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Bajofondo - Pa' Bailar

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sexta-feira, 8 de fevereiro de 2013 at 21:30:17

Artist: Bajofondo
Title: Pa' Bailar
Tags: Tango Mar Dulce MystykAMV
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4062kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,13 stars, 346 notes)
  2. MystykAMV's Insane (4,93 stars, 489 notes)
  3. Normal (2,52 stars, 232 notes)
Download: Bajofondo - Pa' Bailar
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my first ranked beatmap. Thank you for playing!

This song was used in the opening of a very popular TV drama in Brazil called A Favorita.

Insane was made by Mystyk.

I'd also like to give a huge shoutout to narakucrimson (former BAT member) for making this happen, and to actually listen to a request for help from a total random and unexperienced user. We need more people like him in this community. Unfortunately 90% of BNs and NATs are filled with close-minded and biased people who won't do sh*t for newcomers and will expect you to be the president of the USA at least once as a requirement before you can actually be able to receive a mod from them.
Last edited by 787B , edited 83 times in total.
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hi~

Normal:

00:14:752 (1) - Though this is the first note, Adding a Finish at the start will be nice to also follow your patterns
01:10:432 (3) - Delete Finish at the start
01:30:352 (1) - Make the end a whistle to follow your pattern
01:45:472 (1) - I think ending at 01:46:912 with a Finish will be better, since this is a Normal
02:15:712 (2) - Consider deleting Finish
02:21:472 (1) - The overlap with 02:19:552 (1) not looks good.. imo
02:32:992 (4) - Place somewhere else, like (348,240)
03:32:992 (3) - This ryhthm doesn't sounds perfect for me.. Reduce the slider with 1/2, and add a note at 03:34:432
03:36:352 (4) - Similar suggestion with above
03:55:552 (1,1,1) - Intention to emphasize these? Well.. rather making just a one combo will be ok too

Hard:

-- Slider velocity being more higher would be better.. Imo

01:15:472 (3,4,5,1) - 1 Grid right for space consistency between (2,3)
01:19:552 (7) - Delete Finish, it sounds rather annoying to me..
01:27:232 (7) - ^
01:43:072 (5) - NC? The term is too long
02:29:152 (1) - I prefer to make this spinner as a slider or something.
02:30:592 (1) - You forgot an NC here
03:01:672 (4,5) - 1 Grid right? Well make the distance consistently anyways
03:31:552 (3) - Add Clap at the middle
03:46:552 (3) - Deleting this may be better, then respace (2)

Fine map afterall~
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~

Normal:

00:14:752 (1) - Though this is the first note, Adding a Finish at the start will be nice to also follow your patterns Added
01:10:432 (3) - Delete Finish at the start Something's wrong, it doesn't show a finish hitsound in here, but I agree in deleting it.
01:30:352 (1) - Make the end a whistle to follow your pattern Added
01:45:472 (1) - I think ending at 01:46:912 with a Finish will be better, since this is a Normal Done
02:15:712 (2) - Consider deleting Finish Deleted, thanks.
02:21:472 (1) - The overlap with 02:19:552 (1) not looks good.. imo Fixed, thanks for that!
02:32:992 (4) - Place somewhere else, like (348,240) Moved, thanks.
03:32:992 (3) - This ryhthm doesn't sounds perfect for me.. Reduce the slider with 1/2, and add a note at 03:34:432 I'll keep this one for a little while, if someone else complains about it I'll change it.
03:36:352 (4) - Similar suggestion with above Same answer o3o
03:55:552 (1,1,1) - Intention to emphasize these? Well.. rather making just a one combo will be ok too I'll keep it because it matches with final kiais

Hard:

-- Slider velocity being more higher would be better.. Imo Will think about it, thanks.

01:15:472 (3,4,5,1) - 1 Grid right for space consistency between (2,3) Fixed, thank you sir.
01:19:552 (7) - Delete Finish, it sounds rather annoying to me.. Deleted.
01:27:232 (7) - ^ Deleted.
01:43:072 (5) - NC? The term is too long Done.
02:29:152 (1) - I prefer to make this spinner as a slider or something. Fixed, thanks!
02:30:592 (1) - You forgot an NC here Don't need since I fixed with your suggestion above.
03:01:672 (4,5) - 1 Grid right? Well make the distance consistently anyways Fixed, thanks!
03:31:552 (3) - Add Clap at the middle Forgot this one, thanks!
03:46:552 (3) - Deleting this may be better, then respace (2) Deleted.

Fine map afterall~ Thanks!
Finally first mod, thank you very much for that, have a nice day~
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
oie x3

[Normal]
01:10:432 (3) - esse slider soa esquisito D: eu diminuiria ele 1/2 e adicionaria uma nota em 01:11:872 (4). e por favor tira a clap em 01:11:392 ><
01:41:152 (3) - isso não é bem necessáario, mas eu mudaria de placemente esse slider e manteria o pattern dos dois ultimos. mas ce quem sabe
02:20:512 (5,6) - distance snap
02:40:672 (1,1,1,1) - break entre esses sliders pros newbis
03:20:992 (3) - esse slider soa estranho também D: diminui ele em 1/2 e add uma nota em 03:22:432 (4)
02:31:552 (2,3,4) - distance snap
03:09:232 (1,2) - distance snap
03:10:912 (2) - ^
03:14:272 (4) - ^
e bom, depois desse ponto tu teve um monte de problemas de nao usar distance snap D: checa eles e arruma pf <3

gente, como assim a SV do seu Hard é mais baixa que a do normal? D: arruma isso (e a distance snap tá baixa demaisss). depois que isso tiver pronto me chama pra um recheck
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Wiinter wrote:

oie x3

[Normal]
01:10:432 (3) - esse slider soa esquisito D: eu diminuiria ele 1/2 e adicionaria uma nota em 01:11:872 (4). e por favor tira a clap em 01:11:392 Não tem clap nesse tempo hm, e a respeito do slider, eu vou deixar porque acho que o tick rate faz juz a batida da música o3o
01:41:152 (3) - isso não é bem necessáario, mas eu mudaria de placemente esse slider e manteria o pattern dos dois ultimos. mas ce quem sabe Vou deixar por enquanto.
02:20:512 (5,6) - distance snap Fixed.
02:40:672 (1,1,1,1) - break entre esses sliders pros newbis Added Breaks
03:20:992 (3) - esse slider soa estranho também D: diminui ele em 1/2 e add uma nota em 03:22:432 (4) Vou deixar ele por enquato também.
02:31:552 (2,3,4) - distance snap Fixed
03:09:232 (1,2) - distance snap Fixed
03:10:912 (2) - ^ Fixed
03:14:272 (4) - ^ Fixed
e bom, depois desse ponto tu teve um monte de problemas de nao usar distance snap D: checa eles e arruma pf <3 Valeu. Eu tava usando o distance snap 1.0, quando devia ser 0.8. Obrigado por me lembrar disso!

gente, como assim a SV do seu Hard é mais baixa que a do normal? D: arruma isso (e a distance snap tá baixa demaisss). depois que isso tiver pronto me chama pra um recheck Mudei praticamente tudo no hard. Obrigado!
Pronto pra recheck~
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
log do recheck:

SPOILER
16:08 Wolf: Olá. Eu arrumei as coisas lá no map. Quando você tiver tempo pode dar recheck~
16:09 Wolf: Obrigado
16:15 Wiinter: manda np ai
16:15 *Wolf is watching Bajofondo - Pa' Bailar [Hard] +Hidden +DoubleTime |Autoplay|
16:19 Wiinter: pode ser irc mod?
16:19 Wolf: Claro
16:20 Wiinter: 00:30:112 (6)- new combo
16:20 Wolf: Hmm, e porque tem o spin depois, mas tem problema o combo ser só de 1?
16:21 Wiinter: não tem problema :p
16:21 Wolf: Senão eu mudo
16:21 Wolf: Ok
16:21 Wiinter: eu acho melhor colocar o new combo ali pq o ritmo muda
16:22 Wiinter: 01:22:432 (4)- esse slider soa esquisito
16:23 Wolf: Vou mudar. thx
16:23 Wiinter: muda ele pra isso http://puu.sh/1CMQS e coloca uma nova em 01:23:872 (1)-
16:23 Wiinter: e coloca new combo nessa nota e tira em 01:24:352 (2)-
16:23 Wolf: Ah ok
16:23 Wiinter: eu colocaria uma nota aqui 01:30:832 (4)-
16:24 Wiinter: 01:46:192 (1)- new combo
16:24 Wolf: 01:30:832- vou deixar sem nada por enquanto
16:24 Wolf: E ok
16:25 Wiinter: o overlap com o slider ficou feio :c 03:02:992 (6)-
16:26 Wiinter: se eu fosse vc deixava tipo assim http://puu.sh/1CMUr
16:26 Wolf: Ah, beleza
16:27 Wiinter: eu colocaria duas notas aqui 03:10:192 (3,4)-
16:27 Wiinter: 03:15:232 (1)- eu aumentaria esse slider até a tick branca D: soa esquisito na azul
16:28 Wolf: Ok
16:28 Wiinter: e daí tira a nota que tem em 03:16:192 (2)-, obviamente
16:29 Wiinter: coloca um slider 1/2 aqui 03:23:632 (3)- e dai tira a nota em 03:23:872-
16:29 Wolf: Sim sim
16:30 Wiinter: 03:42:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13)- essa stream tá muuy comprida
16:30 Wolf: Então, aehauehuaheu
16:30 Wolf: Eu não sei fazer stream af :c
16:30 Wolf: Tipo
16:30 Wiinter: se eu fosse vc tirava umas notas ali no meio e colocaria aqueles sliders 1/4 com repeat, sabe?
16:30 Wolf: Eu pensei em comprimir, mas ai teria que diminuir a distance snap, isso pode
16:30 Wolf: ?
16:30 Wiinter: pode sim
16:31 Wiinter: mas a questao n eh nem o spacing, é que cansa mesmo haha
16:31 Wolf: Ah, beleza
16:31 Wiinter: tipo aqui
16:31 Wiinter: 03:43:552 (13,14,15)-
16:31 Wiinter: tira isso e faz um slider assim http://puu.sh/1CN1d
16:31 Wiinter: e faz na outra stream tb
16:31 Wolf: Ok
16:32 Wiinter: 03:45:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- e essas notas perdidas fica estranho D:
16:32 Wiinter: continua a stream fazendo sliders
16:32 Wiinter: e nas proximas tb
16:32 Wiinter: é seu primeiro mapa?
16:32 Wolf: Beleza
16:33 Wolf: Terceiro
16:33 Wiinter: bom, primeiro que tu seguiu em frente ne hahaha
16:33 Wiinter: ficou super bom
16:33 Wolf: Valeu! Vou tentar pegar isso ranked algum dia haha
16:33 Wolf: Da um savelog e posta la pf
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Wiinter wrote:

log do recheck:

SPOILER
16:08 Wolf: Olá. Eu arrumei as coisas lá no map. Quando você tiver tempo pode dar recheck~
16:09 Wolf: Obrigado
16:15 Wiinter: manda np ai
16:15 *Wolf is watching Bajofondo - Pa' Bailar [Hard] +Hidden +DoubleTime |Autoplay|
16:19 Wiinter: pode ser irc mod?
16:19 Wolf: Claro
16:20 Wiinter: 00:30:112 (6)- new combo
16:20 Wolf: Hmm, e porque tem o spin depois, mas tem problema o combo ser só de 1?
16:21 Wiinter: não tem problema :p
16:21 Wolf: Senão eu mudo
16:21 Wolf: Ok
16:21 Wiinter: eu acho melhor colocar o new combo ali pq o ritmo muda
16:22 Wiinter: 01:22:432 (4)- esse slider soa esquisito
16:23 Wolf: Vou mudar. thx
16:23 Wiinter: muda ele pra isso http://puu.sh/1CMQS e coloca uma nova em 01:23:872 (1)-
16:23 Wiinter: e coloca new combo nessa nota e tira em 01:24:352 (2)-
16:23 Wolf: Ah ok
16:23 Wiinter: eu colocaria uma nota aqui 01:30:832 (4)-
16:24 Wiinter: 01:46:192 (1)- new combo
16:24 Wolf: 01:30:832- vou deixar sem nada por enquanto
16:24 Wolf: E ok
16:25 Wiinter: o overlap com o slider ficou feio :c 03:02:992 (6)-
16:26 Wiinter: se eu fosse vc deixava tipo assim http://puu.sh/1CMUr
16:26 Wolf: Ah, beleza
16:27 Wiinter: eu colocaria duas notas aqui 03:10:192 (3,4)-
16:27 Wiinter: 03:15:232 (1)- eu aumentaria esse slider até a tick branca D: soa esquisito na azul
16:28 Wolf: Ok
16:28 Wiinter: e daí tira a nota que tem em 03:16:192 (2)-, obviamente
16:29 Wiinter: coloca um slider 1/2 aqui 03:23:632 (3)- e dai tira a nota em 03:23:872-
16:29 Wolf: Sim sim
16:30 Wiinter: 03:42:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13)- essa stream tá muuy comprida
16:30 Wolf: Então, aehauehuaheu
16:30 Wolf: Eu não sei fazer stream af :c
16:30 Wolf: Tipo
16:30 Wiinter: se eu fosse vc tirava umas notas ali no meio e colocaria aqueles sliders 1/4 com repeat, sabe?
16:30 Wolf: Eu pensei em comprimir, mas ai teria que diminuir a distance snap, isso pode
16:30 Wolf: ?
16:30 Wiinter: pode sim
16:31 Wiinter: mas a questao n eh nem o spacing, é que cansa mesmo haha
16:31 Wolf: Ah, beleza
16:31 Wiinter: tipo aqui
16:31 Wiinter: 03:43:552 (13,14,15)-
16:31 Wiinter: tira isso e faz um slider assim http://puu.sh/1CN1d
16:31 Wiinter: e faz na outra stream tb
16:31 Wolf: Ok
16:32 Wiinter: 03:45:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- e essas notas perdidas fica estranho D:
16:32 Wiinter: continua a stream fazendo sliders
16:32 Wiinter: e nas proximas tb
16:32 Wiinter: é seu primeiro mapa?
16:32 Wolf: Beleza
16:33 Wolf: Terceiro
16:33 Wiinter: bom, primeiro que tu seguiu em frente ne hahaha
16:33 Wiinter: ficou super bom
16:33 Wolf: Valeu! Vou tentar pegar isso ranked algum dia haha
16:33 Wolf: Da um savelog e posta la pf
Obrigado!
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
;) Sorry about the wait. I've been busy.


Normal
Don't mind the wall. There isn't that much wrong with it. Some things I felt needed to be explained a little more. This map is borderline suitable for the easiest difficulty. A true Easy could be made for this song, but the right changes would make your normal suitable too. But I find it unlikely that the MATs will be very happen with all the half notes you're trying to get ranked in the difficulty that's supposed to be following a simple beat.

00:31:072 (2,3) - End of 2 is further away from the body of 3 than the start of 2. It would look better if both sides were an equal distance. I have issues with 3 though, it doesn't sound right. I think it would sound better if it ended here 00:32:512 -. the sound just doesn't expand past this, so it ends poorly. This is pretty highly suggested.
00:45:472 (1,2) - Same issue as above. It would be better if the starts of 1 were the same distance apart from the body of 2.
01:12:352 (1,2,3,4,5) - This might be hard to read for beginners. A repeat slider would be a lot easier to read than a triple stack IMO.
01:17:152 (2,3) - Pattern looks bad. I suggest not using this type of curve for a blanket pattern. Use a different curve with this type of slider if you want a blanket.
01:39:232 (1,2) - Sliders don't really go well together. Make it seem less random?
02:04:192 (4) - The knob on this, interrupts the flow. It may be difficult for beginners to find the beat afterwards and I personally dislike how it plays. If you tone it down then it should be fine.
02:15:712 (2) - A whistle on the start of this sound nice.
02:22:912 (2) - seems like it should start more under the previous note. What do you think?
02:54:112 (1,2,1,2) - May be difficult to beginners IMO.
02:59:872 (1,2) - Fairly hidden under the spinner's hitburst. You shouldn't obstruct stacks in the easiest difficulty.
03:00:832 (3,4) - Also is pretty weird, and will be difficult to read to beginners. i know you have done similar things previously that I have not complained about, but if you can help it, a simpler approach will be proper. (One such would be starting the slider on the white tick instead of having a stack). Eh I'm not entirely sure whether that would be better, so use your own judgment whether you want to change or keep.
03:42:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't do this in your easiest difficulty. you need to either make an easier difficulty or change this. It doesn't play that well either. Instead of having pure 1/2ths, have some gaps in the beat? Here's a simpler beat you could try. http://puu.sh/1DECI

Hard
This is very clean.

00:33:952 (1) - New combo here.
00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Tested these and they are suitable. You can keep them, but they don't really feel like a rhythm when I hit them. It's one of those parts of the song that doesn't carry a beat when tapped. It's not a serious deal, but some people will dislike this song because they don't sound "on-beat" if you get what I mean. But you don't have to change.
00:58:912 (5) - I feel that a new combo should here. Just an opinion though.
01:23:872 (1,2,3) - Shape here is lackluster. I'm not 100% sure what you should do instead. I like this better than what you have. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/540206
02:02:272 (1) - Could you wrap this more closely around the stack? Remember to keep the lean of the stack in mind when designed the curve. It will look better. (Eh maybe not, since the reversed version of this would be much harder to wrap, because the lean is moving in a different direction) ._.
02:48:832 (2) - Forgot a clap.
02:52:672 (2) - ^
03:04:192 (8) - ^
02:59:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Combo is too long. Fix this.
03:15:232 (5) - Clap on reverse?
03:26:752 (1) - Same comment about wrapping would apply here, but it seems that the placement would be difficult. Oh well, guess this can't look better without requiring a shift in your notes. Don't have to do anything I guess.
03:40:672 (2) - Clap
03:43:552 (13) - Clap on start
03:51:232 (13) - ^

Conclusion

You don't need an easier difficulty if you resolved that one stream I felt was too difficult.

If this had the proper amount of stars/mods, I would bubble this after a few fixes if I were MAT.
Last edited by TheVileOne , edited 3 times in total.
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

TheVileOne wrote:

;) Sorry about the wait. I've been busy. No problem, sir.


Normal
Don't mind the wall. There isn't that much wrong with it. Some things I felt needed to be explained a little more. This map is borderline suitable for the easiest difficulty. A true Easy could be made for this song, but the right changes would make your normal suitable too. But I find it unlikely that the MATs will be very happen with all the half notes you're trying to get ranked in the difficulty that's supposed to be following a simple beat. I tried my best doing a mapset that had a normal without needing an easy, and I really hope I don't need to. Is it a big deal not having an easy in this one?

00:31:072 (2,3) - End of 2 is further away from the body of 3 than the start of 2. It would look better if both sides were an equal distance. I have issues with 3 though, it doesn't sound right. I think it would sound better if it ended here 00:32:512 -. the sound just doesn't expand past this, so it ends poorly. This is pretty highly suggested.Fixed, thanks!
00:45:472 (1,2) - Same issue as above. It would be better if the starts of 1 were the same distance apart from the body of 2. Replaced slider with circle notes
01:12:352 (1,2,3,4,5) - This might be hard to read for beginners. A repeat slider would be a lot easier to read than a triple stack IMO. Changed, thanks.
01:17:152 (2,3) - Pattern looks bad. I suggest not using this type of curve for a blanket pattern. Use a different curve with this type of slider if you want a blanket. Ok, thanks.
01:39:232 (1,2) - Sliders don't really go well together. Make it seem less random? Fixed sliders.
02:04:192 (4) - The knob on this, interrupts the flow. It may be difficult for beginners to find the beat afterwards and I personally dislike how it plays. If you tone it down then it should be fine. Alright, thanks.
02:15:712 (2) - A whistle on the start of this sound nice. Added whistle.
02:22:912 (2) - seems like it should start more under the previous note. What do you think? Can you provide a screenshot for that? xD
02:54:112 (1,2,1,2) - May be difficult to beginners IMO. Changed.
02:59:872 (1,2) - Fairly hidden under the spinner's hitburst. You shouldn't obstruct stacks in the easiest difficulty. Thanks for bringing this one up. The spin in my skin has a transparent background. Fixed.
03:00:832 (3,4) - Also is pretty weird, and will be difficult to read to beginners. i know you have done similar things previously that I have not complained about, but if you can help it, a simpler approach will be proper. (One such would be starting the slider on the white tick instead of having a stack). Eh I'm not entirely sure whether that would be better, so use your own judgment whether you want to change or keep. I'll keep it for now.
03:42:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't do this in your easiest difficulty. you need to either make an easier difficulty or change this. It doesn't play that well either. Instead of having pure 1/2ths, have some gaps in the beat? Here's a simpler beat you could try. http://puu.sh/1DECI Changed, thanks for this one.

Hard
This is very clean. AWWW YEEAH

00:33:952 (1) - New combo here. Done
00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Tested these and they are suitable. You can keep them, but they don't really feel like a rhythm when I hit them. It's one of those parts of the song that doesn't carry a beat when tapped. It's not a serious deal, but some people will dislike this song because they don't sound "on-beat" if you get what I mean. But you don't have to change. I'll keep it for a challenge, I had some people that said before the streams that the map was kinda bored to play without them, but I get your point. Thanks anyways!
00:58:912 (5) - I feel that a new combo should here. Just an opinion though. Added, looks nice after the finish, thanks!
01:23:872 (1,2,3) - Shape here is lackluster. I'm not 100% sure what you should do instead. I like this better than what you have. Changed, thanks.http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/540206
02:02:272 (1) - Could you wrap this more closely around the stack? Remember to keep the lean of the stack in mind when designed the curve. It will look better. (Eh maybe not, since the reversed version of this would be much harder to wrap, because the lean is moving in a different direction) ._. Indeed, I'll keep it because of that, but thanks for the tip!
02:48:832 (2) - Forgot a clap.Indeed, thanks!
02:52:672 (2) - ^ Added
03:04:192 (8) - ^ Added
02:59:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Combo is too long. Fix this. Fixed.
03:15:232 (5) - Clap on reverse? Yup, thanks!
03:26:752 (1) - Same comment about wrapping would apply here, but it seems that the placement would be difficult. Oh well, guess this can't look better without requiring a shift in your notes. Don't have to do anything I guess. o3o
03:40:672 (2) - Clap Added
03:43:552 (13) - Clap on start Added
03:51:232 (13) - ^ Added

Conclusion

You don't need an easier difficulty if you resolved that one stream I felt was too difficult. Ah, good!

If this had the proper amount of stars/mods, I would bubble this after a few fixes if I were MAT. Thanks man! Merry Christmas!
Thank you very much for your mod sir, it was very helpful. Carpe Diem.
-Napoleon-
307 posts
Joined January 2011
-Napoleon-
Myyyyyyy mod! :D

Some words:

- This is just a hitsound mod requested by Wolf
- Looks like you Improved your map style from the last time I saw one of your maps, Good job! :) (At least they don't suck like mine)
- You have trained very hard at slider making like I said you to do, well at least it looks like you did o3o

Mod Itself:

..::Normal::..
00:47:392 (4) - Add hitsound finish
00:49:312 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start
01:33:472 (4) - ^
01:41:152 (4) - ^
02:04:192 (4) - ^
02:11:872 (4) - ^
02:15:712 (2) - Add hitsound finish at the start, remove hitsound whistle at the start
02:19:552 (3) - Add hitsound finish
03:07:552 (1) - Add hitsound finish, remove hitsound whistle
03:13:312 (3) - Add hitsound finish at the start
03:47:392 (3) - Add hitsound finish at the reverse arrow
03:56:512 (1) - Remove hitsound clap

..::Hard::..
00:14:752 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at the start
00:16:672 (3) - ^
00:18:592 (1) - ^
00:19:552 (2) - No hitsound
00:22:432 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at the start, remove hitsound finish because that part stills calm and this is tango not electro music
00:24:352 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at the start
00:26:272 (1) - ^
00:30:112 (1) - ^
00:33:952 (1) - ^
00:35:872 (4) - ^
00:37:792 (1) - Add hitsound whistle, remove hitsound finish
00:39:712 (1) - ^
00:41:632 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:47:392 (5) - Add hitsound finish at the start
00:55:072 (3) - Add hitsound finish
00:56:992 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start
00:58:912 (1) - Remove hitsound whistle
01:08:512 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
01:10:432 (1) - ^
01:12:352 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at start and end (not on reverse arrow)
01:18:112 (4) - Add hitsound whistle
01:20:032 (1) - ^
01:23:872 (1) - ^
01:25:792 (6) - ^
01:27:712 (1) - ^
01:31:552 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start
01:33:472 (1) - ^
01:41:152 (4) - ^
01:45:952 (3) - Remove hitsound whistle
02:19:072 (4) - Add hitsound finish at the end
02:21:472 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start
02:27:232 (3) - Add hitsound whistle at the start
02:40:672 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
02:44:512 (1) - ^
02:48:352 (1) - ^
02:52:192 (1) - ^
02:56:032 (1) - ^
02:59:872 (1) - ^
03:03:712 (1) - ^
03:07:552 (1) - ^
03:12:352 (2) - Add hitsound finish at the end
03:15:232 (5) - Add hitsound finish at the start
03:19:072 (1) - ^
03:20:992 (1) - ^
03:22:912 (1) - ^
03:23:152 (2) - Remove hitsound whistle
03:30:592 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start
03:34:432 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start, and remove hitsound whistle
03:36:352 (2) - Add hitsound finish at the start
03:53:632 (1) - Add hitsound finish
03:56:512 (1) - Remove hitsound clap

Afterwords:
- This map looks pretty good compared to older ones that you have
- Good luck in rank!
- <----- This means: STAR!~
- <----- This means: FAVOURITE!~


P.S - Icons taken from: http://cupcake-kitty-chan.deviantart.com/
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Xavier18488 wrote:

Myyyyyyy mod! :D

Some words:

- This is just a hitsound mod requested by Wolf Yup, I did <3
- Looks like you Improved your map style from the last time I saw one of your maps, Good job! :) (At least they don't suck like mine) YOUR MAPS DOESN'T SUCK, STOP WITH THAT PLEASE o3o
- You have trained very hard at slider making like I said you to do, well at least it looks like you did o3o I tried my best, thanks!

Mod Itself:

..::Normal::..
00:47:392 (4) - Add hitsound finish Added
00:49:312 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
01:33:472 (4) - ^ ^
01:41:152 (4) - ^ ^
02:04:192 (4) - ^ ^
02:11:872 (4) - ^ ^
02:15:712 (2) - Add hitsound finish at the start, remove hitsound whistle at the start Added and removed
02:19:552 (3) - Add hitsound finish Added
03:07:552 (1) - Add hitsound finish, remove hitsound whistle Added and removed
03:13:312 (3) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
03:47:392 (3) - Add hitsound finish at the reverse arrow Added
03:56:512 (1) - Remove hitsound clap Removed

..::Hard::..
00:14:752 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at the start Added
00:16:672 (3) - ^ ^
00:18:592 (1) - ^ ^
00:19:552 (2) - No hitsound Removed
00:22:432 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at the start, remove hitsound finish because that part stills calm and this is tango not electro music Added and removed
00:24:352 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at the start Added
00:26:272 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:112 (1) - ^ ^
00:33:952 (1) - ^ ^
00:35:872 (4) - ^ ^
00:37:792 (1) - Add hitsound whistle, remove hitsound finish Added and removed
00:39:712 (1) - ^ ^
00:41:632 (1) - Add hitsound whistle Added
00:47:392 (5) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
00:55:072 (3) - Add hitsound finish Added
00:56:992 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
00:58:912 (1) - Remove hitsound whistle Removed
01:08:512 (1) - Add hitsound whistle Added
01:10:432 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:352 (1) - Add hitsound whistle at start and end (not on reverse arrow) Added
01:18:112 (4) - Add hitsound whistle Added
01:20:032 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:872 (1) - ^ ^
01:25:792 (6) - ^ ^
01:27:712 (1) - ^ ^
01:31:552 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
01:33:472 (1) - ^ ^
01:41:152 (4) - ^ ^
01:45:952 (3) - Remove hitsound whistle Removed
02:19:072 (4) - Add hitsound finish at the end Added
02:21:472 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
02:27:232 (3) - Add hitsound whistle at the start Added
02:40:672 (1) - Add hitsound whistle Added
02:44:512 (1) - ^ ^
02:48:352 (1) - ^ ^
02:52:192 (1) - ^ ^
02:56:032 (1) - ^ ^
02:59:872 (1) - ^ ^
03:03:712 (1) - ^ ^
03:07:552 (1) - ^ ^
03:12:352 (2) - Add hitsound finish at the end Added
03:15:232 (5) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
03:19:072 (1) - ^ ^
03:20:992 (1) - ^ ^
03:22:912 (1) - ^ ^
03:23:152 (2) - Remove hitsound whistle Removed
03:30:592 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
03:34:432 (1) - Add hitsound finish at the start, and remove hitsound whistle Added and removed
03:36:352 (2) - Add hitsound finish at the start Added
03:53:632 (1) - Add hitsound finish Added
03:56:512 (1) - Remove hitsound clap Removed

Afterwords:
- This map looks pretty good compared to older ones that you have I hope so xD
- Good luck in rank! Thanks, Xavier :3
- <----- This means: STAR!~ Thanks!
- <----- This means: FAVOURITE!~ <3


P.S - Icons taken from: http://cupcake-kitty-chan.deviantart.com/
Thank you for your time!
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp
mod as requested

geral

que tal esse clap ? http://puu.sh/1G7zR teria que mudar o sample para soft custom 1 (S:C1)

eu normalmente nao vejo maps com o país de origem nas tags, mas também nao acho que seja proibido, só comentando

normal

00:17:632 (6) - acho que slider de 1/1 fica melhor aki
00:19:552 (3) - aki seria o contrario da sugestao acima, pois o ritmo muda um pouco. que tal http://puu.sh/1G5oB ?
00:24:352 (4) - o mesmo que 00:17:632 (6)
00:28:672 (5) - ^
..........
00:31:072 (2,3) - achei esses que esses sliders ficam esquisitos com o slider anterior, é que voce tem feito tudo simetrico e consistente ate aki
..........
02:19:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - essas notas parecem meio aleatorias, ficaria melhor fazer 02:19:552 (3,4,5) - um longo slider pra combinar com 02:17:632 (1) - e talvez com a mesma forma mas invertida horisontalmente ou verticalmente?
..........
02:21:472 (1) - final em 02:22:432 ?
02:55:552 (2,1,2) - por que stack nas tres notas? elas nao pertencem ao mesmo ritmo ou algo assim, seria melhor voce mover 02:56:032 (1,2) - pra algum outro lugar, voce poderia manter o stack dessas duas, combinaria na minha opiniao, e seria consistente a 02:59:872 (1,2)
..........
03:42:592 (2,3) - talvez fazer essas notas um slider pra manter consistencia, pois essa parte só tem circle
03:44:512 (2,3) - slider aki tb, fazendo "espelho" ao slider acima?
03:51:712 (1,2) - final do slider em 03:52:672 e circle em 03:52:912 ?

hard

01:00:112 - eu acho que o som aki é muito forte pra ser ignorado
.........
01:15:232 (3,4,5,6,1) - os hitbursts de (6) e (1) estao em cima do slider em 01:17:152 (3) - considere move essas notas para baixo, ate porque desde o ultimo combo voce só colocou notas na parte de cima.
.........
02:53:152 (3) - fazer o mesmo que 02:55:072 (3,4) - ?
.........
03:42:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - essa parte ta muito dificil, a musica inteira é facil de passar, essa parte combina mais com insane na minha opiniao, seria bom converter os circles pra sliders e colocar circles em pequenas partes, melhor dar uma olhadaem maps parecidos, pra ter uma referencia melhor
.........
03:45:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - aki voce se concentrou em apenas dois lugares em stack, a musica nao pede pra isso na minha opiniao, devia colocar as notas normalmente como tem feito ate agora...
.........
03:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - o mesmo que 03:42:112
03:52:312 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - essa parte é 1/3 mas vc continuou o stream no 1/4, eu nao acho uma boa ideia porque eles simplesmente nao seguem mais a musica

é um excelente map, pegue mais uns mods e vai atras de um mat :)

boa sorte com o ranking 8-)
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

pimpG wrote:

geral

que tal esse clap ? http://puu.sh/1G7zR teria que mudar o sample para soft custom 1 (S:C1) Talvez eu mude, não to querendo mudar os hitsounds no momento.

eu normalmente nao vejo maps com o país de origem nas tags, mas também nao acho que seja proibido, só comentandoÉ verdade, acho melhor tirar.

normal

00:17:632 (6) - acho que slider de 1/1 fica melhor aki Eu vou deixar porque acho que os ticks batem com a música e acho que ficou legal com a nota seguinte.
00:19:552 (3) - aki seria o contrario da sugestao acima, pois o ritmo muda um pouco. que tal http://puu.sh/1G5oB ? Bem lembrado do ritmo, valeu!
00:24:352 (4) - o mesmo que 00:17:632 (6) Vou deixar esse também
00:28:672 (5) - ^ ^
00:31:072 (2,3) - achei esses que esses sliders ficam esquisitos com o slider anterior, é que voce tem feito tudo simetrico e consistente ate aki Mudei, valeu.
02:19:072 (2,3,4,5,6) - essas notas parecem meio aleatorias, ficaria melhor fazer 02:19:552 (3,4,5) - um longo slider pra combinar com 02:17:632 (1) - e talvez com a mesma forma mas invertida horisontalmente ou verticalmente? Boa sugestão, mudei.
02:21:472 (1) - final em 02:22:432 ? Arrumado com a sugestão acima.
02:55:552 (2,1,2) - por que stack nas tres notas? elas nao pertencem ao mesmo ritmo ou algo assim, seria melhor voce mover 02:56:032 (1,2) - pra algum outro lugar, voce poderia manter o stack dessas duas, combinaria na minha opiniao, e seria consistente a 02:59:872 (1,2) Bem lembrado, mudei.
03:42:592 (2,3) - talvez fazer essas notas um slider pra manter consistencia, pois essa parte só tem circle Essa parte específica do map eu quero somente circles, é o final, acho que seria a "parte-desafio" do map, para os inexperientes.
03:44:512 (2,3) - slider aki tb, fazendo "espelho" ao slider acima? Também vou deixar esse.
03:51:712 (1,2) - final do slider em 03:52:672 e circle em 03:52:912 ?Mudei.

hard

01:00:112 - eu acho que o som aki é muito forte pra ser ignorado Concordo, mudei.
01:15:232 (3,4,5,6,1) - os hitbursts de (6) e (1) estao em cima do slider em 01:17:152 (3) - considere move essas notas para baixo, ate porque desde o ultimo combo voce só colocou notas na parte de cima. Mudei.
02:53:152 (3) - fazer o mesmo que 02:55:072 (3,4) - ? Mudei.
03:42:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - essa parte ta muito dificil, a musica inteira é facil de passar, essa parte combina mais com insane na minha opiniao, seria bom converter os circles pra sliders e colocar circles em pequenas partes, melhor dar uma olhadaem maps parecidos, pra ter uma referencia melhor Também mudei. Eu queria a stream aqui porque como eu já havia feito streams menores achei que poderia botar, mas realmente fica bastante difícil.
03:45:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - aki voce se concentrou em apenas dois lugares em stack, a musica nao pede pra isso na minha opiniao, devia colocar as notas normalmente como tem feito ate agora... Já foi mudado pela sugestão acima.
03:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - o mesmo que 03:42:112 Também mudei.
03:52:312 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - essa parte é 1/3 mas vc continuou o stream no 1/4, eu nao acho uma boa ideia porque eles simplesmente nao seguem mais a musica Consertei!

isso é tudo

é um excelente map, pegue mais uns mods e vai atras de um mat :) Valeu cara!

boa sorte com o ranking 8-)
Obrigado pelo mod!
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
NORMAL
01:23:033(2) push it down to y 124? so it matchs (1)
01:41:593(5) pust it up so its y 232?
02:55:192(1,1) push one of the ones so there ys match up together
03:09:073 (1,2,1,2) ^
03:35:213(2) push it to x 208

HARD
02:31:243(1) make it something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546880

Nice map ! shot a star ;) good luck
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

mebins wrote:

NORMAL
01:23:033(2) push it down to y 124? so it matchs (1) Fixed, thanks!
01:41:593(5) pust it up so its y 232? I'll keep this one for now.
02:55:192(1,1) push one of the ones so there ys match up together There's no need to, and distance snap won't allow that.
03:09:073 (1,2,1,2) ^ ^
03:35:213(2) push it to x 208 Don't need to.

HARD
02:31:243(1) make it something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546880 Nah, I think my patterns are ok. Thanks for the suggestion though.

Nice map ! shot a star ;) good luck Thanks!
Thanks for the mod!
ColdTooth
1,104 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
Modding. Because I am too lazy to play the 2.5k beatmaps I have.

Can't speak spanish sorry mate <3

Anyways...

[Normal]

00:14:752 (1,2,3) - Maybe excatly 0.8x spacing?
00:34:912 (3,4) - This could be a bit less... sharp of a half square. Maybe a half diamond would work~
00:38:752 (2,4) - A bit overlapping imo, 00:40:192 (4) - could be away from 00:38:752 (2) -
00:43:552 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:472 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:49:312 (1) - Finish at slider end?
00:55:552 (4,5,6,1) - Maybe something.. like this?
SPOILER

00:58:432 (2) - Finish at slider begin
01:26:752 (5) - A bit less curvy You already fixed it.
01:30:352 (1) - Remove NC
01:43:072 (1) - Finish at slider end
01:45:472 (1,1) - I don't mind this as a normal. But I do loathe short spinners and then theres a note after it, especially on a normal or easy. Doesn't matter, you don't have to change it.
02:06:112 (1,2) - Propose a better pattern? (Coordinates: 02:07:552 (2) - First point at 168 168)
SPOILER

02:40:672 (1,1) - Eh.. I guess these are okay for sliders as a normal difficulty. Could be a better looking shape
03:02:752 (6) - A bit sharp imo
03:29:632 (2,3,4,1) - Don't like the overlap imo
03:41:152 (2,3,4) - Maybe something like...
SPOILER

03:48:832 (1,2,3) - Very hard to see.


[Hard]

Not much I can say here. It looks pretty darn clean and I like it.

00:22:432 (1) - Curve Slider looks better IMO
00:23:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern looks fine, but it overlaps 00:24:352 (1) - and looks odd imo
00:30:112 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:712 (1) - ^
01:18:112 (4,5) - Symmetric like 01:16:192 (1,2) - ?
01:29:392 (1) - Remove NC
01:35:392 (1) - Why no stream. Why a spinner? o.o
02:02:992 (2,3) - EXTREMELY sorry if I'm being a stacking nazi here, but do unstack them. It doesn't play right with 02:02:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - IMO
02:11:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could be formed a bit better. Well, it looks fine now, but could be better. 02:12:592 (4,5) - isn't the same form as 02:12:112 (2,7) -
03:09:232 (1) - Remove NC
03:11:152 (6) - Not stacked over 03:11:392 (1) - ?
03:27:472 (2,3) - Same as 02:02:992 (2,3) -


Thats all for now. It looks so good I just can't express my feelings. But I'm going to give you a star. Aren't you lucky.

TheVileOne wrote:

If this had the proper amount of stars/mods, I would bubble this after a few fixes if I were MAT.
^
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

VinylDash14 wrote:

Modding. Because I am too lazy to play the 2.5k beatmaps I have. I'm glad you were lazy otherwise I wouldn't get this mod <3

Can't speak spanish sorry mate <3 LMAO IT'S PORTUGUESE

Anyways...

[Normal]

00:14:752 (1,2,3) - Maybe excatly 0.8x spacing? Fixed.
00:34:912 (3,4) - This could be a bit less... sharp of a half square. Maybe a half diamond would work~ Changed, thanks.
00:38:752 (2,4) - A bit overlapping imo, 00:40:192 (4) - could be away from 00:38:752 (2) - Fixed, thanks.
00:43:552 (1) - Remove NC Done
00:45:472 (1,2,3) - Spacing. Fixed, thanks.
00:49:312 (1) - Finish at slider end? Nah, a clap fits better here imo.
00:55:552 (4,5,6,1) - Maybe something.. like this? I like the way it is o3o Thanks for the suggestion though.
SPOILER

00:58:432 (2) - Finish at slider begin Clap looks good here.
01:26:752 (5) - A bit less curvy You already fixed it. <3
01:30:352 (1) - Remove NC Removed.
01:43:072 (1) - Finish at slider end Clap looks good o3o
01:45:472 (1,1) - I don't mind this as a normal. But I do loathe short spinners and then theres a note after it, especially on a normal or easy. Doesn't matter, you don't have to change it. Fixed anyways <3
02:06:112 (1,2) - Propose a better pattern? (Coordinates: 02:07:552 (2) - First point at 168 168) Fixed, but I moved to 168 164
SPOILER

02:40:672 (1,1) - Eh.. I guess these are okay for sliders as a normal difficulty. Could be a better looking shape Alright, I tried some variations here, will keep them
03:02:752 (6) - A bit sharp imo Fixed.
03:29:632 (2,3,4,1) - Don't like the overlap imo Fixed.
03:41:152 (2,3,4) - Maybe something like... If I change it, it'll broke distance snap, sorry o3o
SPOILER

03:48:832 (1,2,3) - Very hard to see. Agreed, changed.


[Hard]

Not much I can say here. It looks pretty darn clean and I like it. Thanks <3

00:22:432 (1) - Curve Slider looks better IMO Will keep o3o
00:23:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern looks fine, but it overlaps 00:24:352 (1) - and looks odd imo Fixed, it's now symmetrical <3
00:30:112 (1) - Remove NC Removed
00:39:712 (1) - ^ ^
01:18:112 (4,5) - Symmetric like 01:16:192 (1,2) - ? Niiiiice, thanks.
01:29:392 (1) - Remove NC Removed.
01:35:392 (1) - Why no stream. Why a spinner? o.o Because this was all stacked. Can you image this part all stacked? Besides, I already added too much stream imo.
02:02:992 (2,3) - EXTREMELY sorry if I'm being a stacking nazi here, but do unstack them. It doesn't play right with 02:02:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - IMO I really don't know, it plays good imo, really. If more people complain about it I'll think in changing.
02:11:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could be formed a bit better. Well, it looks fine now, but could be better. 02:12:592 (4,5) - isn't the same form as 02:12:112 (2,7) - What do you mean, they are all symmetrical. Besides, making this pattern took me forever, I'll probably won't change it.
03:09:232 (1) - Remove NC Removed
03:11:152 (6) - Not stacked over 03:11:392 (1) - ? Will keep because it fits with the drums.
03:27:472 (2,3) - Same as 02:02:992 (2,3) - Same as my reply.


Thats all for now. It looks so good I just can't express my feelings. But I'm going to give you a star. Aren't you lucky. I like you <3

TheVileOne wrote:

If this had the proper amount of stars/mods, I would bubble this after a few fixes if I were MAT.
^
Thanks A LOT for this mod. <3
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Yo, going on ahead for M4M. Cool song, btw.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>Normal
  1. 02:16:672 (3) - Yep, I know the song demands for five 1/4 beats here, but using a 1/4 slider that repeats three times isn't a good idea, IMO, since it's going to be somewhat hard to read... Just use a 1/2 slider that repeats once, instead?
  2. 02:17:152 - Replace clap with whistle? I personally think it fits with the song far better than clap. (I have just realized this after going pretty long while testing the map, and I'm sure enough there were moments like this before and after this spot, so if you do this, apply it on similar parts.)
  3. 02:53:152 (2) - Same as 02:16:672 (3).
>Hard
  1. 00:14:752 - The hitsound used here is whistle, while it's finish on Normal. Choose one. I personally think whistle fits more though; the music here doesn't support a finish anyway.
  2. 00:18:592 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...idk; I think this is weird. Try to avoid the overlap here and get 00:19:792 mapped. Here's a pattern I made by myself; feel free to use it if you think this is going to be good (this affects things until 00:21:952, btw...)
    468,160,19552,1,0,0:0:0
    468,160,19792,2,0,P|392:184|392:136|312:160,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    288,192,20392,1,0,0:0:0
    288,232,20512,2,0,P|264:304|184:324,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    56,240,21472,5,2,0:0:0
    64,160,21712,1,0,0:0:0
    140,140,21952,1,8,0:0:0
  3. 00:22:432 - Replace finish with whistle?
  4. 00:28:192 - ^ (Yep, won't gonna point things like this too much; if you agree with my opinion here, apply this on similar parts.)
  5. 00:34:912 (2,3,4) - Hmm, TBH, I don't really like to see these objects touch each other... I don't have any good idea regarding new patterns for this part, though, unfortunately.
  6. 00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is badly overmapped, and I think overmapping shouldn't ever exist on a diff below Insane, anyway. Just use a circle every 1/2 beats. If you can give me a reason about why do you think this is okay, I'm fine with that.
  7. 01:21:232 - Add whistle?
  8. 01:43:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9).
  9. 02:02:272 (1,2,3) - The (2,3) stack makes (2) touch with (1). Simply move the last anchor point of (1) one (tiny) grid to the left so this won't happen.
  10. 02:06:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You know what I'm going to say here...
  11. 02:08:992 (3) - Add whistle?
  12. 02:13:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Yep.
  13. 02:24:352 (2) - Whistle?
  14. 03:10:432 (1) - Replace clap with whistle?
  15. 03:18:112 (5) - Whistle?
  16. 03:33:472 (2) - ^
  17. 03:41:152 (3) - ^
  18. 03:41:872 - Add a circle at (196,292)? I seriously think this place needs to be mapped.
  19. 03:44:512 (4) - Add whistle AND clap?
  20. 03:56:032 (1,1) - Why not make a vertical jump here instead? I think it fits with the song. Just don't make something too hard.
Well...

Good luck on the way 8-)
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo, going on ahead for M4M. Cool song, btw.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>Normal
  1. 02:16:672 (3) - Yep, I know the song demands for five 1/4 beats here, but using a 1/4 slider that repeats three times isn't a good idea, IMO, since it's going to be somewhat hard to read... Just use a 1/2 slider that repeats once, instead? Nah, I'll keep it, there is considerable time after this to the player react, and the path to hit looks good imo
  2. 02:17:152 - Replace clap with whistle? I personally think it fits with the song far better than clap. (I have just realized this after going pretty long while testing the map, and I'm sure enough there were moments like this before and after this spot, so if you do this, apply it on similar parts.) Clap looks the best for me, thanks for the suggestion though.
  3. 02:53:152 (2) - Same as 02:16:672 (3). Actually fixed this one, thanks.
>Hard
  1. 00:14:752 - The hitsound used here is whistle, while it's finish on Normal. Choose one. I personally think whistle fits more though; the music here doesn't support a finish anyway. Well, I tried some variations. I don't think it's a major problem do have different patterns of hitsound between difficulties. Will keep the whistle though.
  2. 00:18:592 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...idk; I think this is weird. Try to avoid the overlap here and get 00:19:792 mapped. Here's a pattern I made by myself; feel free to use it if you think this is going to be good (this affects things until 00:21:952, btw...) I like it o3o
    468,160,19552,1,0,0:0:0
    468,160,19792,2,0,P|392:184|392:136|312:160,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    288,192,20392,1,0,0:0:0
    288,232,20512,2,0,P|264:304|184:324,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    56,240,21472,5,2,0:0:0
    64,160,21712,1,0,0:0:0
    140,140,21952,1,8,0:0:0
  3. 00:22:432 - Replace finish with whistle? Done.
  4. 00:28:192 - ^ (Yep, won't gonna point things like this too much; if you agree with my opinion here, apply this on similar parts.) Alright, thanks!
  5. 00:34:912 (2,3,4) - Hmm, TBH, I don't really like to see these objects touch each other... I don't have any good idea regarding new patterns for this part, though, unfortunately. Will try something later if more people complaing, thanks.
  6. 00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is badly overmapped, and I think overmapping shouldn't ever exist on a diff below Insane, anyway. Just use a circle every 1/2 beats. If you can give me a reason about why do you think this is okay, I'm fine with that. I had several people that were complaining before I added the streams that the map was boring to play, and wouldn't fit in "Hard" category. If I remove all of them, trust me, this would not look like a hard. If you didn't noticed, there is not a single jump here on the entire diff. And this is not overmapped, they match with the song on this part imo, for real. I listened several times this part and it really fits for me.
  7. 01:21:232 - Add whistle? Done.
  8. 01:43:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9). Same as my reply.
  9. 02:02:272 (1,2,3) - The (2,3) stack makes (2) touch with (1). Simply move the last anchor point of (1) one (tiny) grid to the left so this won't happen. Thanks!
  10. 02:06:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You know what I'm going to say here... Same.
  11. 02:08:992 (3) - Add whistle? Done.
  12. 02:13:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Yep. Same.
  13. 02:24:352 (2) - Whistle? Done.
  14. 03:10:432 (1) - Replace clap with whistle? Done
  15. 03:18:112 (5) - Whistle? Done
  16. 03:33:472 (2) - ^ ^
  17. 03:41:152 (3) - ^^
  18. 03:41:872 - Add a circle at (196,292)? I seriously think this place needs to be mapped. Nah, will leave that way. There was an incredible hard stream at this point that I removed, that shouldn't be a problem imo
  19. 03:44:512 (4) - Add whistle AND clap? Nice one, thanks!
  20. 03:56:032 (1,1) - Why not make a vertical jump here instead? I think it fits with the song. Just don't make something too hard.
I don't want a single jump on this diff, thanks for the suggestion though.

Well...

Good luck on the way 8-) Thanks~
Supah thanks for the mod!
Royston
187 posts
Joined June 2012
Royston
Hi, M4M here

General

Really fun song and map, I was bobbing my head along as I played it. :D
I find songs which use different slidertick rates for different difficulties a bit strange usually, but I think it works quite well here

Just a suggestion, but 02:16:672 to 02:17:152 something that I think would sound really cool here (and 03:10:432 in Hard) would be use of the drum sampleset to go along with the drums in the background. I tested it out by removing the existing hitsounds, changing sampleset to drums and adding the clap hitsound. I think it fits really well! If you end up doing this, then I'd lower the volume by 10% or so, so it's not too overpowering.

03:56:512 (1) - Instead of a finish, I would use the normal whistle. I feel it gives it a stronger ending.

Normal

01:25:552 - Add something here?
01:25:792 (4,5) - I would change this from two circles to a slider, I feel it fits the music better since the bass noise in the music at 01:25:792 is extended
02:04:912 - I'd add something here, it plays a little weirdly imo because you switch to the bass mid combo. Alternatively you could remove 02:03:232 (2) and add notes at 02:03:472 + 02:03:952 so you follow the bass all the way through.
03:14:032- Add circle? I feel this beat in the music should be mapped
03:14:272 (4) - A bit of a nazi, but this slider isn't symmetrical to 03:13:312 (3) - just make a copy of (3) and CTRL+G and CTRL+H to fix it

Hard

00:35:752 - add note?
00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm. I feel it would follow the rhythm better if you deleted (2) and (6) from these sections.
01:26:992 - add note?
01:46:432 (2,3) - I would use a slider instead of two circles here
02:08:872 - add a note?
02:10:672 - ^
02:18:352 - ^
02:20:032 (5) - New combo here?
03:12:112 - add a note?
03:25:792 (6) - whistle?
03:42:832 - add a note here for the bass (plus it reflects the increased intensity in the song)
03:43:312 - ^
03:45:712 - ^

I really enjoyed this map. Hope to see it get ranked. :D
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Royston wrote:

Hi, M4M here

General

Really fun song and map, I was bobbing my head along as I played it. :D
I find songs which use different slidertick rates for different difficulties a bit strange usually, but I think it works quite well here

Just a suggestion, but 02:16:672 to 02:17:152 something that I think would sound really cool here (and 03:10:432 in Hard) would be use of the drum sampleset to go along with the drums in the background. I tested it out by removing the existing hitsounds, changing sampleset to drums and adding the clap hitsound. I think it fits really well! If you end up doing this, then I'd lower the volume by 10% or so, so it's not too overpowering. Hmm, will think about it. I do agree with you, but I have issues when messing up with hitsound. I'll ask someone else to help me on this, thanks!

03:56:512 (1) - Instead of a finish, I would use the normal whistle. I feel it gives it a stronger ending. Agreed! Thanks!

Normal

01:25:552 - Add something here? Nah, I think it'll look a bit overmapped.
01:25:792 (4,5) - I would change this from two circles to a slider, I feel it fits the music better since the bass noise in the music at 01:25:792 is extended Really nice suggestion, but I would have problems with distance snap when I add that, and the next objects took me some time to place, so I'll keep it.
02:04:912 - I'd add something here, it plays a little weirdly imo because you switch to the bass mid combo. Alternatively you could remove 02:03:232 (2) and add notes at 02:03:472 + 02:03:952 so you follow the bass all the way through. I kinda like your suggestion here too, but I was mapping according to the electric piano.
03:14:032- Add circle? I feel this beat in the music should be mapped Pretty much the same answer as above, I like how it fits with the piano, plus, it'll kinda ruin my simmetrical sliders.
03:14:272 (4) - A bit of a nazi, but this slider isn't symmetrical to 03:13:312 (3) - just make a copy of (3) and CTRL+G and CTRL+H to fix it No nazi man, this was beautiful! Thank you very much for this one!

Hard

00:35:752 - add note? Even though it matches with the song, I don't think it plays nice here.
00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm. I feel it would follow the rhythm better if you deleted (2) and (6) from these sections. Agreed, but I really like the way it is now, there's not a single jump on the entire diff, I'm going to let all the streams for a considerable challenge.
01:26:992 - add note? Nah, I like how it feels, plus it would ruin symmetry with 01:26:272 (8) -
01:46:432 (2,3) - I would use a slider instead of two circles here Would probably get overlapped with 01:44:512 (1) -
02:08:872 - add a note? Kinda hard to listen to that beat, the main beat I'm using to map sounds better imo
02:10:672 - ^ ^
02:18:352 - ^ ^
02:20:032 (5) - New combo here? Done, thanks.
03:12:112 - add a note? I mapped according to the piano. The flow looks better for me.
03:25:792 (6) - whistle? Done, thanks.
03:42:832 - add a note here for the bass (plus it reflects the increased intensity in the song) Loved your suggestion, but trust me, doing that wouldn't just ruin my symmetry, but it will also look hard. This part of the song used to have an extremely insane stream, which I removed because I already added plenty of them throughout the diff, so I really want to give the players a "break" here.
03:43:312 - ^ ^
03:45:712 - ^ ^

I really enjoyed this map. Hope to see it get ranked. :D Thanks for the star, I'm glad you liked the map and song!
Appreciated your mod sir, thanks!
stevemin_old
103 posts
Joined April 2011
stevemin_old
hello~
i am a newb modder and mapper so skip me if u want~

Easy
01:15:232 - this part may be hard for easy players
02:05:152 - this part maybe confusing to easy players because of the spacing

Hard
00:17:632 (1) - maybe like this?

00:20:272 (4) - change combo color
00:44:752 - add beat here, better~
01:26:752, 01:27:232 - put two sliders, it fits better with music
01:45:952 - change this part like this

01:46:912 - change combo color
02:01:552 - add note
02:16:672 (3) - change combo color
02:16:672 (3) - "
thxx~
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

stevemin wrote:

hello~
i am a newb modder and mapper so skip me if u want~

Easy It's Normal, not easy o3o
01:15:232 - this part may be hard for easy players Fits well for a normal diff imo.
02:05:152 - this part maybe confusing to easy players because of the spacing Looks fine to me.

Hard
00:17:632 (1) - maybe like this? Nice one, changed!

00:20:272 (4) - change combo color Nah, looks fine to me.
00:44:752 - add beat here, better~ Agree with you, but I mapped according to the piano, and the sound is really low here, so it'll probably be harder to hit if I added a beat there.
01:26:752, 01:27:232 - put two sliders, it fits better with music Nah, I really want a considerable break here.
01:45:952 - change this part like this Nah, overlap will look bad imo.

01:46:912 - change combo color Done.
02:01:552 - add note Same explanation as 00:44:752
02:16:672 (3) - change combo color I like the flow of the combo here, will keep it.
02:16:672 (3) - "
thxx~
Thanks for modding! Don't let yourself get discouraged because you'll think mappers won't accept your mods, if you're really trying to help someone, just pretend that won't happen. ;)
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Short and quick check here. ♪

Normal
  1. 00:24:352 (4) - Since we can barely see the fade-out of the previous slider, it would be better for this one if you make a blanket with the previous. You could do something simple like the example below(1) ot even, you move it a bit and make a complete blanket(2):
    Example
    (1)


    (2)
  2. 00:26:272 (1) - Like said on the point above, we can barely see the fade-out of the previous slider, but for this one.. It's making an overlap. So, in another word, this slider should be moved somewhere else. As you can see the overlap here. So, I suggest you to move it somewhere else. Also, this slider is making an overlap with this circle -> 00:28:192 (4) -
  3. 00:32:032 (3) - This slider should be moved to x:296 y:304, so it will be aligned with the slider (1). Also, I am suggesting you to add a reverse arrow to this slider to make a better sound. By doing this, the two next circles won't be stacked since the circle (4) will be replaced by the reverse arrow.
  4. 00:45:472 (1) - This slider should have another form here since the emplacement of this slider doesn't look good and also, it makes some overlaps with the next circles. So, I suggest you to add a red node at the center of this slider to make it like that (Look on the spoilerbox below). After that, move the next circles in a symmetrical way.
    Example
  5. 00:49:312 (1,3) - We can see with these sliders that it's making an overlap, which doesn't look good and uh, yeah. With the slider (3), you could make another form, which will look good and won't make any overlap with the previous slider.
  6. 01:31:072 (4) - Like I told you on most of the previous points, this object is making an overlap. So I am suggesting you to move them like that:
    Example
  7. 01:33:472 (4,5) - These sliders are doing some kind of weird overlaps, which you should move these objects to avoid this overlap. It doesn't look good while playing..
  8. 02:04:192 (4) - I can understand that you wanted to stack this slider's end with the beginning of the slider (1), but you didn't stacked it properly. If you have trouble stacking it perfectly, disable to Distance Snap and stack it. After that, with the previous circle, make the spacing consistent (If it's not consistent)
  9. 02:56:032 (1,2) - For these circles, I am suggesting you to first, delete them and replace them by a 1/2 slider. By doing this, it will mostly keep the consistency with this slider -> 02:52:192 (1) - .
  10. 03:11:392 (1) - This slider is not symmetrical, would you mind to make it more symmetric?
  11. 03:13:312 (3,4) - I don't suggest having this jump here. First, the spacing should have been consistent because these objects are placed in a consistent way on the timeline. Also, it's not suggested to add jumps on a Normal difficulty. To fix this, simply do Ctrl+G to reverse the slider's beginning with the slider's end.
  12. 03:20:992 (3) - This one is a bit nazi but.. this slider is close from being symmetric, but it isn't. Do Ctrl+H to this slider to help you to make it symmetric.
  13. 03:45:952 (1) - Make this slider aligned by moving it one grid up and one grid at the right. Ok, I understand what you did there, but it will be better if the beginning was stacked with the circle (3) and the end of the slider to the previous circle (4):
    Example with code

    204,224,225952,6,0,P|257:257|308:225,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  14. 03:55:552 (1,1,1) - In my opinion, it would be more enjoyable if these circles weren't stacked at the same place. Try to move them with a consistent spacing.
This difficulty is nice. Just make attention to your overlaps..

Hard
  1. 00:19:552 (2,3) - Since at this place, it has a strong and loud sound, wouldn't it be better if it was replaced by a slider instead? Also, I do not like how the slider 00:20:512 (5) - is.. It completely goes straight to the previous slider (1) which doesn't make it nice. I thought you could reinvent this pattern a bit to make it symmetrical and enjoyable: (By making that, make sure the objects after it doesn't make weird flows, overlaps, inconsistent spacings)
    Example
  2. 00:30:112 (5) - Should it have a new combo here? The current combo is pretty long.
  3. 00:35:872 (4) - This slider is completely making overlaps with the two previous sliders and the next circles. That doesn't look pretty good. I am suggesting you to make a form with this slider, so it will avoid the overlaps of these objects.
  4. 02:04:192 (1) - Aherm, It sounds like there,s a bit too much of 1/4 here, and it will be better if it was like previously. Here's an example;
    Example
  5. 02:22:912 (5) - Would you mind to make a better blanket here with the previous circle? It will look better.
    Example
  6. 02:25:312 - It sounds like you missed to add a finish here since previously, you added finishes on downbeats to emphasize this sound, but you haven't added any for this one. You should add a finish and also, add one to the beginning of the next slider to keep the consistency.
  7. 02:40:672 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Can you add something between these objects? It takes too long to catch the next combo. Would you mind to do like Normal and add breaks betweem them?
  8. 03:01:792 (5) - I told you the same thing some points above about that. It would be better if you make the change.. Also, add a new combo to the slider (3) because it has a new sound there.. Do the same for this one: 03:05:632 (6) -
  9. 03:26:752 (1) - *Comment* That copy/paste D:
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Gabe wrote:

Short and quick check here. ♪ Short and quick my ass, with this mod it took me 2 hours to fix stuff. Thanks for that though <3

Normal
  1. 00:24:352 (4) - Since we can barely see the fade-out of the previous slider, it would be better for this one if you make a blanket with the previous. You could do something simple like the example below(1) ot even, you move it a bit and make a complete blanket(2): Fixed this, thanks!
    Example
    (1)


    (2)
  2. 00:26:272 (1) - Like said on the point above, we can barely see the fade-out of the previous slider, but for this one.. It's making an overlap. So, in another word, this slider should be moved somewhere else. As you can see the overlap here. So, I suggest you to move it somewhere else. Also, this slider is making an overlap with this circle -> 00:28:192 (4) - Fixed.
  3. 00:32:032 (3) - This slider should be moved to x:296 y:304, so it will be aligned with the slider (1). Also, I am suggesting you to add a reverse arrow to this slider to make a better sound. By doing this, the two next circles won't be stacked since the circle (4) will be replaced by the reverse arrow. Kinda fixed this. They are aligned, but will keep the stacks.
  4. 00:45:472 (1) - This slider should have another form here since the emplacement of this slider doesn't look good and also, it makes some overlaps with the next circles. So, I suggest you to add a red node at the center of this slider to make it like that (Look on the spoilerbox below). After that, move the next circles in a symmetrical way.Agreed, fixed. Although I made straight slider instead of your "v" shape one, it fits better with previous slider.
    Example
  5. 00:49:312 (1,3) - We can see with these sliders that it's making an overlap, which doesn't look good and uh, yeah. With the slider (3), you could make another form, which will look good and won't make any overlap with the previous slider. Fixed.
  6. 01:31:072 (4) - Like I told you on most of the previous points, this object is making an overlap. So I am suggesting you to move them like that: Fixed.
    Example
  7. 01:33:472 (4,5) - These sliders are doing some kind of weird overlaps, which you should move these objects to avoid this overlap. It doesn't look good while playing..Fixed.
  8. 02:04:192 (4) - I can understand that you wanted to stack this slider's end with the beginning of the slider (1), but you didn't stacked it properly. If you have trouble stacking it perfectly, disable to Distance Snap and stack it. After that, with the previous circle, make the spacing consistent (If it's not consistent) Fixed.
  9. 02:56:032 (1,2) - For these circles, I am suggesting you to first, delete them and replace them by a 1/2 slider. By doing this, it will mostly keep the consistency with this slider -> 02:52:192 (1) - .Alright, fixed.
  10. 03:11:392 (1) - This slider is not symmetrical, would you mind to make it more symmetric? Even though I'm up to making symmetrical sliders, this one is kinda hard to do imo, and besides, people won't notice this isn't symmetric when playing, so I'll keep it.
  11. 03:13:312 (3,4) - I don't suggest having this jump here. First, the spacing should have been consistent because these objects are placed in a consistent way on the timeline. Also, it's not suggested to add jumps on a Normal difficulty. To fix this, simply do Ctrl+G to reverse the slider's beginning with the slider's end. Oops, it was my intention to do that at first place, I forgot to ctrl+g it, thanks!
  12. 03:20:992 (3) - This one is a bit nazi but.. this slider is close from being symmetric, but it isn't. Do Ctrl+H to this slider to help you to make it symmetric.
  13. 03:45:952 (1) - Make this slider aligned by moving it one grid up and one grid at the right. Ok, I understand what you did there, but it will be better if the beginning was stacked with the circle (3) and the end of the slider to the previous circle (4): Fixed, thanks!
    Example with code

    204,224,225952,6,0,P|257:257|308:225,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  14. 03:55:552 (1,1,1) - In my opinion, it would be more enjoyable if these circles weren't stacked at the same place. Try to move them with a consistent spacing. I really want to keep them. I like the way it fits with those flashy kiais o3o
This difficulty is nice. Just make attention to your overlaps.. Thanks, even though you haven't brought up more overlaps that were on this diff, I made a huge fix on them.

Hard
  1. 00:19:552 (2,3) - Since at this place, it has a strong and loud sound, wouldn't it be better if it was replaced by a slider instead? Also, I do not like how the slider 00:20:512 (5) - is.. It completely goes straight to the previous slider (1) which doesn't make it nice. I thought you could reinvent this pattern a bit to make it symmetrical and enjoyable: (By making that, make sure the objects after it doesn't make weird flows, overlaps, inconsistent spacings) Changed, but not with those sliders, they would ruin my next symmetric combos. Sorry, straight slider must be kept.
    Example
  2. 00:30:112 (5) - Should it have a new combo here? The current combo is pretty long. Nah, it bothers me to know that it'll be only one combo.
  3. 00:35:872 (4) - This slider is completely making overlaps with the two previous sliders and the next circles. That doesn't look pretty good. I am suggesting you to make a form with this slider, so it will avoid the overlaps of these objects. Sigh, this overlap doesn't really bother me, and I think it's pretty suitable for an hard imo. Sorry.
  4. 02:04:192 (1) - Aherm, It sounds like there,s a bit too much of 1/4 here, and it will be better if it was like previously. Here's an example; Nope, this pattern took me very long, and fits well imo.
    Example
  5. 02:22:912 (5) - Would you mind to make a better blanket here with the previous circle? It will look better.You could have send me the coordinates, this is kinda hard to do imo. Besides, I like how the slider itself is symmetric, doing what you suggested would ruin it.
    Example
  6. 02:25:312 - It sounds like you missed to add a finish here since previously, you added finishes on downbeats to emphasize this sound, but you haven't added any for this one. You should add a finish and also, add one to the beginning of the next slider to keep the consistency. Fixed, thanks.
  7. 02:40:672 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Can you add something between these objects? It takes too long to catch the next combo. Would you mind to do like Normal and add breaks betweem them? Added, thanks.
  8. 03:01:792 (5) - I told you the same thing some points above about that. It would be better if you make the change.. Also, add a new combo to the slider (3) because it has a new sound there.. Do the same for this one: 03:05:632 (6) - It's not a big deal this overlap. I know it doesn't look good, but it's playable. Added new combos, thanks.
  9. 03:26:752 (1) - *Comment* That copy/paste D: Fuck you.
Thanks for the mod, sir.
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Tango, really nice :)

General
  1. Fine
Normal
  • - 01:35:392 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner and map this part because is hard to newbies players
Hard
  • -- Slider tick rate 2 like the Normal difficulty?
    - 01:46:192 (1) - Nah, I don't think the new combo needed here, I suggest to remove it
    - 03:11:392 (1) - This slider is not correctly stacked with (6)
Not bad.
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

MoodyRPG wrote:

Tango, really nice :) <3

General
  1. Fine \o/
Normal
  • - 01:35:392 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner and map this part because is hard to newbies players Nah, seems fine to me.
Hard
  • -- Slider tick rate 2 like the Normal difficulty? Alright, fixed.
    - 01:46:192 (1) - Nah, I don't think the new combo needed here, I suggest to remove it Fixed.
    - 03:11:392 (1) - This slider is not correctly stacked with (6) Fixed.
Not bad. Thanks.
Thanks for your mod!
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Mod from me for m4m :P

General:
You could add maybe another combo colour? 2 is not so much, 3 combo colours would be nice.
00:44:272 - I think you should set the preview point to this point

Normal:
HP Drain Rate -1
00:35:872 (1,2,3) - this sounds a bit weird, I think this would be more proper - http://puu.sh/1MMMZ (the distance is fine this way), also, I think that (1) (2) is a bit hard for novices, and it would be easier if you changed it
00:43:552 (3,4,5) - you could try something similar here as well, there is a beat at 00:44:032 - so if you ended the slider there, you could emphasize it with a hit sound
00:56:512 (6) - add clap
01:14:272 (4,5,6,1) - this is very hard for beginners, and this would fit better to the music as well - http://puu.sh/1MMT2
01:35:392 (1,1) - the spinner is too short (for beginners in my opinion), and (1) is too early, it is hard for novices, maybe you could remove (1) and make the spinner longer, or remove the spinner and add hit circles (or sliders) instead?
02:16:672 (3) - this seems hard with those repeats (on an easy-normal difficulty)
02:25:312 (1) - add finish (?) to the beginning of the slider
02:53:152 (2) - same as 02:16:672 (3)
03:14:272 (4) - it seems like this is not properly flipped :P so remove and copy, flip horizontally 03:13:312 (3) - and ctrl+G

Hard:
00:34:912 (2,3,4) - not very appealing, (2) and (3) reaches (4), so I would suggest you to avoid that, try to make (4) a bit curvy maybe like this - http://puu.sh/1MMwD
00:37:072 (5,1) - similar to the one I just mentioned, try to place them so that they won't reach (4)
01:15:232 (3) - place this somewhere else maybe? http://puu.sh/1MMy8
02:02:272 (1) - you can make that blanket nicer like this - http://puu.sh/1MMAq
02:02:992 (2,3) - these seem to be too close to (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/566163 - also, it's not a problem if you put them a little bit further than 1,00 (if you want to stick to the distance)
02:05:152 (5) - same as 02:02:272 (1) - the blanket
02:22:912 (5) - blanket, and 02:22:672 (4) - is too close
03:00:832 (1,2,3) - same as the one I mentioned at the beginning of the mod 00:34:912 (2,3,4)
03:10:192 - add hit circle
03:10:312 - add hit circle (I think this and the one above would fit very well to the music)
03:26:752 (1,5) - blanket

That's all, very nice difficulties, but I think this mapset needs a harder difficulty, because it is a bit boring to play like this, even if the map itself is good. I hope this mod was helpful.

Also, I tried mapping it, since I like the song, and it would be nice if this had an insane, so if you want, you can check it and tell me if I can make a guest diff for this, I didn't do the whole song though, but you can see if you like it or not. (It doesn't have hitsounds yet.) Also, I understand if you don't want it, since you already have quite a few mods, and it would be just trouble to ask for more again :P
http://puu.sh/1MNdi
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B
Thanks for modding, I'll update stuffs only tomorrow because I'm not home.
Will look at your guest diff tomorrow as well, but since you had the time and motivation to make it, it's probably for sure I'll add it.
narakucrimson
osu! Alumni
1,713 posts
Joined March 2010
narakucrimson
Hey

[General]
  1. Try making the first combo colour stronger, I had some trouble distinguishing the approach circle in places where it blended a bit with the white background.
[Normal]
  1. 01:35:392 (1) - I don't really recommend having such short spinners between notes (circles). It gets really tricky to catch them after the spinner, for less experienced players. Please remove this and replace it with some other objects.
Honestly speaking, I don't think there's anything really critical to poke at. Add that guest if you want, and I could do a more in-depth check later, I just didn't have the motivation to right now heh

Have the star icon for now!
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
alright, since you said you will add it, I tried to finish it quickly, so here is the whole difficulty with hitsounds: http://puu.sh/1MXYG
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

MystykAMV wrote:

Mod from me for m4m :P

General:
You could add maybe another combo colour? 2 is not so much, 3 combo colours would be nice. Nah, the background doesn't have many colors, two combo colors fits perfect.
00:44:272 - I think you should set the preview point to this point Alright, changed.

Normal:
HP Drain Rate -1 Changed.
00:35:872 (1,2,3) - this sounds a bit weird, I think this would be more proper - http://puu.sh/1MMMZ (the distance is fine this way), also, I think that (1) (2) is a bit hard for novices, and it would be easier if you changed it Sorry, I don't think this is a big deal calling "hard" for novices. This is a normal, not an easy, this fits perfect on the diff.
00:43:552 (3,4,5) - you could try something similar here as well, there is a beat at 00:44:032 - so if you ended the slider there, you could emphasize it with a hit sound Pretty much the same answer as above.
00:56:512 (6) - add clap Forgot this one, thanks.
01:14:272 (4,5,6,1) - this is very hard for beginners, and this would fit better to the music as well - http://puu.sh/1MMT2 Nah, I don't think it's that hard for those people.
01:35:392 (1,1) - the spinner is too short (for beginners in my opinion), and (1) is too early, it is hard for novices, maybe you could remove (1) and make the spinner longer, or remove the spinner and add hit circles (or sliders) instead? Alright, changed.
02:16:672 (3) - this seems hard with those repeats (on an easy-normal difficulty) Fits good imo.
02:25:312 (1) - add finish (?) to the beginning of the sliderWhistle sounds better here.
02:53:152 (2) - same as 02:16:672 (3) No changes here either.
03:14:272 (4) - it seems like this is not properly flipped :P so remove and copy, flip horizontally 03:13:312 (3) - and ctrl+G Fixed, thanks.

Hard:
00:34:912 (2,3,4) - not very appealing, (2) and (3) reaches (4), so I would suggest you to avoid that, try to make (4) a bit curvy maybe like this - Someone already complained about this already. I agree that it doesn't look good, but I want to keep it so it won't ruin my next object's symmetry.http://puu.sh/1MMwD
00:37:072 (5,1) - similar to the one I just mentioned, try to place them so that they won't reach (4) Same.
01:15:232 (3) - place this somewhere else maybe? http://puu.sh/1MMy8 Nah, I like how it's right on the middle of the grid.
02:02:272 (1) - you can make that blanket nicer like this - http://puu.sh/1MMAq Sorry, in this specific part of the map I won't change anything to keep the flow.
02:02:992 (2,3) - these seem to be too close to (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/566163 - also, it's not a problem if you put them a little bit further than 1,00 (if you want to stick to the distance) Same answer as above.
02:05:152 (5) - same as 02:02:272 (1) - the blanket Same.
02:22:912 (5) - blanket, and 02:22:672 (4) - is too close
03:00:832 (1,2,3) - same as the one I mentioned at the beginning of the mod 00:34:912 (2,3,4)
03:10:192 - add hit circle Nope, I'm not mapping according to the drums here.
03:10:312 - add hit circle (I think this and the one above would fit very well to the music) Same here.
03:26:752 (1,5) - blanket Don't need to, it's playable.
Sorry, no changes at Hard diff.

That's all, very nice difficulties, but I think this mapset needs a harder difficulty, because it is a bit boring to play like this, even if the map itself is good. I hope this mod was helpful.

Also, I tried mapping it, since I like the song, and it would be nice if this had an insane, so if you want, you can check it and tell me if I can make a guest diff for this, I didn't do the whole song though, but you can see if you like it or not. (It doesn't have hitsounds yet.) Also, I understand if you don't want it, since you already have quite a few mods, and it would be just trouble to ask for more again :P
http://puu.sh/1MNdi

narakucrimson wrote:

Hey

[General]
  1. Try making the first combo colour stronger, I had some trouble distinguishing the approach circle in places where it blended a bit with the white background. Changed.
[Normal]
  1. 01:35:392 (1) - I don't really recommend having such short spinners between notes (circles). It gets really tricky to catch them after the spinner, for less experienced players. Please remove this and replace it with some other objects. Already fixed with previous mod.
Honestly speaking, I don't think there's anything really critical to poke at. Add that guest if you want, and I could do a more in-depth check later, I just didn't have the motivation to right now heh

Have the star icon for now!
Thanks for everything guys.
Added MystykAMV's diff, I need some mods for his diff now, thanks.
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi from the Queue!

General

You have way too much Kiai parts, reduce them by 01:31:552 - , 02:02:272 - , 02:17:632 - removing Kiai time at these part
You have a unnessasary "Bajofondo - Pa' Bailar (Wolf).osb" .osb file, delete it please!
03:56:032 - These fountains are nonsense, remove the one at 03:56:032 - at least

Normal

00:59:872 (1) - This spinne is too short for beginners, avoid them on Easy and Normal, delete the circle and let the spinner start at 00:59:152 - and then let it end how it was then
02:54:112 (1) - Remove NC should start here 02:56:032 (3) - , since theres a spinne you can overall remove NC
03:56:032 (1,1) - Remove NC
03:53:632 (1) - Make the spinner longer please, remove the next cirlce right after the spinner and let the spinner end there then, imo it makes a better flow and playing

Hard

00:20:512 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:472 (2) - NC
00:28:192 (1) - Remove NC
00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too long for a Hard diff, reduce it !
00:59:872 (1) - Let it start at 00:59:632 -
01:35:392 (1) - Doesnt fit here, remove it and add a slider instead
01:43:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too long for a Hard diff, reduce it !
02:06:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:13:912 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:56:032 (1,2) - Dont stack them with the preview circle (5)
03:46:672 (2) - Spacing, closer!
03:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too long for a Hard diff, reduce it !
03:52:912 (2) - Spacing, closer
03:56:512 (1) - Remove NC

Insane

General
Some parts have no hitsounds at all, change this to fit up the mapset

00:16:432 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
00:46:912 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:072 (4) - NC
01:27:712 (1) - Spacing, closer
01:35:872 (1) - Remove NC
01:36:832 (1) - ^
01:41:632 (1) - ^
01:43:552 (1) - ^
02:06:592 (1) - ^
02:06:352 (2,1) - A bit too far, make it closer
02:07:312 (4) - NC
03:34:432 (3,1,2) - Change this spacing please, these are new jumps in the map and not known
03:36:112 (4,1,2) - ^
03:42:592 (1) - Remove NC
03:45:952 (1) - ^
03:51:952 (1) - ^

Call me back for recheck when youre done
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!

General

You have way too much Kiai parts, reduce them by 01:31:552 - , 02:02:272 - , 02:17:632 - removing Kiai time at these part I agree that there is a considerable amount of kiai's here, but honestly, I think they fit well.
You have a unnessasary "Bajofondo - Pa' Bailar (Wolf).osb" .osb file, delete it please! Removed, thanks.
03:56:032 - These fountains are nonsense, remove the one at 03:56:032 - at least I think they fit well o3o

Normal

00:59:872 (1) - This spinne is too short for beginners, avoid them on Easy and Normal, delete the circle and let the spinner start at 00:59:152 - and then let it end how it was then Changed the spin a bit, but it's starting at 00:59:392 -
02:54:112 (1) - Remove NC should start here 02:56:032 (3) - , since theres a spinne you can overall remove NC Alright, removed overall NC
03:56:032 (1,1) - Remove NC Nah, my intention was to emphasize here.
03:53:632 (1) - Make the spinner longer please, remove the next cirlce right after the spinner and let the spinner end there then, imo it makes a better flow and playing Changed, thanks.

Hard

00:20:512 (1) - Remove NC Removed.
00:21:472 (2) - NC Added.
00:28:192 (1) - Remove NC Removed.
00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too long for a Hard diff, reduce it ! You mean the combos or the stream itself? The stream fits well on this diff.
00:59:872 (1) - Let it start at 00:59:632 - Changed.
01:35:392 (1) - Doesnt fit here, remove it and add a slider instead Changed.
01:43:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too long for a Hard diff, reduce it ! Fits well.
02:06:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
02:13:912 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
02:56:032 (1,2) - Dont stack them with the preview circle (5) Fixed.
03:46:672 (2) - Spacing, closer! Fixed.
03:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is too long for a Hard diff, reduce it ! Fits well.
03:52:912 (2) - Spacing, closer Fixed.
03:56:512 (1) - Remove NC Nope, my intention was to emphasize here.

Insane

General
Some parts have no hitsounds at all, change this to fit up the mapset

00:16:432 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
00:46:912 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:072 (4) - NC
01:27:712 (1) - Spacing, closer
01:35:872 (1) - Remove NC
01:36:832 (1) - ^
01:41:632 (1) - ^
01:43:552 (1) - ^
02:06:592 (1) - ^
02:06:352 (2,1) - A bit too far, make it closer
02:07:312 (4) - NC
03:34:432 (3,1,2) - Change this spacing please, these are new jumps in the map and not known
03:36:112 (4,1,2) - ^
03:42:592 (1) - Remove NC
03:45:952 (1) - ^
03:51:952 (1) - ^

Call me back for recheck when youre done
Thanks for the mod, waiting for MystykAMV to update.
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Hey! Thanks for the mod, I changed everything, and I added more hitsounds, I hope it's better now.
SPOILER
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Tags:Tango Mar Dulce MystykAMV
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256,348,214432,1,2,0:0:0
440,344,214672,6,0,P|416:300|380:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,215152,2,0,P|221:227|197:271,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,192,215632,2,0,P|366:156|390:112,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,112,216112,1,0,0:0:0
72,40,216352,6,0,P|96:84|132:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,216832,2,0,P|291:157|315:113,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,192,217312,2,0,P|146:228|122:272,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,217792,1,8,0:0:0
376,192,218272,5,0,0:0:0
368,180,218392,1,0,0:0:0
360,168,218512,1,0,0:0:0
352,156,218632,1,0,0:0:0
344,144,218752,1,8,0:0:0
336,132,218872,1,0,0:0:0
328,120,218992,1,0,0:0:0
320,108,219112,1,0,0:0:0
312,96,219232,1,0,0:0:0
256,348,219712,5,8,0:0:0
80,244,220192,2,0,P|80:168|200:164|200:96,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,192,221152,6,0,P|360:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,221632,1,4,3:3:0
244,192,221752,1,4,3:3:0
232,192,221872,1,4,3:3:0
156,320,222112,5,0,0:0:0
188,284,222232,1,0,0:0:0
176,244,222352,1,0,0:0:0
148,220,222472,1,0,0:0:0
120,192,222592,1,8,0:0:0
88,168,222712,1,0,0:0:0
60,144,222832,1,0,0:0:0
48,104,222952,1,0,0:0:0
80,68,223072,6,0,P|48:28,4,50,0|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,60,223672,5,0,0:0:0
160,64,223792,1,0,0:0:0
192,88,223912,1,0,0:0:0
212,116,224032,1,0,0:0:0
256,128,224152,6,0,P|256:180,2,50
300,116,224512,5,8,0:0:0
320,88,224632,1,0,0:0:0
352,64,224752,1,0,0:0:0
392,60,224872,1,0,0:0:0
432,68,224992,6,0,P|464:28,4,50,0|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,104,225592,5,0,0:0:0
452,144,225712,1,0,0:0:0
424,168,225832,1,0,0:0:0
392,192,225952,1,0,0:0:0
364,220,226072,1,0,0:0:0
336,244,226192,1,0,0:0:0
324,284,226312,1,0,0:0:0
356,320,226432,2,0,P|408:320,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,320,226912,6,0,P|106:320,2,50
188,284,227272,1,0,0:0:0
176,244,227392,1,8,0:0:0
148,220,227512,1,0,0:0:0
120,192,227632,1,0,0:0:0
256,44,227872,5,0,0:0:0
256,76,227992,1,0,0:0:0
256,108,228112,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,228232,1,0,0:0:0
256,176,228352,1,8,0:0:0
256,208,228472,1,0,0:0:0
256,240,228592,1,0,0:0:0
256,272,228712,1,0,0:0:0
256,304,228832,6,0,P|304:320|352:308,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,229312,2,0,P|424:176|377:187,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,260,229792,6,0,P|148:272|120:276,3,50
88,268,230272,1,8,0:0:0
64,244,230392,1,0,0:0:0
48,208,230512,1,0,0:0:0
52,172,230632,1,0,0:0:0
56,136,230752,6,0,P|76:124|104:120,3,50
140,112,231232,1,8,0:0:0
160,140,231352,1,0,0:0:0
180,168,231472,1,0,0:0:0
204,192,231592,1,0,0:0:0
228,216,231712,6,0,P|280:216,1,50
308,192,231952,1,0,0:0:0
332,168,232072,1,0,0:0:0
352,140,232192,2,0,P|396:88,2,66.6666666666667,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,192,232672,2,0,P|468:192,2,66.6666666666667
352,244,233152,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,233632,12,8,235072,0:0:0
72,192,235552,5,4,0:0:0
256,64,236032,1,8,0:0:0
440,192,236512,1,4,0:0:0
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B
Updated.
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Reduce the Kiai times please... ._.
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B
It is not necessary.
ColdTooth
1,104 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
I agree with BounceBabe on the kiai.

There's way too many kiai. I honestly don't like it, but the only kiai that would fit perfectly is the ones at the end, besides the fountain at 03:56:032 - . So please PLEASE reduce those kiai times.

No kudosu please. I will mod this before it gets ranked. Possibly an easy, but hey, I don't mind modding it again, but it does have the NICE insane. So I will mod that and the other two difficulties.

Again no kudosu please :)
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B
Sigh.
Alright, I've reduced the kiai's. I've pretty much added that much because they really fit the the song. I asked myself: If the kiai can fit here, and there's several more parts on the song that contains exactly the same melody, why not add them as well? I've pretty much done that for consistency, but fine, if you guys are complaining so much about them, I guess there's no other way.
There's kiai only at the end now, tell me if that's ok.
VinylDash, don't get me wrong, but I don't need an easy right now, the Normal is pretty much an Easy diff and adding one more diff would just need more time to get this ranked, and I don't want that. As I said, I'm aiming to get this ranked before February, when my college starts. But please, if you can still mod this, I'd appreciate it.
MystykAMV: Myself edited your diff since all I did was deleting the kiais.
Thanks.
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk

VinylDash14 wrote:

it does have the NICE insane
awww thank you, I'm really glad if you think my insane is nice! :3

Wolf: okay! and i agree with you about kiai, if it has the same melody and pace it would be more consistent with the last kiai but oh well you could just ask a MAT or BAT about it I think
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
Timing
offset -12 from yours

Stuff
Combo colour in Normal is different. Should be 
Combo2 : 136,136,136

SPOILER
just timing check, since i test-played it
lovely Insane, btw
Wolf, i don't remember how much kiai had prev version of the map, but i can say only one. one short section in the end looks ugly as hell.
/me blames BonuseBabe
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Aleks719 wrote:

Timing
offset -12 from yours

Stuff
Combo colour in Normal is different. Should be 
Combo2 : 136,136,136

SPOILER
just timing check, since i test-played it
lovely Insane, btw
Wolf, i don't remember how much kiai had prev version of the map, but i can say only one. one short section in the end looks ugly as hell.
/me blames BonuseBabe
Sections that had kiai:
00:45:472 - to 01:00:832 -
01:31:552 - to 01:46:912 -
02:02:272 - to 02:17:512 -
02:17:632 - to 02:32:992 -
03:11:392 - to 03:26:632 -
03:26:752 - to 03:41:992 -
Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
General

  • Copy paste from AIBat:
    Combo Colours Inconsistency in combo colours: -
    [Hard] : Combo1 : 224,31,36 Combo2 : 136,136,136 -
    [MystykAMV's Insane] : Combo1 : 224,31,36 Combo2 : 136,136,136 -
    [Normal] : Combo1 : 224,31,36 Combo2 : 129,129,129

    Please make sure the combo colors are consistent (Edit the .osu from the normal and replace the color 129,129,129 with 136,136,136
Normal

  • 01:37:312 (1) - There's no NC on this slider, you should add this
    01:37:312 (1,1) - Would be cool if you could line these up to form a circle: http://puu.sh/1OcmX (If you do this don't forget to adjust the 2 notes after it: http://puu.sh/1Ocor
    02:16:672 (3) - I suggest to make this a 1/2 slider with 1 repeat due to the fact that this is pretty hard to read, specially for a normal diff (Don't forget to apply new hitsounds to it)
    02:53:152 (2) - ^
Hard

  • 01:37:312 (1) - There's no NC on this slider, you should add this
    00:18:592 (1) - Reverse this one (CTRL+G) for more flow
    00:37:072 (5,1,2) - Would be great if you could make it so they don't touch the slider above them: http://puu.sh/1OczF (Mind the spacing though)
    00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is harder than the insane, I suggest making 2 tripples with a single in between(Maybe even make a 1/4 slider with 1 repeat out of the tripple): http://puu.sh/1OcBY
    01:43:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
    02:02:272 (1,2) - Should make a better blanket out of this slider: http://puu.sh/1OcFp
    02:05:152 (5) - ^
    02:06:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as mentioned before
    02:13:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
    03:26:752 (1) - Better blanket maybe?
    03:29:632 (5) - ^
    03:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same thing
MystykAMV's Insane

  • There's a lot of inconsistency in the NC's, I tried listing all of them, you should recheck afterwards whether I missed something

    00:44:032 (1) - Add NC
    00:44:512 (3) - Remove NC
    00:45:472 (3) - Remove NC
    00:51:232 (7) - Add NC
    00:52:192 (1) - Remove NC
    00:56:512 (1) - Remove NC
    00:56:992 (3) - Add NC
    01:17:392 (1) - Remove NC
    01:19:072 (8) - Remove NC
    01:20:032 (1) - Add NC
    01:21:232 (1) - Remove NC
    01:23:872 (5) - Add NC
    01:25:552 (1) - Remove NC
    01:29:392 (1) - Remove NC
    01:30:112 (3) - Add NC
    01:31:552 (1) - Remove NC
    02:07:312 (1) - Remove NC
    02:13:312 (5) - Remove NC
    02:23:872 (1) - Add NC
    02:24:112 (2) - Remove NC
    02:53:872 (1) - Remove NC
    02:54:352 (4) - Add NC
    02:55:312 (6) - Remove NC
    03:00:832 (3) - Remove NC
    03:09:232 (1) - Remove NC
    03:09:952 (2) - Add NC
    03:43:072 (1) - This stream plays really awkward, Remove 1 repeat, should be a note at 03:43:552
    03:44:032 (6) - Remove this note and start 03:44:152 (1) - from that place, and add 1 repeat to it
    03:44:992 (1) - Remove 1 repeat and add a note at 03:45:472
    03:51:712 (1) - This feels a bit off, I think it's better to just replace it with 2 notes
    (Don't forget to check the NC's on the stream, That might've gotten a bit messy after those changes)
If there are any questions feel free to contact me in game :3

Good luck getting this ranked
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Aleks719 wrote:

Timing
offset -12 from yours Fixed, thanks. Offset:7061

Stuff
Combo colour in Normal is different. Should be 
Combo2 : 136,136,136
Fixed.

Kyshiro wrote:

General

  • Copy paste from AIBat:
    Combo Colours Inconsistency in combo colours: -
    [Hard] : Combo1 : 224,31,36 Combo2 : 136,136,136 -
    [MystykAMV's Insane] : Combo1 : 224,31,36 Combo2 : 136,136,136 -
    [Normal] : Combo1 : 224,31,36 Combo2 : 129,129,129

    Please make sure the combo colors are consistent (Edit the .osu from the normal and replace the color 129,129,129 with 136,136,136
    Already fixed.
Normal

  • 01:37:312 (1) - There's no NC on this slider, you should add this Added.
    01:37:312 (1,1) - Would be cool if you could line these up to form a circle: http://puu.sh/1OcmX (If you do this don't forget to adjust the 2 notes after it: http://puu.sh/1Ocor Changed, thanks.
    02:16:672 (3) - I suggest to make this a 1/2 slider with 1 repeat due to the fact that this is pretty hard to read, specially for a normal diff (Don't forget to apply new hitsounds to it) Changed.
    02:53:152 (2) - ^ ^
Hard

  • 01:37:312 (1) - There's no NC on this slider, you should add this Added.
    00:18:592 (1) - Reverse this one (CTRL+G) for more flow Changed, thanks.
    00:37:072 (5,1,2) - Would be great if you could make it so they don't touch the slider above them: http://puu.sh/1OczF (Mind the spacing though) Changed to something else, thanks.
    00:49:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is harder than the insane, I suggest making 2 tripples with a single in between(Maybe even make a 1/4 slider with 1 repeat out of the tripple): http://puu.sh/1OcBY Changed.
    01:43:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
    02:02:272 (1,2) - Should make a better blanket out of this slider: http://puu.sh/1OcFp Improved blanket.
    02:05:152 (5) - ^ ^
    02:06:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as mentioned before Done.
    02:13:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
    03:26:752 (1) - Better blanket maybe? Improved.
    03:29:632 (5) - ^ ^
    03:49:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same thing Done.
MystykAMV's Insane

  • There's a lot of inconsistency in the NC's, I tried listing all of them, you should recheck afterwards whether I missed something

    00:44:032 (1) - Add NC
    00:44:512 (3) - Remove NC
    00:45:472 (3) - Remove NC
    00:51:232 (7) - Add NC
    00:52:192 (1) - Remove NC
    00:56:512 (1) - Remove NC
    00:56:992 (3) - Add NC
    01:17:392 (1) - Remove NC
    01:19:072 (8) - Remove NC
    01:20:032 (1) - Add NC
    01:21:232 (1) - Remove NC
    01:23:872 (5) - Add NC
    01:25:552 (1) - Remove NC
    01:29:392 (1) - Remove NC
    01:30:112 (3) - Add NC
    01:31:552 (1) - Remove NC
    02:07:312 (1) - Remove NC
    02:13:312 (5) - Remove NC
    02:23:872 (1) - Add NC
    02:24:112 (2) - Remove NC
    02:53:872 (1) - Remove NC
    02:54:352 (4) - Add NC
    02:55:312 (6) - Remove NC
    03:00:832 (3) - Remove NC
    03:09:232 (1) - Remove NC
    03:09:952 (2) - Add NC
    03:43:072 (1) - This stream plays really awkward, Remove 1 repeat, should be a note at 03:43:552
    03:44:032 (6) - Remove this note and start 03:44:152 (1) - from that place, and add 1 repeat to it
    03:44:992 (1) - Remove 1 repeat and add a note at 03:45:472
    03:51:712 (1) - This feels a bit off, I think it's better to just replace it with 2 notes
    (Don't forget to check the NC's on the stream, That might've gotten a bit messy after those changes)
If there are any questions feel free to contact me in game :3

Good luck getting this ranked
Thanks for the mod guys.
Last edited by 787B , edited 1 time in total.
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk

Kyshiro wrote:

MystykAMV's Insane

  • There's a lot of inconsistency in the NC's, I tried listing all of them, you should recheck afterwards whether I missed something

    00:44:032 (1) - Add NC - no, because nothing special changed here
    00:44:512 (3) - Remove NC - no, because of the piano sound
    00:45:472 (3) - Remove NC - okay
    00:51:232 (7) - Add NC - no, I think it's not necessary, because it fits with the previous notes
    00:52:192 (1) - Remove NC - no, because of the piano
    00:56:512 (1) - Remove NC - okay
    00:56:992 (3) - Add NC - okay
    01:17:392 (1) - Remove NC - okay
    01:19:072 (8) - Remove NC - no, because I'm following the background sound
    01:20:032 (1) - Add NC - no, because of the previous one
    01:21:232 (1) - Remove NC - no, because there is a new sound coming here which is loud
    01:23:872 (5) - Add NC - okay
    01:25:552 (1) - Remove NC - okay
    01:29:392 (1) - Remove NC - no, because the sound changes a bit and it fits with the following two notes
    01:30:112 (3) - Add NC - no, because there is no reason to, and it's together with the previous one
    01:31:552 (1) - Remove NC - okay
    02:07:312 (1) - Remove NC - no, the combo number would be too big
    02:13:312 (5) - Remove NC - okay
    02:23:872 (1) - Add NC - no, because it fits with the prevous notes' melody
    02:24:112 (2) - Remove NC - no, because the piano starts here
    02:53:872 (1) - Remove NC - no, because there is a new sound here
    02:54:352 (4) - Add NC - no, because I didn't change the previous one, and I don't want such a short combo
    02:55:312 (6) - Remove NC - no, because of the drums
    03:00:832 (3) - Remove NC - no, because the melody changes
    03:09:232 (1) - Remove NC - no, because there is another sound in the background
    03:09:952 (2) - Add NC - no, because it is together with the previous slider, but I added NC after this note
    03:43:072 (1) - This stream plays really awkward, Remove 1 repeat, should be a note at 03:43:552 - changed
    03:44:032 (6) - Remove this note and start 03:44:152 (1) - from that place, and add 1 repeat to it - changed
    03:44:992 (1) - Remove 1 repeat and add a note at 03:45:472 - changed
    03:51:712 (1) - This feels a bit off, I think it's better to just replace it with 2 notes - changed
    (Don't forget to check the NC's on the stream, That might've gotten a bit messy after those changes)
Thanks for the mod!

Here's my diff, please remember that I didn't change the combo colour and didn't touch the kiai times:
SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: - A Favorita - Bajo fondo - Pa'bailar.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44272
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Pa' Bailar
TitleUnicode:Pa' Bailar
Artist:Bajofondo
ArtistUnicode:Bajofondo
Creator:Wolf
Version:MystykAMV's Insane
Source:
Tags:Tango Mar Dulce MystykAMV
BeatmapID:209668
BeatmapSetID:60691

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png"
//Break Periods
2,61032,67612
2,107112,120172
2,153192,159772
2,161352,163612
2,165192,167452
2,169032,171292
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
7072.89928786028,480,4,2,0,100,1,0
14752,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
160672,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
176032,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
222112,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
235552,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
236032,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
236152,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
236512,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
236632,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 224,31,36
Combo2 : 136,136,136

[HitObjects]
88,192,14752,6,0,P|92:288|180:324,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,48,15712,1,0,0:0:0
432,96,15952,1,0,0:0:0
456,192,16192,1,8,0:0:0
360,192,16432,2,0,P|348:180|328:204|312:192,2,50
56,192,17152,5,8,0:0:0
344,336,17632,1,0,0:0:0
432,288,17872,1,0,0:0:0
456,192,18112,1,8,0:0:0
360,192,18352,2,0,P|348:180|328:204|312:192,2,50
256,36,19072,5,8,0:0:0
256,344,19552,1,2,0:0:0
336,308,19792,2,0,P|256:256|176:308,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,320,20392,1,2,0:0:0
176,332,20512,2,0,P|96:384|16:333,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,84,21472,5,0,0:0:0
256,32,21712,1,0,0:0:0
340,84,21952,1,8,0:0:0
404,340,22432,5,2,0:0:0
108,340,22912,1,8,0:0:0
316,148,23392,5,0,0:0:0
256,232,23632,1,0,0:0:0
196,148,23872,1,8,0:0:0
256,68,24112,2,0,P|268:56|244:36|256:20,2,50
368,72,24592,2,0,P|404:108|412:156,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,236,25072,2,0,P|324:200|316:148,2,100
352,336,25792,1,8,0:0:0
256,296,26032,1,0,0:0:0
160,336,26272,5,2,0:0:0
472,192,26752,1,8,0:0:0
160,48,27232,1,0,0:0:0
220,128,27472,2,0,P|252:88|260:40,2,100,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,192,28192,1,2,0:0:0
372,192,28672,5,8,0:0:0
292,256,28912,2,0,P|260:296|252:344,2,100
352,336,29632,1,8,0:0:0
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256,300,189232,6,0,P|232:268|276:240|256:204,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,189952,1,8,0:0:0
376,192,190192,5,0,0:0:0
364,192,190312,1,0,0:0:0
352,192,190432,1,4,3:3:0
340,192,190552,1,4,3:3:0
328,192,190672,1,4,3:3:0
236,144,190912,2,0,P|224:192|236:240,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,288,191392,6,0,P|80:192|108:96,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,52,192112,2,0,P|312:52|348:76,1,100
396,192,192592,2,0,P|396:248|372:284,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,193072,1,0,0:0:0
256,52,193312,6,0,P|200:52|164:76,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,192,193792,2,0,P|116:248|140:284,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,356,194272,2,0,P|232:332|284:288|256:260,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,192,194992,1,0,0:0:0
144,192,195232,1,2,0:0:0
376,44,195712,6,0,P|428:56|456:92,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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36,192,197632,1,8,0:0:0
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44,340,199552,5,8,0:0:0
136,280,199792,1,0,0:0:0
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336,156,201472,1,8,0:0:0
176,228,201712,1,0,0:0:0
468,44,201952,5,2,0:0:0
376,104,202192,1,0,0:0:0
468,164,202432,1,8,0:0:0
44,108,202912,6,0,P|68:64|112:40,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,140,203392,1,8,0:0:0
256,352,203872,1,0,0:0:0
256,252,204112,1,0,0:0:0
256,240,204232,1,0,0:0:0
256,228,204352,2,0,P|208:168|312:108|256:40,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,205312,1,8,0:0:0
120,328,205792,6,0,P|180:248,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,56,206272,2,0,P|332:136,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,206752,1,4,0:0:0
40,192,207232,6,0,P|52:140|80:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,192,207712,1,0,0:0:0
216,120,207952,2,0,P|228:68|256:32,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,208672,6,0,P|460:244|432:280,1,100
364,192,209152,1,8,0:0:0
296,264,209392,2,0,P|284:316|256:352,2,100
256,152,210112,1,8,0:0:0
168,320,210592,6,0,P|76:332|60:244,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,211792,1,0,0:0:0
344,320,212032,2,0,P|436:332|452:244,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,36,212992,1,8,0:0:0
128,192,213472,6,0,P|152:240|192:260,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,192,213952,2,0,P|360:144|320:124,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,348,214432,1,2,0:0:0
440,344,214672,6,0,P|416:300|380:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,215152,2,0,P|221:227|197:271,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,192,215632,2,0,P|366:156|390:112,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,112,216112,1,0,0:0:0
72,40,216352,6,0,P|96:84|132:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,216832,2,0,P|291:157|315:113,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,192,217312,2,0,P|146:228|122:272,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,217792,1,8,0:0:0
376,192,218272,5,0,0:0:0
368,180,218392,1,0,0:0:0
360,168,218512,1,0,0:0:0
352,156,218632,1,0,0:0:0
344,144,218752,1,8,0:0:0
336,132,218872,1,0,0:0:0
328,120,218992,1,0,0:0:0
320,108,219112,1,0,0:0:0
312,96,219232,1,0,0:0:0
256,348,219712,5,8,0:0:0
80,244,220192,2,0,P|80:168|200:164|200:96,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,192,221152,6,0,P|360:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,221632,1,4,3:3:0
244,192,221752,1,4,3:3:0
232,192,221872,1,4,3:3:0
156,320,222112,5,0,0:0:0
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176,244,222352,1,0,0:0:0
148,220,222472,1,0,0:0:0
120,192,222592,1,8,0:0:0
88,168,222712,1,0,0:0:0
60,144,222832,1,0,0:0:0
48,104,222952,1,0,0:0:0
32,56,223072,6,0,P|48:36|68:24,3,50
108,20,223552,5,8,0:0:0
120,60,223672,1,0,0:0:0
160,64,223792,1,0,0:0:0
192,88,223912,1,0,0:0:0
212,124,224032,6,0,P|236:128|264:124,3,50
300,116,224512,5,8,0:0:0
320,88,224632,1,0,0:0:0
352,64,224752,1,0,0:0:0
392,60,224872,1,0,0:0:0
416,28,224992,6,0,P|440:28|464:40,3,50
488,72,225472,5,8,0:0:0
464,104,225592,1,0,0:0:0
452,144,225712,1,0,0:0:0
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392,192,225952,1,0,0:0:0
364,220,226072,1,0,0:0:0
336,244,226192,1,0,0:0:0
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356,320,226432,2,0,P|408:320,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,320,226912,6,0,P|106:320,2,50
188,284,227272,1,0,0:0:0
176,244,227392,1,8,0:0:0
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120,192,227632,1,0,0:0:0
256,44,227872,5,0,0:0:0
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256,108,228112,1,0,0:0:0
256,144,228232,1,0,0:0:0
256,176,228352,1,8,0:0:0
256,208,228472,1,0,0:0:0
256,240,228592,1,0,0:0:0
256,272,228712,1,0,0:0:0
256,304,228832,6,0,P|304:320|352:308,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,229312,2,0,P|424:176|377:187,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,260,229792,6,0,P|148:272|120:276,3,50
88,268,230272,1,8,0:0:0
64,244,230392,1,0,0:0:0
48,208,230512,1,0,0:0:0
52,172,230632,1,0,0:0:0
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160,140,231352,1,0,0:0:0
180,168,231472,1,0,0:0:0
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236,216,231712,5,0,0:0:0
276,216,231832,1,0,0:0:0
308,192,231952,1,0,0:0:0
332,168,232072,1,0,0:0:0
352,140,232192,2,0,P|396:88,2,66.6666666666667,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,192,232672,2,0,P|468:192,2,66.6666666666667
352,244,233152,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,233632,12,8,235072,0:0:0
72,192,235552,5,4,0:0:0
256,64,236032,1,8,0:0:0
440,192,236512,1,4,0:0:0
787B
769 posts
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Topic Starter
787B
Alright, everything updated!
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Hello Wolf.
Modding via M4M~ <3

Nice song. :)

Hmm~

[General]

  1. To me, it would be nicer to remove the first kiai time and have one at 03:18:101 (1,2) and ending at 03:18:101 (1,2) instead. The first kiai isn't really exciting to me, and more kiai towards the end would be better imo.
[Normal]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 00:21:221 (2) - This circle is a bit overmapped imo and isn't necessary. All it does is sound when there isn't really anything in the music for it to follow and it takes focus away from how unique the 00:19:541 (3,4,1) phrase is before it when the strings do their little interlude.

  2. 00:35:621 - Similar here, but the exact opposite. I feel as though we're missing a circle here to again make the string interlude unique from the rest of the section. Maybe add a circle leading into the next slider.

  3. 01:08:501 (1,2,3) - The placement is a bit ugly to me. Can you try to make the 3 blanketing the 2 more? I think it might be nicer.

  4. 01:29:381 (1,2) - Since this is the easiest difficulty, I'd recommend keeping all stacks rhythmically consistent for at least the first half of the song here. That is, when you have a stack, make sure there is the same amount of time between the notes that there was with the previous stack. At 01:27:701 (1,2) we have a stack with one beat in between the circles, but right after it at 01:29:381 (1,2) we are forced to read a different sort of stack. I can be confusing for new players, and can be very devious when playing with hidden and double time mods. I think just making the stack a 1/2 slider would be better. The triple stacks towards the end are alright imo.

  5. 01:33:461 (4,5) - I think you could make this section a bit smoother to play if you repeated the same rhythm that you did previously with the 01:31:541 (1,2). Extent the 4 to end at 01:34:181. This will just make the phrase play better and be easier to read for beginners imo.

  6. 01:37:301 (1) - I think a MAT might tell you that his is too soon after the spinner, but I really like it so I won't suggest any changes for it.

  7. 02:05:381 (6) - To me, it would be better to delete this circle. It will make this stack consistent with all the others and will make for a more simple rhythm here for the easiest diff which is nice imo.

  8. 02:13:781 (1,2) - A bit nazi, you can make this blanket look better if you make the sliders more symmetrical. Don't be afraid to sacrifice some spacing between the 1 and 2.


    104,172,133781,6,0,P|256:68|408:172,1,390,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    328,224,135701,2,0,P|256:168|184:224,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    164,272,136661,2,0,P|132:340,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    264,271,137621,6,0,P|388:279|384:171,1,260,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  9. 02:32:981 (4) - Hm, consider adding a NC here just like you do in the hard diff.

  10. 03:09:221 (3,4) - If you follow the stack suggestions, make sure to change this one also.
Hitsounds

  1. I think you use too many finishes in this diff. Consider removing some to make it more consistent with the hard diff.

  2. 00:45:461 (1) - Erm, maybe add a clap on the end of the slider here to keep consistent with offbeat clapping.

  3. 01:35:381 (1) - Maybe add a clap to the end of this spinner here to have a consistent pattern with the 00:49:301 (1,2).

  4. 02:53:141 (2) - Missing hitsounds on this slider imo. Maybe add a whistle to the head and a clap to the end like you have in the hard diff. That sounds very nice to me.

  5. 03:55:541 - For the last three objects here (the end of the spinner and the 03:56:021 (1,1)) I recommend using a finish - clap - whistle pattern because I think it fits the music the most. Have a finish on the end of the spinner because the strings are the loudest and most dynamic at that point. Then at 03:56:021 (1) have a clap because it fits nicely with the drum roll at that point. Then at 03:56:501 (1) have a whistle just like you have now because it fits perfectly with the softer string hit and it cuts out along with the music. I recommend doing this in all diffs.
[Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:15:221 (3) - I think how this slider is overlapped by the previous 1 is a bit ugly and is noticeable in gameplay. How about just stacking it on the tail of the 1?

  2. 01:31:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this placement, I think it's a bit awkward how flow reverses between the 01:32:501 (3,1). I think you could make it much better than it is if you tried something different.

  3. 02:16:661 (4) - A NC might be nice here to make this combo a bit shorter and to accent this drum transition really nicely. You do the same thing at 03:10:421 (1).

  4. 03:00:821 (1,2,3) - The flow is a bit bland here imo. How about adding a nice curve to the 3 to spice it up?

    Make sure that the 3 is symmetrical across the axis.

  5. 03:36:341 (2) - A bit strange how you have this slider placed. Consider having it centered in a blanket with the previous slider. I don't think you need to worry about the repeat arrow being covered, but if you do, maybe reverse the 2 and have it point the other way.

  6. 03:51:221 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, maybe instead of just stacking them, you could make it a bit more interesting and have a nice star pattern.
Hitsounds

  1. 01:44:501 (6) - Maybe add a clap the head here to continue with offbeat clapping and hit with the accent in the music.

  2. 02:01:301 (3) - A whistle is better than a clap here imo because this is an onbeat and a whistle fits the piano better. You used a whistle in the normal diff.

  3. 02:13:781 (1) - Maybe add a clap to the repeat here.

  4. 02:25:301 (1) - Missing clap on the repeat here I believe according to your pattern of claps.

  5. 03:03:221 (4) - Missing clap here imo.

  6. 03:54:101 (1) - I suggest using the same hitsound pattern here as in the normal diff.
[MystykAMV's Insane]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:37:781 (1,2) - Consider placing these sliders at the end of their respective curves from the previous jump pattern and having them blanketing a bit. I think it looks and plays a bit better if they're more curved and continue the pattern.

    If you do so, make the 01:38:741 (3) the same slider.

  2. 02:53:861 (1,2,3) - Maybe play with the flow a bit here and Ctrl+G this triplet so it points towards the center of the grid like the 02:53:381 (4,5,6). Seems a bit more interesting to me than what you've got now.

  3. 03:25:781 (1,2,3) - How the 1 and the 2 are a bit offset from the 3 looks a bit weird to me in gameplay. Maybe make the 1 and 2 point perfectly towards the center just like the 03:18:101 (1,2) are.

  4. 03:38:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - To make this stream a bit more interesting than it is, you could copy the 03:40:181 (2) and flip it over and use the convert slider to stream function.

  5. 03:42:101 - Honestly, I love the map up until this point. The streams are very messy and seem random. If I were you, I'd work a lot more on these streams and make them look really nice using the convert slider to stream function to create some perfect curves and snake streams. Most of the streams you have here feel like they were just made randomly. Also, try and make the repeating sliders, like 03:43:061 (1), rest within the flow of the stream instead of having them at a larger spacing and not fitting in the curve like you do now.
Great map, really fun ideas with sliders here. If you make the stream section more organized it will be even better.

Hitsounds

  1. Your use of finishes is different in each kiai time, but I think it may be on purpose, so I won't go into it.

Ok well I hope that helps a bit. I really enjoyed this mapset, so I'll shoot a star. :)
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello Wolf.
Modding via M4M~ <3

Nice song. :)

Hmm~

[General]

  1. To me, it would be nicer to remove the first kiai time and have one at 03:18:101 (1,2) and ending at 03:18:101 (1,2) instead. The first kiai isn't really exciting to me, and more kiai towards the end would be better imo. Not really necessary, I already spoken with Aleks719 about the kiais and it's alright now.
[Normal]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 00:21:221 (2) - This circle is a bit overmapped imo and isn't necessary. All it does is sound when there isn't really anything in the music for it to follow and it takes focus away from how unique the 00:19:541 (3,4,1) phrase is before it when the strings do their little interlude. Agreed with you, but the overmap isn't that bad. I actually did that on purpose, if you see the whole combo 00:19:541 (3,4,1,2,3) - you can see that I made that aiming for the visuals, not how it would sound.

  2. 00:35:621 - Similar here, but the exact opposite. I feel as though we're missing a circle here to again make the string interlude unique from the rest of the section. Maybe add a circle leading into the next slider. Agreed, changed.

  3. 01:08:501 (1,2,3) - The placement is a bit ugly to me. Can you try to make the 3 blanketing the 2 more? I think it might be nicer. Improved blanket.

  4. 01:29:381 (1,2) - Since this is the easiest difficulty, I'd recommend keeping all stacks rhythmically consistent for at least the first half of the song here. That is, when you have a stack, make sure there is the same amount of time between the notes that there was with the previous stack. At 01:27:701 (1,2) we have a stack with one beat in between the circles, but right after it at 01:29:381 (1,2) we are forced to read a different sort of stack. I can be confusing for new players, and can be very devious when playing with hidden and double time mods. I think just making the stack a 1/2 slider would be better. The triple stacks towards the end are alright imo. Nice point. Changed.

  5. 01:33:461 (4,5) - I think you could make this section a bit smoother to play if you repeated the same rhythm that you did previously with the 01:31:541 (1,2). Extent the 4 to end at 01:34:181. This will just make the phrase play better and be easier to read for beginners imo. Changed.

  6. 01:37:301 (1) - I think a MAT might tell you that his is too soon after the spinner, but I really like it so I won't suggest any changes for it. Thanks!

  7. 02:05:381 (6) - To me, it would be better to delete this circle. It will make this stack consistent with all the others and will make for a more simple rhythm here for the easiest diff which is nice imo. Deleted.

  8. 02:13:781 (1,2) - A bit nazi, you can make this blanket look better if you make the sliders more symmetrical. Don't be afraid to sacrifice some spacing between the 1 and 2. Thanks for that.


    104,172,133781,6,0,P|256:68|408:172,1,390,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    328,224,135701,2,0,P|256:168|184:224,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    164,272,136661,2,0,P|132:340,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    264,271,137621,6,0,P|388:279|384:171,1,260,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

  9. 02:32:981 (4) - Hm, consider adding a NC here just like you do in the hard diff. Oops, forgot this one, thanks.

  10. 03:09:221 (3,4) - If you follow the stack suggestions, make sure to change this one also. Done.
Hitsounds

  1. I think you use too many finishes in this diff. Consider removing some to make it more consistent with the hard diff. Overall removed some finish hitsounds.

  2. 00:45:461 (1) - Erm, maybe add a clap on the end of the slider here to keep consistent with offbeat clapping. Forgot this one either, thanks.

  3. 01:35:381 (1) - Maybe add a clap to the end of this spinner here to have a consistent pattern with the 00:49:301 (1,2). Agreed, thanks.

  4. 02:53:141 (2) - Missing hitsounds on this slider imo. Maybe add a whistle to the head and a clap to the end like you have in the hard diff. That sounds very nice to me. Not really necessary, I want just the clap here.

  5. 03:55:541 - For the last three objects here (the end of the spinner and the 03:56:021 (1,1)) I recommend using a finish - clap - whistle pattern because I think it fits the music the most. Have a finish on the end of the spinner because the strings are the loudest and most dynamic at that point. Then at 03:56:021 (1) have a clap because it fits nicely with the drum roll at that point. Then at 03:56:501 (1) have a whistle just like you have now because it fits perfectly with the softer string hit and it cuts out along with the music. I recommend doing this in all diffs. Done.
[Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:15:221 (3) - I think how this slider is overlapped by the previous 1 is a bit ugly and is noticeable in gameplay. How about just stacking it on the tail of the 1? Done.

  2. 01:31:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I don't really like this placement, I think it's a bit awkward how flow reverses between the 01:32:501 (3,1). I think you could make it much better than it is if you tried something different. I'll keep for now. It's not a big deal imo and I'll probably have to remap the whole section just to change them.

  3. 02:16:661 (4) - A NC might be nice here to make this combo a bit shorter and to accent this drum transition really nicely. You do the same thing at 03:10:421 (1). Done.

  4. 03:00:821 (1,2,3) - The flow is a bit bland here imo. How about adding a nice curve to the 3 to spice it up? Done.

    Make sure that the 3 is symmetrical across the axis.

  5. 03:36:341 (2) - A bit strange how you have this slider placed. Consider having it centered in a blanket with the previous slider. I don't think you need to worry about the repeat arrow being covered, but if you do, maybe reverse the 2 and have it point the other way. No changes here, sorry, I actually did that for the overlap.

  6. 03:51:221 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, maybe instead of just stacking them, you could make it a bit more interesting and have a nice star pattern. Sweet! Changed.
Hitsounds

  1. 01:44:501 (6) - Maybe add a clap the head here to continue with offbeat clapping and hit with the accent in the music. Forgot this, thanks.

  2. 02:01:301 (3) - A whistle is better than a clap here imo because this is an onbeat and a whistle fits the piano better. You used a whistle in the normal diff. Agreed.

  3. 02:13:781 (1) - Maybe add a clap to the repeat here. Forgot this one either, thanks o3o

  4. 02:25:301 (1) - Missing clap on the repeat here I believe according to your pattern of claps. Yes o3o

  5. 03:03:221 (4) - Missing clap here imo. o3o

  6. 03:54:101 (1) - I suggest using the same hitsound pattern here as in the normal diff. Done.
Ok well I hope that helps a bit. I really enjoyed this mapset, so I'll shoot a star. :)
Awesome modding, seriously.
Thanks for the star, have a nice day.
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[MystykAMV's Insane]

Map Design/Rhythm

  1. 01:37:781 (1,2) - Consider placing these sliders at the end of their respective curves from the previous jump pattern and having them blanketing a bit. I think it looks and plays a bit better if they're more curved and continue the pattern. - good idea! changed

    If you do so, make the 01:38:741 (3) the same slider.

  2. 02:53:861 (1,2,3) - Maybe play with the flow a bit here and Ctrl+G this triplet so it points towards the center of the grid like the 02:53:381 (4,5,6). Seems a bit more interesting to me than what you've got now. - okay

  3. 03:25:781 (1,2,3) - How the 1 and the 2 are a bit offset from the 3 looks a bit weird to me in gameplay. Maybe make the 1 and 2 point perfectly towards the center just like the 03:18:101 (1,2) are. - okay

  4. 03:38:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - To make this stream a bit more interesting than it is, you could copy the 03:40:181 (2) and flip it over and use the convert slider to stream function. - such a good idea, I like it a lot, changed!

  5. 03:42:101 - Honestly, I love the map up until this point. The streams are very messy and seem random. If I were you, I'd work a lot more on these streams and make them look really nice using the convert slider to stream function to create some perfect curves and snake streams. Most of the streams you have here feel like they were just made randomly. Also, try and make the repeating sliders, like 03:43:061 (1), rest within the flow of the stream instead of having them at a larger spacing and not fitting in the curve like you do now.
- okay changed, I hope it's better now *.*

Great map, really fun ideas with sliders here. If you make the stream section more organized it will be even better.

Hitsounds

  1. Your use of finishes is different in each kiai time, but I think it may be on purpose, so I won't go into it.
- you are right, they are different so I tried making them similar, changed


Ok well I hope that helps a bit. I really enjoyed this mapset, so I'll shoot a star. :)
Thank You so much for the mod! I loved your ideas, very useful mod, thanks a lot!
03:18:101 (1,2) - I also changed this, even though it wasn't in the mod, but it was disturbing me, that the distance was too close, so I used ctrl+G here.

And here is my diff:
SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: - A Favorita - Bajo fondo - Pa'bailar.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44272
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Pa' Bailar
TitleUnicode:Pa' Bailar
Artist:Bajofondo
ArtistUnicode:Bajofondo
Creator:Wolf
Version:MystykAMV's Insane
Source:
Tags:Tango Mar Dulce MystykAMV
BeatmapID:209668
BeatmapSetID:60691

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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0,0,"BG.png"
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2,107101,120161
2,153181,159761
2,161341,163601
2,165181,167441
2,169021,171281
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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256,40,128741,1,0,0:0:0
124,80,128981,2,0,P|148:124|192:148,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,80,129461,2,0,P|364:124|320:148,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,224,129941,1,4,0:0:0
44,256,130421,6,0,P|68:300|112:328,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,292,130901,1,0,0:0:0
172,196,131141,1,0,0:0:0
76,164,131381,1,8,0:0:0
468,256,131861,6,0,P|444:300|400:328,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,292,132341,1,8,0:0:0
340,196,132581,1,0,0:0:0
436,164,132821,1,0,0:0:0
256,36,133301,1,8,0:0:0
88,140,133781,6,0,P|188:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,244,134261,2,0,P|324:244,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,300,134741,2,0,P|216:232,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,224,135101,1,0,0:0:0
232,216,135221,1,8,0:0:0
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256,348,136181,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,136661,12,4,137621,0:0:0
48,48,138101,6,0,P|148:48,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,136,138581,2,0,P|108:136,1,100
156,232,139061,2,0,P|256:232,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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72,152,141461,6,0,P|96:60|188:48,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,124,142181,1,0,0:0:0
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256,352,143381,1,2,0:0:0
40,192,143861,1,8,0:0:0
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176,176,144341,1,2,0:0:0
256,92,144581,1,0,0:0:0
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256,92,145061,1,2,0:0:0
256,292,145301,1,4,0:0:0
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88,140,146261,1,2,0:0:0
256,292,146741,1,8,0:0:0
404,44,147221,6,0,P|356:60|332:100,1,100
424,140,147701,1,8,0:0:0
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380,320,175421,1,4,3:3:0
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296,192,180341,1,8,0:0:0
80,88,180821,5,2,0:0:0
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344,100,181661,1,2,0:0:0
344,112,181781,2,0,P|344:160|196:160|196:228,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,324,182741,5,0,0:0:0
256,364,182981,1,0,0:0:0
164,324,183221,1,8,0:0:0
352,96,183701,5,2,0:0:0
160,96,184181,1,8,0:0:0
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256,192,184901,12,8,186101,0:0:0
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40,340,188501,5,0,0:0:0
100,260,188741,1,0,0:0:0
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472,192,189941,1,8,0:0:0
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352,192,190421,1,4,3:3:0
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108,288,191381,6,0,P|80:192|108:96,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,52,192101,2,0,P|312:52|348:76,1,100
396,192,192581,2,0,P|396:248|372:284,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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268,264,196661,2,0,P|212:188|268:116,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,192,197621,1,8,0:0:0
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120,44,198580,2,0,P|152:44|152:120|176:120,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,199061,1,4,0:0:0
44,340,199541,5,8,0:0:0
136,280,199781,1,0,0:0:0
44,220,200021,1,0,0:0:0
256,36,200501,1,8,0:0:0
336,228,200981,5,2,0:0:0
176,156,201221,1,0,0:0:0
336,156,201461,1,8,0:0:0
176,228,201701,1,0,0:0:0
468,44,201941,5,2,0:0:0
376,104,202181,1,0,0:0:0
468,164,202421,1,8,0:0:0
44,108,202901,6,0,P|68:64|112:40,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,140,203381,1,8,0:0:0
256,352,203861,1,0,0:0:0
256,252,204101,1,0,0:0:0
256,240,204221,1,0,0:0:0
256,228,204341,2,0,P|208:168|312:108|256:40,1,200,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,205301,1,8,0:0:0
140,336,205781,6,0,P|200:256,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,48,206261,2,0,P|312:128,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,206741,1,4,0:0:0
40,192,207221,6,0,P|52:140|80:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,192,207701,1,0,0:0:0
216,120,207941,2,0,P|228:68|256:32,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,208661,6,0,P|460:244|432:280,1,100
364,192,209141,1,8,0:0:0
296,264,209381,2,0,P|284:316|256:352,2,100
256,152,210101,1,8,0:0:0
168,320,210581,6,0,P|76:332|60:244,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,211781,1,0,0:0:0
344,320,212021,2,0,P|436:332|452:244,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,36,212981,1,8,0:0:0
128,192,213461,6,0,P|152:240|192:260,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,192,213941,2,0,P|360:144|320:124,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,348,214421,1,2,0:0:0
440,344,214661,6,0,P|416:300|380:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,215141,2,0,P|221:227|197:271,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,192,215621,2,0,P|366:156|390:112,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,112,216101,1,0,0:0:0
72,40,216341,6,0,P|96:84|132:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,216821,2,0,P|291:157|315:113,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,192,217301,2,0,P|146:228|122:272,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,217781,1,8,0:0:0
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460,192,221141,6,0,P|360:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,221621,1,4,3:3:0
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256,77,227981,1,0,0:0:0
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256,243,228581,1,0,0:0:0
256,276,228701,1,0,0:0:0
256,308,228821,6,0,P|304:324|352:312,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,229301,2,0,P|424:176|377:187,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B
Alright, updated.
nanda2009
925 posts
Joined October 2009
nanda2009
A little check for M4M


All of it is suggestions.. Ignore it if it's useless...


[Normal]
  1. 01:29:141 - It feels empty here... Sudden stop of those claps makes this part weird... try this..
    SPOILER
    Try to move 01:29:381 (1) back by a 1/2 beat, and extend the repeat by 1... and add clap at 01:29:141
  2. 01:30:341 (2) - Don't NC this slider... do it like 00:43:541 (3,4,5).
  3. 01:33:461 (3) - clap on the end of this slider..
  4. 01:35:381 (1) - change it to slider? It's a [Normal] diff. Having this spinner then followed by an object spaced only 1/1 will be hard for new players... do it to something like this..
    SPOILER
    you might want to change some of the placement..
    SPOILER
  5. 02:13:781 (1) - this blanket looks weird to 02:15:701 (2). not really notable, though. Just saying.
  6. 02:29:141 (1) - same as 01:35:381 (1)
  7. 03:30:581 (1) - wonder if you want to place this so it'll look symmetrical, because 03:30:101 (3) and 03:32:021 (2) are symmetrical. put it like this :
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. AR+1?
  2. 01:22:421 (4) - this slider's path is blocked by 01:21:221 (3), you might want to change it to 3 circles..
    SPOILER
  3. 01:29:141 - same as [Normal] diff
  4. 01:35:381 (1) - what's the point of this spinner, It'll be better if it's a slider... but because this diff is a [Hard], I guess this is ok.
Great map.
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

nanda2009 wrote:

A little check for M4M


All of it is suggestions.. Ignore it if it's useless...


[Normal]
  1. 01:29:141 - It feels empty here... Sudden stop of those claps makes this part weird... try this..
    SPOILER
    Try to move 01:29:381 (1) back by a 1/2 beat, and extend the repeat by 1... and add clap at 01:29:141 Not really necessary, I was mapping according to the piano.
  2. 01:30:341 (2) - Don't NC this slider... do it like 00:43:541 (3,4,5).Done.
  3. 01:33:461 (3) - clap on the end of this slider.. Forgot this one, thanks.
  4. 01:35:381 (1) - change it to slider? It's a [Normal] diff. Having this spinner then followed by an object spaced only 1/1 will be hard for new players... do it to something like this.. Nah, it's not a big deal, I want to keep this spin here either for a consistency, since I've added the same spin on the same time on the other diffs.
    SPOILER
    you might want to change some of the placement..
    SPOILER
  5. 02:13:781 (1) - this blanket looks weird to 02:15:701 (2). not really notable, though. Just saying. I have problems when putting this slider here. I have no idea how to improve it, but if it's not notable I think it's fine.
  6. 02:29:141 (1) - same as 01:35:381 (1) Same either
  7. 03:30:581 (1) - wonder if you want to place this so it'll look symmetrical, because 03:30:101 (3) and 03:32:021 (2) are symmetrical. put it like this : Changed, thanks.
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. AR+1? Nah, I think it's fine, there's already an Insane for that, so I'll keep it.
  2. 01:22:421 (4) - this slider's path is blocked by 01:21:221 (3), you might want to change it to 3 circles.. The overlap here was intentional, so no changes.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:29:141 - same as [Normal] diff Same either.
  4. 01:35:381 (1) - what's the point of this spinner, It'll be better if it's a slider... but because this diff is a [Hard], I guess this is ok.I like how it fits with the song, and there's a same spin in Normal, so I've added here as well.
Great map. Thanks!
Thanks for modding!
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Byakugan249 made an irc mod on my diff, he is going to post it soon probably xD

So here's my diff:
SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: - A Favorita - Bajo fondo - Pa'bailar.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44272
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Pa' Bailar
TitleUnicode:Pa' Bailar
Artist:Bajofondo
ArtistUnicode:Bajofondo
Creator:Wolf
Version:MystykAMV's Insane
Source:
Tags:Tango Mar Dulce MystykAMV
BeatmapID:209668
BeatmapSetID:60691

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png"
//Break Periods
2,61021,67601
2,107101,120161
2,153181,159761
2,161341,163601
2,165181,167441
2,169021,171281
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
7061,480,4,2,0,100,1,0
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YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
IRC mod with mystyk.

SPOILER
10:00 MystykAMV: is listening to Bajofondo - Pa' Bailar
10:00 MystykAMV: insane
10:05 MystykAMV: well it was a bit long xD
10:05 Byakugan249: idc about the length when i test play lol
10:06 MystykAMV: lol okay
10:06 MystykAMV: well brb xD
10:06 Byakugan249: i was gonna suggest some things but alright
10:14 MystykAMV: im back
10:15 MystykAMV: okay sure! :3
10:15 MystykAMV: i wanna hear those suggestions
10:15 Byakugan249: this is up to you, but i think it sounds cooler if you can name the diff to "Mystyk's Insane"
10:16 MystykAMV: oh haha xD
10:16 MystykAMV: i don't mind
10:16 MystykAMV: its just there is another person with the username "Mystyk"
10:16 Byakugan249: ahh that's why D:
10:16 MystykAMV: http://osu.ppy.sh/u/Mystyk
10:16 MystykAMV: last active jan 27
10:16 MystykAMV: but i dont get it really
10:16 MystykAMV: level 0...
10:17 Byakugan249: yea i don't either orz
10:17 MystykAMV: look at history
10:17 MystykAMV: really i dont get it
10:17 MystykAMV: why doesnt it show anything?
10:17 MystykAMV: and total hits 0?
10:18 Byakugan249: who knows o.0
10:18 MystykAMV: <<
10:19 Byakugan249: this one involves 00:27:221 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - 
10:20 MystykAMV: sorry
10:20 Byakugan249: dc'ed?
10:20 MystykAMV: osu crashed
10:20 Byakugan249: ohh--ohh~ 
10:20 MystykAMV: <<
10:20 MystykAMV: as soon as i clicked on the time LOL kinda xD
10:20 MystykAMV: oh well can you tell again?
10:20 Byakugan249: alright
10:21 Byakugan249: the suggestion i'm gonna mention involves 00:27:221 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - 
10:21 MystykAMV: yeah?
10:22 Byakugan249: 00:28:181 (5) - align this note to (3). it makes a triangle and i feel that it'll be somewhat smoother for players during gameplay
10:22 Byakugan249: when i played this, the flow felt odd...
10:24 MystykAMV: oh
10:24 MystykAMV: but the distance is too close like this
10:24 Byakugan249: http://puu.sh/1TdPj you mean this?
10:24 MystykAMV: m alright
10:24 MystykAMV: i will just put it down a few grids
10:24 MystykAMV: but yeah basically
10:24 MystykAMV: i left 5 on the axis
10:25 MystykAMV: okay did same with
10:25 MystykAMV: 00:28:661 (1)- 
10:26 MystykAMV: or i shouldnt? xD
10:26 Byakugan249: it's your diff so it's up to you
10:26 Byakugan249: i'm only giving suggestions
10:27 MystykAMV: http://puu.sh/1Te00
10:27 MystykAMV: okay
10:27 MystykAMV: does this look fine?
10:27 Byakugan249: haha yea it's fine :P
10:27 Byakugan249: i was gonna suggest that next
10:27 MystykAMV: okay
10:27 MystykAMV: xD
10:27 MystykAMV: lol
10:28 Byakugan249: http://puu.sh/1TdPG
10:28 MystykAMV: ohh
10:28 MystykAMV: well i still want to have the symmetry with previous pattern
10:28 MystykAMV: so I don't want to change it as much
10:28 MystykAMV: as you did
10:28 Byakugan249: ahh i see 
10:29 MystykAMV: but i guess its still better :P
10:29 MystykAMV: since the shape looks xD kidn of square or whatver
10:29 MystykAMV: rhombus LOL
10:29 MystykAMV: paralelogramm
10:30 Byakugan249: lmao i haven't heard that shape in a long~ time
10:30 Byakugan249: rhombus
10:30 MystykAMV: lol hahaha
10:30 MystykAMV: xD
10:30 MystykAMV: buut
10:30 MystykAMV: i cant align 2 and 4 properly -.-"
10:31 Byakugan249: here's a trick
10:31 MystykAMV: turn off grid
10:31 Byakugan249: move it around while holding the shift buttom while DS is on
10:31 MystykAMV: grid snap
10:31 MystykAMV: oh
10:33 Byakugan249: 00:47:381 (4) - i feel that this whould be a NC because of the violin since it stands out IMO
10:33 Byakugan249: and it'll be consistent with your other combos
10:34 MystykAMV: but only one number for combo?
10:34 MystykAMV: or remove next one?
10:34 Byakugan249: yea remove the next one
10:34 MystykAMV: okay done
10:34 Byakugan249: 00:51:221 (7) - here as well
10:34 Byakugan249: remove the NC on (10 if you do so
10:34 Byakugan249: (1)*
10:35 MystykAMV: i dont want to remove NC from 1 <<
10:35 MystykAMV: cuz there is a special sound there
10:35 Byakugan249: ahh yea i can hear that
10:35 MystykAMV: the piano
10:36 MystykAMV: and 7 is still kinda together with the previous notes in my opinion
10:36 MystykAMV: someone already suggested the same but i rejected <<
10:36 Byakugan249: ahh alright then
10:36 Byakugan249: 00:53:141 (3,1) - maybe this? same reason about the NCs
10:37 MystykAMV: i dont know
10:37 Byakugan249: hmm...we'll move on while you think it over
10:38 MystykAMV: it would be alright if i changed but i think it is not necessary XD
10:38 MystykAMV: just hear the melody
10:38 MystykAMV: at 1 2 3
10:38 MystykAMV: it belong together
10:38 MystykAMV: türü türü tü
10:38 Byakugan249: ahh yea i see that D:
10:38 MystykAMV: and then the smaller sounds
10:39 Byakugan249: 01:13:541 (5) - i can see a possible blanket around (3), so how about curving this slider to blanket (3)?
10:40 MystykAMV: agreed xD
10:40 MystykAMV: done
10:41 Byakugan249: 01:14:261 (1) - stack this on the beginning of (3). i think doing this would make the transition smoother during gameplay IMO
10:43 MystykAMV: okay
10:43 MystykAMV: i dont think anyone would notice though since it already disappeares by the time (1) appears :P but changed it
10:44 Byakugan249: yea that's true...but when i map, i do that because of neatness
10:44 MystykAMV: yeahh
10:44 MystykAMV: i do it too
10:45 MystykAMV: so thanks for mentioning
10:46 Byakugan249: 01:32:021 (1,2,3,4) - hmm~... maybe do something like [http://puu.sh/1Teqv this]? i find it more fun for players during gameplay IMO
10:47 MystykAMV: hmm interesting
10:47 MystykAMV: but where did you put 3?
10:47 Byakugan249: at the beginning of (1)
10:47 MystykAMV: is it only a hit circle
10:47 MystykAMV: ?
10:47 Byakugan249: nope all 4 are sliders
10:47 MystykAMV: ah okay
10:49 Byakugan249: 01:38:741 (3) - make this slider look like (1,2). the arc looks different, and i think that may effect the flow in this IMO
10:52 MystykAMV: okay done with both
10:53 MystykAMV: don't you think its disturbing that this 00:54:101 (2)- is not in the same..direction as the others?
10:53 MystykAMV: i mean its not rotated exactly like the others
10:54 Byakugan249: actually i had no problems with that
10:54 MystykAMV: lol okay
10:54 MystykAMV: but it disturbs me so I will change it xD
10:54 Byakugan249: haha alright :P
10:54 Byakugan249: 02:13:781 (1) - align this to (4). i can see a triangular formation in this part D:
10:55 Byakugan249: http://puu.sh/1TeEN
10:55 MystykAMV: lol you see triangles everywhere xd
10:56 Byakugan249: well like i said, i focus on flow :P
10:56 MystykAMV: but then i should do the same with the enxt slider
10:57 Byakugan249: move it up a bit 
10:57 Byakugan249: the flow is fine like that from (1,2)
10:57 MystykAMV: i just copied and flipped (1)
10:57 Byakugan249: haha the lazy way :P
10:57 MystykAMV: :P
10:57 MystykAMV: but more punctual
10:57 MystykAMV: so..
10:58 MystykAMV: should i remove NC? 02:16:181 (1)- 
10:58 MystykAMV: i dont know where there is one combo there
10:58 Byakugan249: if that's a mistake, then you should remove it
10:59 MystykAMV: i dont know if it is xD
10:59 Byakugan249: it's better if you do IMO
10:59 MystykAMV: i think so too
10:59 MystykAMV: so changed it
11:01 Byakugan249: 03:34:421 (3) - replace this for a finish for consistency with the other notes since this one shows emphasis on the violin
11:02 MystykAMV: doesn't it feel too awkward?
11:03 Byakugan249: if it feels too awkward, then you can leave it
11:04 MystykAMV: well its alright i guess xD
11:04 MystykAMV: and i did the same at the previous places
11:04 Byakugan249: i noticed 1 thing
11:04 MystykAMV: ?
11:04 Byakugan249: there are several timing points that are unsnapped, including the end 
11:05 MystykAMV: oh
11:05 MystykAMV: well i didn't do those
11:05 MystykAMV: <<
11:05 Byakugan249: well maybe you should re-snap it D:
11:05 MystykAMV: so its better if you write it in the post and then the mapset creator will change it
11:05 MystykAMV: xD
11:05 MystykAMV: so maybe its not snapped properly in the other diffs too
11:06 MystykAMV: so its better if you mention that
11:06 Byakugan249: like i said...exams orz
11:06 MystykAMV: what xD 2 minutes
11:06 MystykAMV: you will just post chatlog
11:06 MystykAMV: "small mod via irc"
11:06 MystykAMV: show chatlog
11:07 MystykAMV: then mention that one thing
11:07 MystykAMV: about resnapping some timing points
11:07 MystykAMV: o/
11:14 Byakugan249: i guess i'll do that
11:14 MystykAMV: okay :33
11:14 Byakugan249: ACTION yawns ~_~
11:14 MystykAMV: yeah LOL
11:14 MystykAMV: you know
11:15 MystykAMV: 5:14 am xD
11:15 MystykAMV: so anything else you wanna tell me?
11:15 Byakugan249: nope that's all
11:15 MystykAMV: alright thanks im gonna post my diff then
787B
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Topic Starter
787B
Sweet!
Thanks for modding.
Updated.
Sushi
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Sushi
[Normal]
Looks good

[Hard]
00:49:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - each time I listen to this pattern, I feel like it would souds really better with that pattern :

it fits better with the music imo. Same applies to 02:06:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
03:22:901 (1,2) - The part after these two notes feels.... empty. It feels like there was something that has been removed, because nothing in the music actually matches that.

[MystykAMV's Insane]
03:46:421 (9) - This slider should be on 1/3


Good job on mapping something which is repetitive, I know that is hard to do =w=
787B
769 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
787B

Sushi wrote:

[Normal]
Looks good \o/

[Hard]
00:49:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - each time I listen to this pattern, I feel like it would souds really better with that pattern :

it fits better with the music imo. Same applies to 02:06:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Alright, changed pattern.
03:22:901 (1,2) - The part after these two notes feels.... empty. It feels like there was something that has been removed, because nothing in the music actually matches that. Agreed. Added an object at 03:23:381 (3) - to fix that empty feeling.

Good job on mapping something which is repetitive, I know that is hard to do =w= Thanks!
Thanks for modding!
Waiting for MystykAMV.
Mystyk
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Mystyk
Oh Thanks Sushi you are totally right xD changed it

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468,364,127061,1,2,0:0:0
360,304,127301,5,0,0:0:0
352,300,127421,1,0,0:0:0
344,296,127541,1,8,0:0:0
256,240,127781,1,0,0:0:0
168,296,128021,1,4,0:0:0
256,40,128501,5,8,0:0:0
256,40,128741,1,0,0:0:0
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388,80,129461,2,0,P|364:124|320:148,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,224,129941,1,4,0:0:0
44,256,130421,6,0,P|68:300|112:328,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,292,130901,1,0,0:0:0
172,196,131141,1,0,0:0:0
76,164,131381,1,8,0:0:0
468,256,131861,6,0,P|444:300|400:328,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,292,132341,1,8,0:0:0
340,196,132581,1,0,0:0:0
436,164,132821,1,0,0:0:0
256,36,133301,1,8,0:0:0
92,164,133781,6,0,P|192:164,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,220,134261,2,0,P|320:220,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,300,134741,2,0,P|216:232,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,224,135101,1,0,0:0:0
232,216,135221,1,8,0:0:0
376,76,135461,2,0,P|304:144,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,348,136181,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,136661,12,4,137621,0:0:0
48,48,138101,6,0,P|148:48,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,136,138581,2,0,P|108:136,1,100
156,232,139061,2,0,P|256:232,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,48,139541,6,0,P|364:48,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,136,140021,2,0,P|404:136,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,332,140981,1,8,0:0:0
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256,124,142181,1,0,0:0:0
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256,352,143381,1,2,0:0:0
40,192,143861,1,8,0:0:0
160,192,144101,5,0,0:0:0
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176,176,144341,1,2,0:0:0
256,92,144581,1,0,0:0:0
392,192,144821,1,8,0:0:0
256,92,145061,1,2,0:0:0
256,292,145301,1,4,0:0:0
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256,292,146741,1,8,0:0:0
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424,140,147701,1,8,0:0:0
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424,244,148181,1,0,0:0:0
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116,236,149141,6,0,P|132:192|116:144,2,100,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,324,149861,2,0,P|12:288|4:240,1,100
3,142,150341,2,0,P|12:96|48:60,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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148,312,151061,1,4,0:0:0
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256,192,151781,12,4,152981,0:0:0
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256,308,164981,1,8,0:0:0
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168,272,172181,5,2,0:0:0
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132,60,173141,1,0,0:0:0
200,132,173381,1,4,3:3:0
208,140,173501,1,4,3:3:0
216,148,173621,1,8,0:0:0
312,252,173861,5,2,0:0:0
304,244,173981,1,2,0:0:0
296,236,174101,1,2,0:0:0
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372,312,175301,5,4,3:3:0
380,320,175421,1,4,3:3:0
388,328,175541,1,8,0:0:0
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256,192,177221,12,8,178421,0:0:0
120,192,178901,5,0,0:0:0
216,192,179141,1,0,0:0:0
28,192,179381,1,8,0:0:0
484,192,179861,5,2,0:0:0
296,192,180341,1,8,0:0:0
80,88,180821,5,2,0:0:0
180,88,181061,2,0,P|256:40|344:88,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,100,181661,1,2,0:0:0
344,112,181781,2,0,P|344:160|196:160|196:228,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,324,182741,5,0,0:0:0
256,364,182981,1,0,0:0:0
164,324,183221,1,8,0:0:0
352,96,183701,5,2,0:0:0
160,96,184181,1,8,0:0:0
256,260,184661,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,184901,12,8,186101,0:0:0
376,192,186341,5,2,0:0:0
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40,340,188501,5,0,0:0:0
100,260,188741,1,0,0:0:0
164,340,188981,1,8,0:0:0
256,300,189221,6,0,P|232:268|276:240|256:204,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,192,189941,1,8,0:0:0
376,192,190181,5,0,0:0:0
364,192,190301,1,0,0:0:0
352,192,190421,1,4,3:3:0
340,192,190541,1,4,3:3:0
328,192,190661,1,4,3:3:0
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108,288,191381,6,0,P|80:192|108:96,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,52,192101,2,0,P|312:52|348:76,1,100
396,192,192581,2,0,P|396:248|372:284,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,193061,1,0,0:0:0
256,52,193301,6,0,P|200:52|164:76,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,192,193781,2,0,P|116:248|140:284,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,356,194261,2,0,P|232:332|284:288|256:260,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,192,194981,1,0,0:0:0
144,192,195221,1,2,0:0:0
376,44,195701,6,0,P|428:56|456:92,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,292,196181,2,0,P|428:328|376:340,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,264,196661,2,0,P|212:188|268:116,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,192,197621,1,8,0:0:0
392,340,198101,6,0,P|360:340|360:264|336:264,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,192,199061,1,4,0:0:0
44,340,199541,5,8,0:0:0
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44,220,200021,1,0,0:0:0
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472,192,205301,1,8,0:0:0
140,336,205781,6,0,P|200:256,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,192,206741,1,4,0:0:0
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364,192,209141,1,8,0:0:0
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72,40,216341,6,0,P|96:84|132:120,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,216821,2,0,P|291:157|315:113,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,192,217301,2,0,P|146:228|122:272,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,217781,1,8,0:0:0
432,244,218261,5,0,0:0:0
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321,126,219101,1,0,0:0:0
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80,244,220181,2,0,P|80:168|200:164|200:96,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,192,221141,6,0,P|360:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,221621,1,4,3:3:0
244,192,221741,1,4,3:3:0
232,192,221861,1,4,3:3:0
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71,167,222701,1,0,0:0:0
59,137,222821,1,0,0:0:0
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76,76,223061,6,0,P|92:56|112:44,3,50
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180,47,223661,1,0,0:0:0
207,67,223781,1,0,0:0:0
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293,97,224501,5,8,0:0:0
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332,47,224741,1,0,0:0:0
364,44,224861,1,0,0:0:0
400,44,224982,6,0,P|420:56|436:76,3,50
453,103,225461,5,8,0:0:0
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399,220,225941,1,0,0:0:0
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392,312,226301,1,0,0:0:0
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96,336,226901,6,0,P|76:356|56:364,2,50,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,312,227261,1,0,0:0:0
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168,260,229781,6,0,P|148:276|124:276,3,50,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,268,230261,1,8,0:0:0
62,251,230381,1,0,0:0:0
43,224,230501,1,0,0:0:0
38,193,230621,1,0,0:0:0
48,160,230741,6,0,P|64:136|84:128,3,50
116,124,231221,5,8,0:0:0
149,124,231341,1,0,0:0:0
178,139,231461,1,0,0:0:0
198,165,231581,1,0,0:0:0
212,196,231701,5,0,0:0:0
239,214,231821,1,0,0:0:0
272,214,231941,1,0,0:0:0
299,196,232061,1,0,0:0:0
316,164,232181,6,0,P|328:136|360:124,2,66.6666666666667,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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316,220,233141,1,8,0:0:0
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787B
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787B
Alright, updated.
I also fixed some inheriting sections that were off with the beat.
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
As from M4M
Dreamy song.i like it :D

[Normal]
00:58:421 (2) - make bend this silder a little?
01:31:541 (1) - add finish at the beginning?
01:44:981 (2) - ^
03:17:861 (4) - i think this part is hard to beginner.how about make like this?



[Hard]
00:36:341 (2) - just suggestion.how about reduce 1 repeat?
00:43:301 (1,2) - i think this part is too easy.how about like this?that picture just exemple
01:29:381 (3,4) - ^
03:36:341 (2) - how about put a middle?


[MystykAMV's Insane]
01:16:661 (2) - how about make like this?
01:45:701 (1) - how about add some note here?not spinner.it sounds more clearly
exemple
02:15:461 (6) - add finish the end?
03:16:661 (3) - move 1 grid down

this map is clear enough.good job!
☆
787B
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787B

[Ranger] wrote:

As from M4M
Dreamy song.i like it :D

[Normal]
00:58:421 (2) - make bend this silder a little? Hmm, not really necessary imo.
01:31:541 (1) - add finish at the beginning? Done.
01:44:981 (2) - ^ Done.
03:17:861 (4) - i think this part is hard to beginner.how about make like this? Hmm, I think it fits well, if this was an Easy, I'd agree in changing it, but it fits well for a Normal



[Hard]
00:36:341 (2) - just suggestion.how about reduce 1 repeat? Not necessary, I like how it matches with the song.
00:43:301 (1,2) - i think this part is too easy.how about like this?that picture just exemple Thanks for the suggestion, but I really want those stacks.
01:29:381 (3,4) - ^ Same here either.
03:36:341 (2) - how about put a middle? Nah, the overlap here is intentional.

this map is clear enough.good job! Thanks!
☆
Thanks for modding!
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
OMG your stars lol
787B
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787B
I need bubble :c
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
sorry for being late, I changed everything, but I did it in a different way with the replacement of the spinner, thanks for the mod!
Here it is:
http://puu.sh/1VUpR
787B
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787B
Alright, everything updated!
Aleks719
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Aleks719
General
4/3/4/5 in Normal, 6/3/6/6 in Hard and 6/4/7/6 in Insane. What a bad consistency in stats
use this: 3/3/3/3 for Normal, 5/4/6/5 for Hard, can leave same for insane... but still too low stats.

MystykAMV's Insane
03:45:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - relisten to the music, it's 1/3 here : http://puu.sh/1XM2Z

Hard

02:55:061 (3,4) - don't stack with previous same pattern, try to make them symmetrical or not
03:49:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - i can deal with 1/4 triples in Hard, especially in stack, even with short 5 note streams, but this place looks too hard. i'd make it easier :S
03:52:181 (1,2) - 1/3, not 1/2, look same place in Insane

Normal
03:42:112 - this kiai section is unsnapped
01:30:341 (2) - mmm, better avoid 1/4 in Normals. use 1/1 : add clap on 2, whistle on 3 : http://puu.sh/1XMiY
02:01:061 (1) - same, just add note at 02:01:301 + whistle
02:07:541 (2) - i'd make 1/2 slider with reverse here, red tick has loud sound : http://puu.sh/1XMkI
03:10:181 (1) - same about 1/4 here and next 1/4 too. turn them into 1/2 or 1/1, they give troubles in non osu modes
Mystyk
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Mystyk
Yay! Thanks for the mod Aleks! Increased the stats a bit and also changed the thing you mentioned :3
Here is my difficulty: http://puu.sh/1XOAA
787B
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Aleks719 wrote:

General
4/3/4/5 in Normal, 6/3/6/6 in Hard and 6/4/7/6 in Insane. What a bad consistency in stats
use this: 3/3/3/3 for Normal, 5/4/6/5 for Hard, can leave same for insane... but still too low stats. Done.

Hard
Fixed.
02:55:061 (3,4) - don't stack with previous same pattern, try to make them symmetrical or not Worked into something different.
03:49:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - i can deal with 1/4 triples in Hard, especially in stack, even with short 5 note streams, but this place looks too hard. i'd make it easier :S Hmm, considering the fact that this is a hard, and I really wanted a challenge in the end of the map, I think there's no problem at all on this. This part used to have a long stream, which I removed because people were complaining it wouldn't fit in a hard.
03:52:181 (1,2) - 1/3, not 1/2, look same place in Insane Well, I've changed, but honestly, a 1/2 can fit well here, probably because of the violin that makes it a 1/3, but if you forgot the violin, this is pure 1/2.

Normal
03:42:112 - this kiai section is unsnapped Forgot this one, thanks.
01:30:341 (2) - mmm, better avoid 1/4 in Normals. use 1/1 : add clap on 2, whistle on 3 : http://puu.sh/1XMiY Done.
02:01:061 (1) - same, just add note at 02:01:301 + whistle Done.
02:07:541 (2) - i'd make 1/2 slider with reverse here, red tick has loud sound : http://puu.sh/1XMkI Not really necessary imo, I personally think it fits well here. I also added a finish at the end of the slider because I've forgot, so thanks anyways for for pointing out this one.
03:10:181 (1) - same about 1/4 here and next 1/4 too. turn them into 1/2 or 1/1, they give troubles in non osu modes Done.
Thanks for helping out Aleks!
Updated everything again. You were very fast Mystyk xD
Mystyk
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Wolf wrote:

You were very fast Mystyk xD
lol yeah i check the thread from time to time :P
Aleks719
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short recheck

Insane
03:45:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - you'd better make this part more readable. so, nc for 1/3 pattern + raise spacing, it looks as 1/4. try, say, 0.9x ?

Hard
03:52:181 (2) - uh, you have set 1/4 here, but should be 1/3 : http://puu.sh/1Yh30
about leaving hard parts : overall star rating is 4.13 here. it's kinda unexpwcted to see triples, short streams in diff with low rating. that's wy it confusing

rest is ok, no kd ofc
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