Didn't the Hard Rock mode prove that wrong though

it didn't prove anything

I meant realistically

but maybe I'm at fault for taking a realistic perspective when designing a cartoon

Heres a small story, Found a 45° blade laying in a junk box so I wasn't too sure if it was dull so gave me a reason to test a roll of vinyl a bought from a company im not familiar with and to see if the blade was in shape. After running around the house with a 24" x 30yd roll of vinyl on my arm pretending to be megaman I came to the conclusion that the fastest means of a test with minimal waste was to 2 tone that pippy I readily had available and slap it on my pc case XD


But sadly the vinyl adhesion to its carrier cant cope with the thin tolerances of her hair which resulted 2 failed cuts but awell I'll just have to tweak it

Welp you might have to take that one up with another artist, Im not the person who designed the original base body. It was pulled from an old reference book out of laziness with moderate changes to her leg size, slightly moved arm/finger positions and changed her sharp chin but other than that its untouched for the most part.
Ohh and rounded off her hip bones being I like women with something to grab onto, needed something fast and simple and finding that pose & size almost translated perfectly for the idea I was gonna half ass so I used it rather than dicking around with a drawing manikin.

BUT... The finished example reference did have the base with a rather large head of hair which may have covered up the perception of a small head. Overall it seems fine to me plus the image you see is a 2 tone version of a branch off from the original project file so its basically fun scrap to play with, with plenty of errors to pick out mind you. It was gonna be a wallpaper till I realized it wasn't gonna work out with the BG having gradients and the subject not having any so I wasn't about to redo that BG just get a shade method to look right so it just became incomplete scrap


I would finish the original if I wasn't too busy playing around with this ugly ass thing XD...


Originally I thought I would complete this faster than that pippy but it's slightly over my assumed timeframe :<

This is so Awesome :3

I think that compared to the rest of the body her waistline - or at least where you drew her skirt - is too low. Her vagina would be right below where the star is pointing, and her skirt isn't covering that up at all. This is making her legs look larger than they are, and as such makes the hands feel out of proportion. Try moving her skirt up so that the bow hold it in place is actually entirely above her hips.

Her nose is a little too far to the left, but that's me nitpicking

I don't know, what ur mean... did u think its a chibi?? because of the head??
but i think everything is alright O.o?
u see?
V

I agree with Wojjan, her hips and possibly crotch (not her waist though) are a little too low. Try shifting them upwards a bit.

it does not seem off to me

at least, looking at the skeleton version

Welp I'd like to think im done with this XD



Full PNG, 3,430 x 6,020 pixels http://i.minus.com/dbeXKpb5p2JIeX/TaikoRun.png

So much bloom ._.
But very nice looking nonetheless. Good job man