This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月19日 at 12:31:11

Artist: Sound Horizon
Title: Hajimari no Chronicle
Source: Chronicle 2nd
Tags: Aramary 1st Story Renewal CD vincerio
BPM: 116
Filesize: 6065kb
Play Time: 03:23
Difficulties Available:

1. Boring (1.74 stars, 169 notes)
2. Challenging (4.92 stars, 454 notes)
3. Relaxing (4.61 stars, 384 notes)

Download: Sound Horizon - Hajimari no Chronicle
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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22th Beatmap.

Sound Horizon !!!

good luck :3

i'll will do my best
*hugs*

Sound Horizon Kingdom!
Star~

But for some reason, the "Hajimari" isn't showing up on the score listing page D:

Exactly, it does not show the subject competely due to the special symbol.
Already removed it.

Thanks for your attention

gdeath ><

bakabaka moe

SOUND HORIZON!

I like Sound Horizon

Sound Horizon <333

hey, vincerio. time to work (kick ass) Lol

gd gogo~ >w</

More challenging!!

Hmm...

Boring:
0:19:329 - The start of the beatmap is too rapid for a ''Boring'' and dosn't really flow... I suggest removing the slider and instead placing one at 0:19:846 1/1 long and a note at 0:20:622.
0:24:243 - Make it easier by removing (2) and repeating the slider once more.
0:26:829 - Don't repeat the slider here. Add another slider 1/1 long here instead and remove (1).
0:27:605 - New combo.

Relaxing:
0:33:036 - remove 4,5,6,7,8. Instead do this to stop 1/1s in a very nice bit: Make a slider at 0:33:036 1/1 long. Then a slider at 0:33:812 1/1 long and then a slider at 0:34:588 1/2 long. Then add notes at 0:35:105 and at 0:35:364. Now, make the new (7) new combo.
0:35:881 - Remove. New combo the note 1/2 after
0:49:071 - Make twice as long. Remove (6) and put (5) 1/2 to the back.
1:39:243 - This probably is unrankable because the slider goes over itself so players won't know where it starts and which way it goes. Although you maybe would want the storyboarded arrows at the moment telling the player which way it goes, see how it is done in this beatmap: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/9273
1:47:002 - ^

Challenging:
1:14:415 - New combo
1:16:096 - No new combo
1:50:105 - Unstack, too weird.
2:14:674 - New combo

[Challenging]
00:43:122 (9) - Remove finish, it sound weird
01:08:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - Same as the right hand side is better.
01:15:450 (8-1st) - Clap?
01:37:174 (1) - Put on the middle of the top, you put lift a bit.
02:51:657 (13) - I think the no sound of the slider can't be no sound of this 02:52:174
Second time
00:41:053 (5-2nd) - Finish
00:52:950 (7,8) - I thinik clap is better.
01:12:346 (8) - Fnish
01:19:846 (5) - Remove finsih
01:20:622 (1) - Finish
02:17:777 (7,8) - Clap, remove finish is better.
02:21:398 (12-2nd) - Finish
02:30:708 (14-2nd) - Finish
02:34:329 (7,8) - Clap is bette than finish
02:44:157 (4) - This 0.5 is quite strange

[Relaxing]
00:42:088 (7-2nd) - Finish
01:28:381 (13) - Finish
03:20:622 (4) - New combo?

[All]
Quite well, good luck.
STAR.

Hushu wrote:

Hmm...

Boring:
0:19:329 - The start of the beatmap is too rapid for a ''Boring'' and dosn't really flow... I suggest removing the slider and instead placing one at 0:19:846 1/1 long and a note at 0:20:622. Agree, pattern changed.
0:24:243 - Make it easier by removing (2) and repeating the slider once more. Fixed
0:26:829 - Don't repeat the slider here. Add another slider 1/1 long here instead and remove (1). Not changed.
0:27:605 - New combo. No.

Relaxing:
0:33:036 - remove 4,5,6,7,8. Instead do this to stop 1/1s in a very nice bit: Make a slider at 0:33:036 1/1 long. Then a slider at 0:33:812 1/1 long and then a slider at 0:34:588 1/2 long. Then add notes at 0:35:105 and at 0:35:364. Now, make the new (7) new combo.
Thanks for your good suggestion, but I wanna keep mines.
0:35:881 - Remove. New combo the note 1/2 after New combo here by following the lyrics.
0:49:071 - Make twice as long. Remove (6) and put (5) 1/2 to the back. Sorry, not changed.
1:39:243 - This probably is unrankable bec ause the slider goes over itself so players won't know where it starts and which way it goes. Although you maybe would want the storyboarded arrows at the moment telling the player which way it goes, see how it is done in this beatmap: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/9273 Players no need to know which direction to go as they even dont need to move their cursor by clicking the slider.
1:47:002 - ^ The same reason as above said.

Challenging: Sorry, all No.
1:14:415 - New combo
1:16:096 - No new combo
1:50:105 - Unstack, too weird.
2:14:674 - New combo

Thanks for your mod =)

KingsAL2 wrote:

[Challenging]
00:43:122 (9) - Remove finish, it sound weird
01:08:984 (4,5,6,7,8) - Same as the right hand side is better.
01:15:450 (8-1st) - Clap?
01:37:174 (1) - Put on the middle of the top, you put lift a bit. Fixed
02:51:657 (13) - I think the no sound of the slider can't be no sound of this 02:52:174
Second time
00:41:053 (5-2nd) - Finish
00:52:950 (7,8) - I thinik clap is better.
01:12:346 (8) - Fnish
01:19:846 (5) - Remove finsih
01:20:622 (1) - Finish
02:17:777 (7,8) - Clap, remove finish is better.
02:21:398 (12-2nd) - Finish
02:30:708 (14-2nd) - Finish
02:34:329 (7,8) - Clap is bette than finish
02:44:157 (4) - This 0.5 is quite strange

[Relaxing]
00:42:088 (7-2nd) - Finish
01:28:381 (13) - Finish
03:20:622 (4) - New combo? kk

[All]
Quite well, good luck.
STAR.

Also, thanks for your mod =)

HI

[General]
204kbps mp3 file change to 128~192 plz
remember delete osb file before submitting
offset=18553

[Boring] ← nice song , why boring 0.0
00:19:588 (1,2) - don't overlap is better imo
00:21:657 ~ 00:32:260 - soft-hitfinish is mess and loudly
00:49:588 (1,2,3) - kinda unreadble to a beginner
01:07:174 (2) - strange shape 0.0
01:16:484 (3) - arc ?
01:22:691 (1) - if you want parts of (1) go around (4) , I think you can make it better
01:26:829 (6) - why not change arc at 01:27:217 , to follow the vocal
short diff lol

[Relaxing]
hitsound is strange
01:26:829 (11) - end at 01:27:174 ?
01:39:243 (3) - unreadble
01:47:002 (2) - ^
02:33:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make them like 02:16:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ?
03:11:829 (7) - newcombo
03:12:088 (1) - cancel newcombo
03:23:208 (6) - ._.

[Challenging]
03:23:467 (6,7,8) - spacing
terrible jump @_@

That's all

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[General]
204kbps mp3 file change to 128~192 plz
remember delete osb file before submitting
offset=18553

[Boring] ← nice song , why boring 0.0
00:19:588 (1,2) - don't overlap is better imo but looks ugly if putthing them far away.
00:21:657 ~ 00:32:260 - soft-hitfinish is mess and loudly kk, the volume is turned down.
00:49:588 (1,2,3) - kinda unreadble to a beginner totally disagree.
01:07:174 (2) - strange shape 0.0 nope, clear enough to follow imo. but still thanks for your suggestion.
01:16:484 (3) - arc ? kk
01:22:691 (1) - if you want parts of (1) go around (4) , I think you can make it better Changed the slider shape to have the way to go clearly.
01:26:829 (6) - why not change arc at 01:27:217 , to follow the vocal Sorry, no! Try again to listen to the music with eager attention.
short diff lol

[Relaxing]
hitsound is strange
01:26:829 (11) - end at 01:27:174 ?
01:39:243 (3) - unreadble fixed
01:47:002 (2) - ^ fixed
02:33:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make them like 02:16:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ? No, isnt good to repeat the same pattern.
03:11:829 (7) - newcombo
03:12:088 (1) - cancel newcombo
03:23:208 (6) - ._. changed pattern

[Challenging]
03:23:467 (6,7,8) - spacing It's intentional.
terrible jump @_@

That's all

Thanks for mod =)

NI HAO

General
* I really really really don't like the black combo color, please change the combo color
* I feel the MP3 is cut suddenly

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Boring
* Why you half mapped this? Please full mapped. Full mapped in easy diff is doesn't matter......

00:23:726 (1) - Add finish at startpoint and 1st repeating slider and add clap at 2nd repeating slider
00:25:019 (2,3,4) - I think I get a bit confusing of this. First, I click 00:23:726 (1) with beat and I get click earlier in 00:25:019 (2). Try put this stuff in white tick
00:27:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - AFAIK, the 8 combos are too high for easy diff

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Relaxing
* Long combos (If this Hard diff, max 9 or 10 combos?) can be disrupt while playing and multiplaying (according to FAQ in Map Design Issue). For example 01:02:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14)

00:49:588 (5) - I guess the slidertrace is almost off-screen
01:27:864 (12) - New combo?
02:02:260 (1) - Since this is relaxing diff, how about move this object close to the spinner to make better flow? lol
02:06:657 (5) - Move 1 grid left? (Nazi)
02:31:484 (6) - New combo?
02:44:157 (3) - I am pretty not sure, this object seems place in HP Bar, it'll be odd to see. But, I am not sure about this if this unacceptable or not
02:49:846 (x) - Add note here and add finish to make better flow?
03:04:588 (1) - Spread this stacks? I get click this earlier because I thought this object was place in red tick
03:23:208 (6) - Clap at startpoint?

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Challenging
00:38:726 (7) - Inconsistent spacing
00:40:019 (1) - ^
01:15:838 (9) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
01:17:777 (7) - ^
01:25:924 (2) - ^
02:28:122 (5) - ^
02:44:157 (4) - I think sudden slow slider is not good for me, IMO. Try something else?
03:24:243 (9) - Ugly slider~

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I think that's all

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

General
* I really really really don't like the black combo color, please change the combo color Changed
* I feel the MP3 is cut suddenly It's an original song. The composer made it as it is. can do nothing for that.

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Boring
* Why you half mapped this? Please full mapped. Full mapped in easy diff is doesn't matter......

00:23:726 (1) - Add finish at startpoint and 1st repeating slider and add clap at 2nd repeating slider
00:25:019 (2,3,4) - I think I get a bit confusing of this. First, I click 00:23:726 (1) with beat and I get click earlier in 00:25:019 (2). Try put this stuff in white tick Nope, stacked by following the lyrics.
00:27:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - AFAIK, the 8 combos are too high for easy diff Fix'd

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Relaxing
* Long combos (If this Hard diff, max 9 or 10 combos?) can be disrupt while playing and multiplaying (according to FAQ in Map Design Issue). For example 01:02:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14)
Re-set them. now looks better~

00:49:588 (5) - I guess the slidertrace is almost off-screen Note yet
01:27:864 (12) - New combo? kk
02:02:260 (1) - Since this is relaxing diff, how about move this object close to the spinner to make better flow? lol
02:06:657 (5) - Move 1 grid left? (Nazi) kk
02:31:484 (6) - New combo? kk
02:44:157 (3) - I am pretty not sure, this object seems place in HP Bar, it'll be odd to see. But, I am not sure about this if this unacceptable or not Fix'd
02:49:846 (x) - Add note here and add finish to make better flow? Nice idea, fixed
03:04:588 (1) - Spread this stacks? I get click this earlier because I thought this object was place in red tick
03:23:208 (6) - Clap at startpoint? kk

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Challenging
00:38:726 (7) - Inconsistent spacing Fix'd
00:40:019 (1) - ^ ^
01:15:838 (9) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider Fix'd
01:17:777 (7) - ^ ^
01:25:924 (2) - ^ ^
02:28:122 (5) - ^ ^
02:44:157 (4) - I think sudden slow slider is not good for me, IMO. Try something else?
03:24:243 (9) - Ugly slider~ Fix'd

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I think that's all

Thanks for your mod. Helped me a lot =)

o(*￣▽￣*)ブ~★

chyan~~ \=D/

Challenging
01:27:476 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't think this stream fits the music ;_;

Relaxing
01:50:622 - add note, or move (3) here.

Boring
aww only mapped half ;_;

great mapset anyway

/runs~

Lizbeth wrote:

chyan~~ \=D/

Challenging
01:27:476 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't think this stream fits the music ;_; Removed stream and add really really relaxing pattern~

Relaxing
01:50:622 - add note, or move (3) here. Nope, for the consistency with challenging and sound wried if putting a note at this point as i see. sorry xD

Boring
aww only mapped half ;_; now its full ver =)

great mapset anyway

/runs~

Thanks for the mod. Liz~

M4M ^.^

Boring:

00:36:657 (1) Finish

Nice mapped :3


Relaxing:

01:50:105 (2,3) Are you sure? I think you should delete the finishers

Challenging

00:43:112 (9,10) You sould delete the Finishers
01:19:588 (4,5) Delete the Finishers
01:50:105 (5,6) Delete the Finishers


Nice mapped ^-^
Rank it, so i can play it ^.^

Nickname128 wrote:

M4M ^.^

Boring:

00:36:657 (1) Finish

Nice mapped :3


Relaxing:

01:50:105 (2,3) Are you sure? I think you should delete the finishers

Challenging

00:43:112 (9,10) You sould delete the Finishers sorry, it sounds good.
01:19:588 (4,5) Delete the Finishers same reason as above
01:50:105 (5,6) Delete the Finishers


Nice mapped ^-^
Rank it, so i can play it ^.^

Your other opinions are accepted, thanks for your mod!

亲爱的

偶像的图mod起来肯定全是nazi啦啦啦 给你充数的ww

Challenging

00:19:329(1)-add whistle?
00:48:295(5)-add NC?
01:10:277(1)-add finish?
01:11:053(4)-我觉得whistle加在前面比较好哇0.0
01:12:346(8)-这里加个finish如何? 从这里开始NC也比较好哦？不过注意到排版也无所谓啦xD
还有吐槽下..我这狗耳完全听不出clap音哈哈哈哈..
感觉这后面比较像副歌的部分加的音效还没前面多
后面那段慢的地方可以加点whistle咯 反正我觉得 01:50:364(6)-可以加个whistle或者finish =w=
02:29:415(10)-add NC? 或者(11)那里
03:24:243(9)-= =我真的觉得你最后个slider是随便拉的..尼玛别再最后出来个全图都没有过的slider形状好吗

骗kds 滚(

new combo issues fixed

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