) - ^
01:37:187 - skipping a heavy beat?
00:40:062 (4,5,1) - on the previous part, you had the soft-finish where you heard that vocal thing in the background which is on (4)
00:44:062 (4,1) - same as above
00:48:062 (6,1) - as above as well
02:02:437 (2) - reverse this
02:02:937 (4) - reverse this as well, feels awkward when the slider goes at the opposite direction when the next object is right behind it
02:05:187 (1) - can't you move it to a more natural spot instead of placing the tail on the previous stack? try moving the tail here instead 02:04:687 (7,8,9) -

[Niva]
Damn, this looks like an Insane lol. Keep in mind that this is 240bpm~
00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is not single-tap friendly for the current difficulty choice ><
00:45:062 (11,12) - jumps like this doesn't really fit in a Hard
This difficulty would be good as an Insane, and the current Insane would be an Extra

[Hibari]
It's a shame that you can't skip the pointless silent intro because of your chosen approach rate lol
I think you're better off with those drum-hitfinishes. It sounds so strange
02:05:187 (3,1) - letting (1) overlap (3)'s tail looks much better, but you might have to sacrifice a bit distance for that

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It's not really notable for anyone though

This is all for now. I hope you'll add something in-between Normal and ~~Hard~~ Insane

Good luck!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-05-04T07:51:37+00:00

Saten wrote:
hi o.o

[General]
There's a huge gap between Normal and Hard. Most likely because Hard isn't a Hard imo ;w;

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5,6,7) - I find this part somewhat unpredictable. Can you make the slider-head more visible? i think no problem this. It is slightly ugly, but achieves good placement.
00:25:937 (1,2,1) - any reason why you have NC here? it looks confusing imo okay!
00:31:437 (6) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) this maybe? It would become more interesting imo fixed
00:31:687 (7) - ^ ^
01:37:187 - skipping a heavy beat? umm, i want vocal beat only this. keep for now.
00:40:062 (4,5,1) - on the previous part, you had the soft-finish where you heard that vocal thing in the background which is on (4) add finish.
00:44:062 (4,1) - same as above add finish
00:48:062 (6,1) - as above as well add finish
02:02:437 (2) - reverse this fixed
02:02:937 (4) - reverse this as well, feels awkward when the slider goes at the opposite direction when the next object is right behind it fixed
02:05:187 (1) - can't you move it to a more natural spot instead of placing the tail on the previous stack? try moving the tail here instead 02:04:687 (7,8,9) -
talk irc

This is all for now. I hope you'll add something in-between Normal and ~~Hard~~ Insane

Good luck!

ty mod Saten!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-05-04T08:18:39+00:00

Saten wrote:
[Niva]
Damn, this looks like an Insane lol. Keep in mind that this is 240bpm~
00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is not single-tap friendly for the current difficulty choice >< Fixed
00:45:062 (11,12) - jumps like this doesn't really fit in a Hard I did something easier here but not really pleased at how it look atm, may alter this again in the future though >_<
This difficulty would be good as an Insane, and the current Insane would be an Extra I'll leave this to P o M u T a if he wants to change the diff name

Thanks Saten, ~~I'm running out of pattern ideas atm though~~ talked to P o M u T a and should give a better diff spread now (:

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hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-05-04T14:35:21+00:00

Saten wrote:
hi o.o

[Hibari]
It's a shame that you can't skip the pointless silent intro because of your chosen approach rate lol
I think you're better off with those drum-hitfinishes. It sounds so strange This is my way of setting hitsounds. if you specifically suggest example, it's became easy for me to understand what you want say. for the distance, I decide to skip.
02:05:187 (3,1) - letting (1) overlap (3)'s tail looks much better, but you might have to sacrifice a bit distance for that
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It's not really notable for anyone though

This is all for now. I hope you'll add something in-between Normal and ~~Hard~~ Insane

Good luck!

thanks modding!

Jenny

2,200 posts

Joined November 2010

Jenny 2013-05-05T15:22:11+00:00

This is a sped up version, should be in title, should it not.

Marcin

osu! Alumni

4,944 posts

Joined March 2011

Marcin 2013-05-05T15:23:48+00:00

Jenny wrote:
This is a sped up version, should be in title, should it not.

I already mentioned it, check my previous ~~mod~~ post in this topic.
p/2218195

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-05-05T15:29:28+00:00

yes, i keep title anyway!
and, Hard diff difficult little reduced.

Silverboxer

670 posts

Joined December 2012

Silverboxer 2013-05-05T21:53:32+00:00

Sorry if this was already mentioned but the big R slider in the normal diff looks a bit sloppy. I think it would look better by turning the red anchors into normal white anchors and adjusting them:

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Awesome maps though I hope this gets ranked soon

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-05-06T13:03:28+00:00

silverboxer wrote:
Sorry if this was already mentioned but the big R slider in the normal diff looks a bit sloppy. I think it would look better by turning the red anchors into normal white anchors and adjusting them:
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Awesome maps though I hope this gets ranked soon

Thanks suggestion, but the present slider's shape is my favorite. sorry .

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-05-09T14:08:26+00:00

Hi ~
from m4m in my queue

[Hibari's Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - x:256 y:80 for avoid overlap with 00:08:187 (3) - ? if yes 00:10:187 (1) - x:48 y:156
00:14:187 (1) - x:284 y:60 for stacked with 00:12:187 (3) - ? better imo. if yes 00:15:187 (2) - x:32 y:144
00:30:187 - change finish better imo
00:42:687 (2) - x:428 y:240.better flow imo
01:03:187 (3) - for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/745912
01:38:937 (2) - ctrl+J?
01:45:187 (6) - x:304 y:344 better imo. if yes 01:46:187 (1) - x:96 y:160
01:57:937 - remove green point

[Niva's Hard]
00:18:187 (7) - NC for consistency
00:26:687 (4) - start from 00:26:562 - to follow vocal?
00:30:187 - change with finish?
00:39:562 (6) - 1 grid up for avoid spacing 1,14x?
01:03:312 (6) - spacing 1,14x?
01:05:562 (6) - spacing 1,13x?
01:18:187 (1) - ctrl+G better imo. you are cruel

01:20:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x?
01:26:937 (3) - spacing 1,26x is it itentional?
01:42:187 - remove green point
01:57:937 - remove green point
02:01:937 (3,1) - stacked?
02:04:562 (2) - x:148 y:352 for avoid spacing 1,14x too?
02:08:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x?
02:12:187 (1) - ^
02:10:937 (3) - ctrl+G?

[Insane]
00:31:187 (5) - NC?
seems fine ~

Nice map
sorry for poor mod orz
good luck ~

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-05-09T14:12:39+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hi ~
from m4m in my queue

[Insane]
00:31:187 (5) - NC? fixed!
seems fine ~

Nice map
sorry for poor mod orz
good luck ~

thanks m4m!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-05-10T09:05:40+00:00

Xinely wrote:
[Niva's Hard]
00:18:187 (7) - NC for consistency Oh nice one, fixed (:
00:26:687 (4) - start from 00:26:562 - to follow vocal? Err, I think it's obvious enough I'm following the instrument here o.o
00:30:187 - change with finish? I used finish only on section starts and before the break actually, won't be fitting if I added there (:
00:39:562 (6) - 1 grid up for avoid spacing 1,14x? Err, in fact it should be moved a bit downward actually o.o
01:03:312 (6) - spacing 1,14x?
01:05:562 (6) - spacing 1,13x?
01:18:187 (1) - ctrl+G better imo. you are cruel Done~
01:20:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x?
01:26:937 (3) - spacing 1,26x is it itentional?
01:42:187 - remove green point
01:57:937 - remove green point Not really necessary actually, but fixed both
02:01:937 (3,1) - stacked? a... Yes it's stacked already, I don't see a problem with this o.o
02:04:562 (2) - x:148 y:352 for avoid spacing 1,14x too?
02:08:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x? Oh, agree with this one, fixed~
02:12:187 (1) - ^
02:10:937 (3) - ctrl+G? Oh, I prefer as is

About spacing : I'm not really following the spacing 100% on some parts though, sometimes I sacrificed it a bit to get better aesthetics (00:48:062 (7,9) for example) - yep, it looks similar anyway and still very intuitive in any way while playing, thanks for modding though (:

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EDIT : I got cool suggestions from grumd via in-game PM, thanks grumd~ ~~I still doesn't feel really right with the 1/2 suggestion you gave on the rest part though >_<~~ but still great suggestions anyway (:

P o M u T a : My update below~

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hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-05-10T11:32:45+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hi ~
from m4m in my queue

[Hibari's Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - x:256 y:80 for avoid overlap with 00:08:187 (3) - ? if yes 00:10:187 (1) - x:48 y:156 there is Regularity of setting. sorry..
00:14:187 (1) - x:284 y:60 for stacked with 00:12:187 (3) - ? better imo. if yes 00:15:187 (2) - x:32 y:144 ok
00:30:187 - change finish better imo ok
00:42:687 (2) - x:428 y:240.better flow imo ok
01:03:187 (3) - for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/745912 Umm, this is not so beautiful too. sorry
01:38:937 (2) - ctrl+J? ^
01:45:187 (6) - x:304 y:344 better imo. if yes 01:46:187 (1) - x:96 y:160 ok
01:57:937 - remove green pointok

Nice map
sorry for poor mod orz
good luck ~

Thanks for modding! these are very useful!

CrystilonZ

1,559 posts

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2013-05-15T05:02:29+00:00

Hi M4m from my queue
too fast BPM

I can't mod much

General
Letterbox during brake pls. You didn't have storyboard

Hibari's Normal
Nothing to say

Insane
reduce 1/4 pls
BPM is 240 so 1/4 stream is too hard, I think

Niva's Hard
Reduce the jump, It is too hard for this diff.

Broccoly

1,359 posts

Joined May 2012

Broccoly 2013-05-15T09:01:27+00:00

hi.......... m4m............... sorry.. i was modding this for over an hour but an error occurred and my chrome just disappeared ....
so I-I-I...am very depressed....... please understand if my mod sounds curt. I usually explain reasons well.. It was really nice before.... haaa...... i'mma cry now..
Since the map is really good, most of my mods will be suggestions.

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5) - Ctrl + g? To make a jump to convey the musical stresses (that zappy bass sound) on the first notes of each stanza. imo they fit the music better + fun to play
For example:
00:04:187 (1) - ctrl + g
00:08:187 (1) - ctrl + g

00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - I recommend using circles in front and using repeat slider afterwards like this↙

(better readability without ruining the rhythm + plays well even for the first play)

01:03:687 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (nazi) try making this stream look better (you can uncheck grid snap to make it smoother)
01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I felt really uncomfortable moving from the first stack to the next one. I recommend placing them vertically, maybe like this ↓

01:18:187 (1,1) - (nazi) make them sexier hehe

(something like that..)

01:28:187 (1,2,1,2) - This overlap might be dangerous.. a bit hard to read. This might be better.

01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - These are fine, but this sudden emptiness might confuse the players. Try to think of some other ideas if possible.. maybe place them further apart?

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part doesn't play really well. Although I like this kind of pattern, it feels uncomfortable when playing. Maybe try reducing the spacing between slider couples. Try placing them like this too: 02:10:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - cuz these play well.

I'll come back and mod hard and normal some time this day.

[niva's hard]
00:02:687 (3,4) // 00:06:687 (3,4) - This sudden jump was really hard to read, even after I played it multiple times. I suggest refraining from jumps until the players learn how the song goes. (i.e. place jumps on latter parts of the song)
00:08:687 (3,4) - And since these are placed similar to the above jumps, it confuses the players.
00:16:687 (3,4) - ^similar situation. Try moving 4,5,6 a bit up alltogether
01:16:062 (7) - this overlap may be dangerous
01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels too easy suddenly, compared to the complex rhythm patterns before. How about making polygons with a little bit more distance snap? (Squares.etc)
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

[hibari's normal]
01:54:187 (1) - (nazi) add some white control points in between to make it more natural and look good

02:10:187 (2) - (nazi) pefect symmetry please.
nice normal

Ok. Hope this helps..
This mod took me 2 days orz.. I need to start saving my mods while doing it...
good luck! good map

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-05-15T11:31:36+00:00

Broccoly wrote:
hi.......... m4m............... sorry.. i was modding this for over an hour but an error occurred and my chrome just disappeared ....
so I-I-I...am very depressed....... please understand if my mod sounds curt. I usually explain reasons well.. It was really nice before.... haaa...... i'mma cry now..
Since the map is really good, most of my mods will be suggestions.

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5) - Ctrl + g? To make a jump to convey the musical stresses (that zappy bass sound) on the first notes of each stanza. imo they fit the music better + fun to play umm, DS use bettter for me.
For example:
00:04:187 (1) - ctrl + g ^
00:08:187 (1) - ctrl + g ^

00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - I recommend using circles in front and using repeat slider afterwards like this sorry, keep for now. keep better.

(better readability without ruining the rhythm + plays well even for the first play)

01:03:687 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (nazi) try making this stream look better (you can uncheck grid snap to make it smoother) umm, idk how to fix
01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I felt really uncomfortable moving from the first stack to the next one. I recommend placing them vertically, maybe like this ↓
No.

01:18:187 (1,1) - (nazi) make them sexier hehe i don't like many use point slider.

(something like that..)

01:28:187 (1,2,1,2) - This overlap might be dangerous.. a bit hard to read. This might be better. No problem, i hope perfect stack. but, hard read. so, i slipp bit.

01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - These are fine, but this sudden emptiness might confuse the players. Try to think of some other ideas if possible.. maybe place them further apart? umm, i cover from NC.no problem part.

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part doesn't play really well. Although I like this kind of pattern, it feels uncomfortable when playing. Maybe try reducing the spacing between slider couples. Try placing them like this too: 02:10:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - cuz these play well. Both No,not big DS. this is harder part. and very good flow

I'll come back and mod hard and normal some time this day.

Ok. Hope this helps..
This mod took me 2 days orz.. I need to start saving my mods while doing it...
good luck! good map

thanks~

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-05-15T11:34:41+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
Hi M4m from my queue
too fast BPM I can't mod much

General
Letterbox during brake pls. You didn't have storyboard i know. but, no change this.

Insane
reduce 1/4 pls
BPM is 240 so 1/4 stream is too hard, I think this is Insane. no problem this.

thanks~

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-05-15T11:38:01+00:00

Broccoly wrote:
hi.......... m4m............... sorry.. i was modding this for over an hour but an error occurred and my chrome just disappeared ....
so I-I-I...am very depressed....... please understand if my mod sounds curt. I usually explain reasons well.. It was really nice before.... haaa...... i'mma cry now..
Since the map is really good, most of my mods will be suggestions.

[hibari's normal]
01:54:187 (1) - (nazi) add some white control points in between to make it more natural and look goodok

02:10:187 (2) - (nazi) pefect symmetry please. It's looks perfect. I don't think it is a matter.
nice normal

Ok. Hope this helps..
This mod took me 2 days orz.. I need to start saving my mods while doing it...
good luck! good map

Thanks modding

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-05-15T12:57:20+00:00

Broccoly wrote:
[niva's hard]
00:02:687 (3,4) // 00:06:687 (3,4) - This sudden jump was really hard to read, even after I played it multiple times. I suggest refraining from jumps until the players learn how the song goes. (i.e. place jumps on latter parts of the song)
00:08:687 (3,4) - And since these are placed similar to the above jumps, it confuses the players. Uhm, I'm keeping as is...The jump is structured already imo + there's no complaints previously though~
00:16:687 (3,4) - ^similar situation. Try moving 4,5,6 a bit up alltogether Err, no jump here o.o - I altered (6) a bit though
01:16:062 (7) - this overlap may be dangerous Err, not really imo, fixed the imperfect stack though
01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels too easy suddenly, compared to the complex rhythm patterns before. How about making polygons with a little bit more distance snap? (Squares.etc)
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Err, it's intentional, the song gives constant 1/1 dominant bass sound here though (although there are fainting 1/2s but I can really barely hear ._.)

Thanks for mod (:

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Alumetorz

408 posts

Joined October 2011

Alumetorz 2013-05-15T16:47:08+00:00

modmdomdomdomdomdmddmomdomdmdomd

[General]

01:42:187 - This needs Kia Time imo

[Hibari's Normal]

I think the finishes are a little bit overused in this diff
00:34:187, 00:42:187, 00:50:187, 01:40:187, 01:58:187 and 02:14:187 - You used new timing points just to make a Soft Finish. In future try to use http://puu.sh/2U1eK.png (I don't think it's unrankable if you don't change it, but just want to point it out. It really saves a lot more time if you use this )
00:07:187 (2) - Whistle on end of the slider
00:17:187 (4) - Whistle on reverse
00:48:187 (4) - Whistle on end of the slider
01:02:687 (2) - Whistle (if you want to follow the pattern)
01:10:187 - Everything from here on is Soft Sample. Change to Drums?
01:35:187 (3) - Whistle
01:53:937 - Add Circle?

[Niva's Hard]

01:44:187 (1,2), 01:48:187 (1,2), 01:56:187 (1,2) - I think these sliders break the flow. Or it's just me, who doesn't like sliders which are reversed more often than once
Couldn't find anything else... Really nice map!

[Insane]

OD9 so hard with 240 bpm. I suggest reducing it by 1 D:
Some parts in this diff also overuse finishes imo. It may be annoying to me, because my skin has loud finishes, just want to point this out. I'd suggest to add custom finishes, which fit to the music...
Don't know if this was intentional or not, but your Insane Diff has only Default Drum Samples. I would change them to Custom1...
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Place this in the center?
Well that's all... Nice Diff. Very fun to play!

Sorry, I might have been a bit lazy... D:
Nice stuff!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-05-15T16:57:19+00:00

Alumetorz wrote:
modmdomdomdomdomdmddmomdomdmdomd

[General]
01:42:187 - This needs Kia Time imo i have many kiai times. so, keep for now :p
[Insane]
OD9 so hard with 240 bpm. I suggest reducing it by 1 D: don't worry,i think good staff.
Some parts in this diff also overuse finishes imo. It may be annoying to me, because my skin has loud finishes, just want to point this out. I'd suggest to add custom finishes, which fit to the music... oh.. if find, i will add.
Don't know if this was intentional or not, but your Insane Diff has only Default Drum Samples. I would change them to Custom1... oops, fixed
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Place this in the center? Overlaps before note ;w; keep!
Well that's all... Nice Diff. Very fun to play! thanks!
Sorry, I might have been a bit lazy... D:
Nice stuff!

thanks modding!

Erisan

375 posts

Joined August 2011

Erisan 2013-05-16T03:08:53+00:00

個人的なmodですので嫌なものは修正しなくて結構です(´・ω・｀)

mod数的に指摘点が少なくなってしまいましたがご了承ください。

MOD

-Normal-

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
ここの部分を

01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
ここのどちらか2つに合わせたほうがいいと思います。

01:54:187 (1) -
「R」の形をもうちょっと綺麗にしたほうがいいかもしれません。

-Insane-

00:11:937 (10) -
反転させるといいかもしれません

01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
形を整えたほうがいいかもしれません

完成度高くて驚きました(;ﾟДﾟ)

いい譜面ですね！
応援してます！

目指せランクド！

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-05-16T03:24:05+00:00

eLy wrote:
個人的なmodですので嫌なものは修正しなくて結構です(´・ω・｀)

mod数的に指摘点が少なくなってしまいましたがご了承ください。

-Insane-

00:11:937 (10) -
反転させるといいかもしれません nice suggestionです！

01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
形を整えたほうがいいかもしれませんこの連打カッコイイと思っているので現状保留でいきますｗ

完成度高くて驚きました(;ﾟДﾟ)

いい譜面ですね！
応援してます！

目指せランクド！

modありがとうです！

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-05-16T12:44:53+00:00

Alumetorz wrote:
modmdomdomdomdomdmddmomdomdmdomd

[Hibari's Normal]
I think the finishes are a little bit overused in this diff
00:34:187, 00:42:187, 00:50:187, 01:40:187, 01:58:187 and 02:14:187 - You used new timing points just to make a Soft Finish. In future try to use http://puu.sh/2U1eK.png (I don't think it's unrankable if you don't change it, but just want to point it out. It really saves a lot more time if you use this )
I want to be carefully next time.
00:07:187 (2) - Whistle on end of the slider
00:17:187 (4) - Whistle on reverse
00:48:187 (4) - Whistle on end of the slider
01:02:687 (2) - Whistle (if you want to follow the pattern)
01:10:187 - Everything from here on is Soft Sample. Change to Drums? Sound of the music is cleary changed. I want to change hit sound same as it.
01:35:187 (3) - Whistle
01:53:937 - Add Circle?need not, and will be more difficult.

Sorry, I might have been a bit lazy... D:
Nice stuff!

eLy wrote:
個人的なmodですので嫌なものは修正しなくて結構です(´・ω・｀)

mod数的に指摘点が少なくなってしまいましたがご了承ください。

MOD
-Normal-

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
ここの部分を

01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
ここのどちらか2つに合わせたほうがいいと思います。
ごめんなさい。今まで同じような指摘を一度も受けていませんので、このままでも良いと思っています。段々盛り上がっていく感じ？ですかね。

01:54:187 (1) -
「R」の形をもうちょっと綺麗にしたほうがいいかもしれません。
前の形に戻しました。

完成度高くて驚きました(;ﾟДﾟ)

いい譜面ですね！
応援してます！

目指せランクド！

Thanks for modding!!!

Asphyxia

Beatmap Nominator

2,001 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2013-10-24T16:33:31+00:00

Hey, you requested a mod with forum pm so here I am!

[General thoughts]

Well, this mapset could use an easy difficulty to be more ''friendly'' I suppose but that's really up to you.

[Insane]

Gotta agree, OD9 is pretty rough here with 240 bpm, consider lowering it by one tick :s
This map has some overlaps that I dislike, gonna point out the overlaps while I'm going through it. Imo they're quite unnecessary so change if you want
00:03:187 (5,7) - ^
00:16:187 (1,2) - Make a proper blanket, abusing the DS isn't that dangerous to make a proper blanket, right?
00:28:437 (2,3) - Overlaps
00:32:187 (1,3) - ^
00:38:187 (1,2) - You could improve this blanket
00:44:062 (4,1) - Overlaps
00:57:812 (9,10) - ^
01:12:187 (1,2) - Not perfect blankets, could be improved
01:26:562 (2) - Overlaps, do something like this to prevent it?
Example
02:01:687 (1,2) - Overlaps
Fine otherwise

[Niva's Hard]

Maybe +1 OD?
00:04:187 (1,3) - Overlap between these is very ugly, it even shows while playing, just for the suggestion I'd recommend to do an upcurve instead?
00:14:187 (1,3) - ^, but now do a downcurve ?
00:17:687 (6) - Why this overlap? I'd recommend doing something like this since it creates a cool blanket also
Example
00:26:687 (4,5) - Incorrect blanket, move (4)'s slider's middlepoint 1 grid up to make a better one?
01:02:187 (1,3) - Again this overlap
01:49:187 (2,1) - IMO unnecessary overlap
Loved this diff, great job :3

[Hibari's Normal]

+1 OD if the creator of hard agrees to +1 OD aswell? It would make the diff spread more equal then.
01:54:187 (1) - This slider could and SHOULD be symmetrical, it just looks stupid now because it isn't
Loved this diff, no problems for me atleast except the ^

That's all I could find, best of luck with this mapset =)

edit: 300th post lol

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-10-25T08:34:49+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
Hey, you requested a mod with forum pm so here I am! hey

[General thoughts]

Well, this mapset could use an easy difficulty to be more ''friendly'' I suppose but that's really up to you.
[Insane]

Gotta agree, OD9 is pretty rough here with 240 bpm, consider lowering it by one tick :s okay 9→8
This map has some overlaps that I dislike, gonna point out the overlaps while I'm going through it. Imo they're quite unnecessary so change if you want
00:03:187 (5,7) - ^
00:16:187 (1,2) - Make a proper blanket, abusing the DS isn't that dangerous to make a proper blanket, right?
00:28:437 (2,3) - Overlaps
00:32:187 (1,3) - ^ fixed!
00:38:187 (1,2) - You could improve this blanket
00:44:062 (4,1) - Overlaps
00:57:812 (9,10) - ^
01:12:187 (1,2) - Not perfect blankets, could be improved
01:26:562 (2) - Overlaps, do something like this to prevent it?
Example
02:01:687 (1,2) - Overlaps
Fine otherwise
overlaps no changed. I do not think that a look is awfully bad.

That's all I could find, best of luck with this mapset =)

edit: 300th post lol nice man

thanks modding

The determination of the OD was very effective

.

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2013-10-26T00:51:08+00:00

Oh Renard o_O
From M4M

[Insane]
00:40:124 (5) - Delete this
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think this stream is hard to read the rhythm

Hmmm.. Just Good Map
I can' t find more problem ;ㅅ;
GL!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-10-26T01:06:13+00:00

Lolicore_Komari wrote:
Oh Renard o_O
From M4M

[Insane]
00:40:124 (5) - Delete this fixed.
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think this stream is hard to read the rhythm umm?

Hmmm.. Just Good Map
I can' t find more problem ;ㅅ;
GL!

thanks modding

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-10-26T16:50:19+00:00

Alumetorz wrote:
[Niva's Hard]
01:44:187 (1,2), 01:48:187 (1,2), 01:56:187 (1,2) - I think these sliders break the flow. Or it's just me, who doesn't like sliders which are reversed more often than once Umm, this is intended for the less hectic part actually, should be fine :3
Couldn't find anything else... Really nice map! Thank you~

Asphyxia wrote:
[Niva's Hard]

Maybe +1 OD?
00:04:187 (1,3) - Overlap between these is very ugly, it even shows while playing, just for the suggestion I'd recommend to do an upcurve instead? Ah, yes, these patterns (including the next ones) are intentional, actually~
00:14:187 (1,3) - ^, but now do a downcurve ?
00:17:687 (6) - Why this overlap? I'd recommend doing something like this since it creates a cool blanket also Yep, your pattern would do here but I did this solely for variation actually xD
Example
00:26:687 (4,5) - Incorrect blanket, move (4)'s slider's middlepoint 1 grid up to make a better one? Readjusted the whole slider (:
01:02:187 (1,3) - Again this overlap
01:49:187 (2,1) - IMO unnecessary overlap Fixed
Loved this diff, great job :3 Thank you!

Thanks both for the mods (:

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hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-10-27T09:50:42+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
[Hibari's Normal]

+1 OD if the creator of hard agrees to +1 OD aswell? It would make the diff spread more equal then.ok
01:54:187 (1) - This slider could and SHOULD be symmetrical, it just looks stupid now because it isn't I like Renard "R" sorry,skip
Loved this diff, no problems for me atleast except the ^
That's all I could find, best of luck with this mapset =)

edit: 300th post lol ctz!

Thanks modding DX

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-10-27T14:49:14+00:00

updated.
and add tag 'pomuta' all diff

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-10-28T03:02:10+00:00

from my queue
I think you can add a silence soft-sliderslide
[Hibari's Normal]
01:09:187 (1) - add a fin?
[Niva's Hard]
00:14:687 (3) - try to move 234 to make it on 00:14:187 (1) - 's end?
00:30:187 (1) - it seems that it touches the scorebar
00:40:062 (7) - NC?
00:44:062 (7) - ^
01:02:687 (3) - the same as 00:14:687 (3)
01:18:937 (3) - stack with 01:18:562 (2) - 's end?
01:43:687 (4) - it seems that it touches the scorebar
[Insane]
00:15:937 (11) - add a whis
00:35:562 (2) - add a s-fin
00:39:562 (2) - ^
00:43:562 (2) - ^
00:47:687 (3) - ^
00:53:187 (8) - NC?
00:57:312 (2,9) - add a whis
01:03:687 (7) - ^
01:05:187 (1,7,9,10) - ^
01:59:687 (1,2) - ctrl+g?

funny map~
good luck for rank

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2013-10-28T06:35:46+00:00

Hi pomuta :p

just leave a star here and I will be back.

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-10-28T08:25:24+00:00

sjoy wrote:
from my queue
I think you can add a silence soft-sliderslide
[Hibari's Normal]
01:09:187 (1) - add a fin? Sorry, I'd like to use low sound HS.

funny map~
good luck for rank

Thanks modding!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-10-28T08:42:38+00:00

sjoy wrote:
from my queue
I think you can add a silence soft-sliderslide i think not need silence :p.
[Insane]
00:15:937 (11) - add a whis ok
00:35:562 (2) - add a s-fin
00:39:562 (2) - ^
00:43:562 (2) - ^
00:47:687 (3) - ^ sorry, Finish spam all part! not add~.and, i used vocal part(finish)
00:53:187 (8) - NC? keep for now.
00:57:312 (2,9) - add a whis ok
01:03:687 (7) - ^ ok
01:05:187 (1,7,9,10) - ^ ok
01:59:687 (1,2) - ctrl+g? no. i played but confused play orz.

funny map~ thanks
good luck for rank

thanks modding ~!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-10-28T08:44:02+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Hi pomuta :p

just leave a star here and I will be back.

Hi O.O/!! Roger

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-10-28T10:01:21+00:00

sjoy wrote:
[Niva's Hard]
00:14:687 (3) - try to move 234 to make it on 00:14:187 (1) - 's end? Ah, this pattern is intentional
00:30:187 (1) - it seems that it touches the scorebar Moved lower, shouldn't be anymore now...
00:40:062 (7) - NC?
00:44:062 (7) - ^ Oh, nice catch here - done~
01:02:687 (3) - the same as 00:14:687 (3)
01:18:937 (3) - stack with 01:18:562 (2) - 's end Ah, these two is intentional as well
01:43:687 (4) - it seems that it touches the scorebar Moved lower

Thanks sjoy (:

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BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-10-28T11:59:53+00:00

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

-The hitsounds go under in this powerful song, you should up the volume a little more.

Normal

Your comboing is sometimes long sometimes short. Make it short though, it's better for easier diffs.

01:10:187 - The patterns you make are from here very repetetive. It's always the same and gets boring. Why not making some different patterns as well. Relating not only to the bass kicks.

Everything else is fine. Nice difficultie!

Hard

The difficultie is very close to Insane. I find it a too big jump from Normal to Hard in hardness. Can't change it anymore but just mentioning. It's a nice difficultie though.

00:07:937 (7,1) - I think this jump is not needed, but that's your decision if you make the spacing normal.
Like on Normal, 01:09:187 - 01:40:187 - is very repetetive. You could of mapped a little to the vocal as well. 30 secs of the same rythm is very long.
01:33:937 (6,7) - Compared to the other double circles, this is a little big jump wise. Maybe move it closer so it is the same with the others.

Insane

00:03:187 (5,7) - The 1/2 slider is very hidden and can't be seen good. Move it further away so its visible.
01:18:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , 01:37:312 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You combo pattern changes from long to short. Keep only 1 kind of pattern not both unless it really fits.
01:28:187 (1,1) - , 01:42:187 - (Same on this part) Due to the first slider not being fully dissapeared when playing, the 2nd slider cant be seen good. You need to move them different so they are both visible.
02:14:187 (1) - I dont think a 1/8 circle is playable. You should make the slider 1 repeat longer and remove the circle or you make the repeating of the slider shorter. Maybe its no 1/8 but due to the BPM it plays like one.

Due to the high BPM, i can't say much. That's all. Good luck.

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-10-28T12:11:12+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

-The hitsounds go under in this powerful song, you should up the volume a little more. all 80%

Insane

00:03:187 (5,7) - The 1/2 slider is very hidden and can't be seen good. Move it further away so its visible. people can this part. so, playable.
01:18:187 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - , 01:37:312 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You combo pattern changes from long to short. Keep only 1 kind of pattern not both unless it really fits. umm,I made that easy to understand.
01:28:187 (1,1) - , 01:42:187 - (Same on this part) Due to the first slider not being fully dissapeared when playing, the 2nd slider cant be seen good. You need to move them different so they are both visible. people testplayed,but,pass this part. no problem.
02:14:187 (1) - I dont think a 1/8 circle is playable. You should make the slider 1 repeat longer and remove the circle or you make the repeating of the slider shorter. Maybe its no 1/8 but due to the BPM it plays like one. umm? this is 1/4 and before slider same 1/4

Due to the high BPM, i can't say much. That's all. Good luck.

thanks for modding!

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-10-28T13:22:04+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue!

General

-The hitsounds go under in this powerful song, you should up the volume a little more. keep

Normal

Your comboing is sometimes long sometimes short. Make it short though, it's better for easier diffs.

01:10:187 - The patterns you make are from here very repetetive. It's always the same and gets boring. Why not making some different patterns as well. Relating not only to the bass kicks. I make this part more and more difficult, spending the time. And this catching beat is better.

Everything else is fine. Nice difficultie!

Due to the high BPM, i can't say much. That's all. Good luck.

Thanks!

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-10-30T11:08:24+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hard

The difficultie is very close to Insane. I find it a too big jump from Normal to Hard in hardness. Can't change it anymore but just mentioning. It's a nice difficultie though. I've been aware of this, actually...

00:07:937 (7,1) - I think this jump is not needed, but that's your decision if you make the spacing normal. (5,7,1)'s spacing should be more consistent and neat now
Like on Normal, 01:09:187 - 01:40:187 - is very repetetive. You could of mapped a little to the vocal as well. 30 secs of the same rythm is very long. Again I'm aware of this, however it's already solid as is (leaving as is for now o.o)
01:33:937 (6,7) - Compared to the other double circles, this is a little big jump wise. Maybe move it closer so it is the same with the others I can't move it really low because of that encircle pattern, orz... I did move it a bit lower and did something more plausible here though, thanks for the inspiration :3

Sorry for late reply, thanks for mod!

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135,195,107687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,113,107937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
0,63,108187,6,0,P|75:71|135:42,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,109187,2,0,P|242:123|175:123,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,71,110187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,110437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
314,251,110687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,339,110937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
189,384,111187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
193,293,111437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,199,111687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,107,111937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
137,38,112187,6,0,P|206:63|271:48,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,147,112687,2,0,L|337:146,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,237,113187,2,0,L|175:238,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,346,113687,2,0,P|306:321|242:335,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,381,114187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
375,346,114437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,265,114687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,181,114937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
414,124,115187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,154,115437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,144,115687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,83,115937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,3,116187,6,0,L|85:151,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,264,117187,2,0,L|3:116,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,347,118187,6,0,B|46:357|80:334|80:334|151:335,1,140,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,367,118562,2,0,P|285:379|344:343,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,269,118937,2,0,L|360:192,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,131,119187,6,0,P|354:169|274:154,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,144,119562,2,0,B|149:145|149:145|107:166|63:142,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,72,119937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
110,72,120062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,227,120187,6,0,B|236:227|236:227|271:253|317:251,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,120562,2,0,L|366:148,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,112,120937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
449,39,121062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,39,121187,6,0,B|318:39|318:39|269:61|229:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,131,121562,2,0,B|216:128|188:110|188:110|106:111,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
62,253,122187,6,0,P|71:336|114:371,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,290,122562,2,0,B|189:291|189:291|232:313|276:289,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,218,122937,2,0,L|241:133,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,112,123187,6,0,P|242:116|186:78,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,14,123562,2,0,L|159:174,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,211,123937,2,0,L|76:136,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,246,124187,6,0,P|77:239|156:278,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,349,124562,2,0,P|171:285|231:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,162,124937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,78,125062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,11,125187,6,0,P|213:46|288:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,17,125562,2,0,B|408:17|408:17|458:40|501:17,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,143,125937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
483,143,126187,6,0,L|472:285,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,361,126562,2,0,P|462:314|389:307,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,126937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
326,260,127062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,297,127187,6,0,P|181:310|111:273,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,347,127562,2,0,L|90:192,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,97,127937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,97,128062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,134,128187,6,0,P|234:147|304:115,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,128562,2,0,L|328:202,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,256,128937,2,0,L|411:187,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,329,129187,6,0,B|386:351|350:318|350:318|293:318,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,355,129562,2,0,P|170:374|103:332,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,192,129937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
38,192,130187,6,0,L|181:192,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,130562,2,0,P|209:197|239:119,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,84,130937,2,0,L|306:14,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,128,131187,6,0,P|401:198|379:257,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,321,131562,2,0,P|373:287|303:297,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,131937,2,0,L|156:256,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,302,132187,6,0,P|25:317|-34:267,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,234,132562,2,0,B|63:168|63:168|39:98,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,4,132937,2,0,L|126:70,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,139,133187,6,0,P|256:161|323:138,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,71,133562,2,0,L|352:233,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,270,133937,2,0,L|437:192,2,70,10|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-11-20T10:00:42+00:00

Insane diff improvement and uploaded.
Wait BAT NOW ;_;

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-11-29T12:11:26+00:00

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-11-29T12:15:51+00:00

thanks really much Frostmourne

Sayuki Fujimi

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Sayuki Fujimi 2013-12-07T02:44:09+00:00

Your .mp3 file isn't a bit too loud ?

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-12-07T02:48:02+00:00

Popped due to the spread of the mapset.
Another difficulty between Normal and Hard is necessary, the jump between those two difficulties is way too high.

Confirmed with other modders and a team member.

terametis

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terametis 2013-12-07T07:07:25+00:00

in-game request
[Hard]

01:12:187 (1) - ドッドって音フォローしたほうがいいと思います
01:14:062 (6) - この音消した方が01:14:187 (7,8,9,10) - あたりの歌詞フォローしたところに移行しやすいかなあって感じはします。↑変えるなら、01:13:187 (4) - をリバースにして適当に移動して、こんな感じの音取りにしたらたぶんプレイはしやすいです。
SPOILER
01:39:687 (3) - 01:40:187のfinishつく部分はサークルで叩きたい音かなって感じます。適当に弄って叩けるような音取りとか配置にしたらどうだろう
01:57:937 (2) - ここのwhistle外すと01:58:187 (1) - のfinishへの溜めみたいになって個人的には好きです

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-12-07T07:13:23+00:00

terametis wrote:
in-game request
[Hard]
01:12:187 (1) - ドッドって音フォローしたほうがいいと思います
01:14:062 (6) - この音消した方が01:14:187 (7,8,9,10) - あたりの歌詞フォローしたところに移行しやすいかなあって感じはします。↑変えるなら、01:13:187 (4) - をリバースにして適当に移動して、こんな感じの音取りにしたらたぶんプレイはしやすいです。
SPOILER
01:39:687 (3) - 01:40:187のfinishつく部分はサークルで叩きたい音かなって感じます。適当に弄って叩けるような音取りとか配置にしたらどうだろう
01:57:937 (2) - ここのwhistle外すと01:58:187 (1) - のfinishへの溜めみたいになって個人的には好きです

all done thanks!!

Guy

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Guy 2013-12-07T07:15:02+00:00

Hi! from your request :3

[Hard]

00:36:687 (2) - 音取りの提案　このパートはボーカルを取っているパターンが多いのでこんな感じにしてみては？
00:44:687 (2) - 上記と同じです。
01:24:562 (6) - 終端にwhistle忘れ？
01:34:062 (6) - ここもwhistle入れると合う気がします。

Good luck

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-12-07T07:19:58+00:00

Guy wrote:
Hi! from your request :3

[Hard]
00:36:687 (2) - 音取りの提案　このパートはボーカルを取っているパターンが多いのでこんな感じにしてみては？

00:44:687 (2) - 上記と同じです。

01:24:562 (6) - 終端にwhistle忘れ？
01:34:062 (6) - ここもwhistle入れると合う気がします。
Good luck

all done. thanks!

Moway

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Moway 2013-12-07T07:57:14+00:00

Hi

[Hard]

00:30:187 (1) - (358,115) for a better blanket
01:05:687 (5,6) - spacing here probably isn't so good, because the 2.0x spacing with the 1/2 separation between the sliders makes it look like it should be 1/1 separation. Fix this to be 1.0x spacing for consistency.
01:10:562 (2,3) - stack fix
01:11:562 (5,6) - stack fix
01:14:687 (2,3) - delete these two circles and add a slider at 01:14:562 that ends at 01:14:937. This will put a slider on the bass, which is what you have been doing in this diff.
01:20:187 (5) - NC
01:24:187 (5) - NC
01:32:562 (2,3) - stack fix
01:36:187 (5) - NC

Spread doesn't look too bad to me, not sure if you've done work on it since it was popped or not.

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-12-07T08:13:24+00:00

Moway wrote:
Hi

[Hard]

00:30:187 (1) - (358,115) for a better blanket
01:05:687 (5,6) - spacing here probably isn't so good, because the 2.0x spacing with the 1/2 separation between the sliders makes it look like it should be 1/1 separation. Fix this to be 1.0x spacing for consistency.
01:10:562 (2,3) - stack fix
01:11:562 (5,6) - stack fix
01:14:687 (2,3) - delete these two circles and add a slider at 01:14:562 that ends at 01:14:937. This will put a slider on the bass, which is what you have been doing in this diff.
01:20:187 (5) - NC
01:24:187 (5) - NC
01:32:562 (2,3) - stack fix
01:36:187 (5) - NC

Spread doesn't look too bad to me, not sure if you've done work on it since it was popped or not.

all fixed. but, stack fix... your suggestd added. but, last two stack 0.01 now :-)
thanks your help!

Niva

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Niva 2013-12-07T16:05:10+00:00

Moway wrote:
Spread doesn't look too bad to me, not sure if you've done work on it since it was popped or not.

My Insane diff was the Hard diff when it was bubbled back then btw, this Hard diff is brand new to balance the set~

(to P o M u T a : I'll try to get some modders to check the new Hard as well, though :3)

ToGlette

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ToGlette 2013-12-07T16:31:38+00:00

oops wrong post XP supposed to click preview, accidentally clicked post XP

Last edited by ToGlette 2013-12-07T16:33:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ToGlette

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ToGlette 2013-12-07T16:32:20+00:00

IRC

01:13 ToGlette: mazu
01:13 ToGlette: 00:28:187
01:14 ToGlette: koko no nagai slider 2tu arujya naidesuka
01:14 P o M u T a: un
01:14 ToGlette: kore wo 4tu ni waketara doudesuka?
01:15 P o M u T a: saisyo no 1,2,3,4 no oto to awaseteru
01:19 ToGlette: ok XD
01:20 P o M u T a: nanka miss toka areba dondon itte kudasai
01:20 P o M u T a: 1ko demo naoseba 十分
01:22 ToGlette: http://puu.sh/5F1o9.jpg
01:22 ToGlette: konna kanji wa doudesuka?
01:22 P o M u T a: dokodesu?
01:23 ToGlette: 01:52:187
01:23 P o M u T a: aa, anmari jump irenai youni sitaidesu
01:23 P o M u T a: ii haiti desuga
01:23 P o M u T a: gomen desu
01:23 ToGlette: ok
01:24 ToGlette: 02:07:187
01:24 ToGlette: koko no 12 34 desuga
01:24 ToGlette: 13 24 ni shitemitara doudesu?
01:25 ToGlette: 02:09:187
01:25 ToGlette: koko mo desu
01:27 P o M u T a: iidesune XD
01:27 P o M u T a: naosimasita!!
01:27 ToGlette: kore de zenbudesune
01:27 P o M u T a: yariyasuika yarinikuika itido sokodake test mode onegaisimasu
01:27 P o M u T a: arigatou gozaimasu!!
01:27 ToGlette: imadesuka?
01:27 P o M u T a: hai!
01:28 ToGlette: mondai naidesu
01:28 P o M u T a: aridesu!
01:30 ToGlette: XD
01:30 ToGlette: post shimasune

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-12-07T16:53:19+00:00

thanks ToGlette for IRC modding! and Niva thanks help

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2013-12-08T05:55:40+00:00

Hi by Niva request~

[Hard]
00:06:937 (2) - Add whistle? maybe you forget, because it has same rhythm as this one 00:14:937 (2) -
00:35:937 (6,1,2) - That one a bit confuse to play, and doesn't looks so good imo
00:36:187 (1) - Add finish on head? maybe you forget
For keep consistency, why not add soft sample finish in these following head, 01:46:187 (1) - and 01:50:187 (1) -
02:00:687 (3,4,5,6) - It doesn't sounds so good, why not you following this one for keep consistency hitsounding 02:04:687 (2,3,4,5,6) -

That's all, the rest seems ok for me
Good luck

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-12-08T06:03:16+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hi by Niva request~

[Hard]
00:06:937 (2) - Add whistle? maybe you forget, because it has same rhythm as this one 00:14:937 (2) - ok
00:35:937 (6,1,2) - That one a bit confuse to play, and doesn't looks so good imo (6,1) is seems better. also, (1,2) is seems better. result, flow better. no changed
00:36:187 (1) - Add finish on head? maybe you forget ok
For keep consistency, why not add soft sample finish in these following head, 01:46:187 (1) - and 01:50:187 (1) - umm, i think not need, but fixed.
02:00:687 (3,4,5,6) - It doesn't sounds so good, why not you following this one for keep consistency hitsounding 02:04:687 (2,3,4,5,6) - sorry keep sound.

That's all, the rest seems ok for me
Good luck

あ(・∀・)り(・∀・)が(・∀・)と(・∀・)う！

Avena

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Avena 2013-12-08T16:34:35+00:00

To be honest, the current BG is a bit too bland and boring, not to mention that the artwork looks a bit old and the colors aren't so great.
Try using one of the following, I know they were used in Smoke Tower and Why am I So Angry, but these two are graveyarded.
Also, you will need to resize it, I can't resize atm because my computer will explode once I open photoshop, so message me ingame if you can't do it by your own ^^
http://wallpapers.wallbase.cc/manga-ani ... 997236.jpg
http://wallpapers.wallbase.cc/rozne/wal ... 520554.jpg

Simple version if you struggle with the english:
The background isn't really good, try what I gave you if you want to.

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-12-08T19:32:30+00:00

bg no thanks

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-12-25T09:17:06+00:00

magic.