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Topic Starter
Kanari
Nothing about my diffs then? ;o
Thanks for mod ^^
athiota33

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nothing about my diffs then? ;o
Thanks for mod ^^
I'm not doing a recheck,'cause I'm noob... ;A;
Sorry..><
Topic Starter
Kanari
Its fine ;D you did more then enough modding, thannks!~
Stefan
Okay, the Re-Mod what I promised (Btw don't KD this Post):

[General]:
- BG Size are fine.
- MP3 and Video too.

[Moon's Lullaby]:
00:15:051 (3) - Add Whistle at Start Point.
00:56:903 (4) - New Combo.
01:18:755 (6) - New Combo.
01:20:607 - Remove New Combo.
01:26:532 (1) - Add Finish at Start Point.
01:34:310 (3) - Move it to y:340, and short it to 01:34:495.
01:35:421 (1) - Remove the Hitsounds and remove NC.

[Neo's Relaxation]:
00:30:977 (5) - New Combo.
00:44:866 (7,1) - The Position is irritating. Move it so that (5) doesn't hide it.
00:44:866 (7) - New Combo.
00:45:051 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:49:310 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:50:051 (3) - New Combo.
00:59:866 (3) - Add Finish.
01:01:532 (5) - Add Finish.
01:02:829 (1) - Add Finish.
01:04:310 - Finish would sounds good too.
01:08:014 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:09:495 (6) - New Combo.
01:14:681 (7) - New Combo and add Finish at Start Point.
01:23:384 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:26:532 (1) - Add Finish at Start Point.
01:35:236 (5) - Remove Clap.
01:35:421 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:57:273 (6) - I might break this big Combo, so New Combo.
02:12:458 (2) - Add Finish. And set a short Kiai Time.
02:27:273 (5) - New Combo.
02:28:755 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:31:718 (1) - Remove Whistle. And then add at the Start and End Point Whistle.
02:47:644 (6) - New Combo.

[Crystal's Light]:
00:09:495 (9) - New Combo.
00:10:236 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:21:347 (9) - New Combo.
00:26:347 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:30:236 (6) - New Combo.
00:35:236 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:35:792 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:50:236 (4) - The Slider doesn't fit IMO.
01:02:829 (2) - Add Finish and short Kiai Time.
01:08:755 (2) - Add Finish.
01:14:681 (1) - Add Finish.
01:15:699 (1) - Remove New Combo and short it to 01:16:532.
01:31:532 (1,1) - Quite stupid to cut as two Spinner. Remove one Spinner and extend it as a long Spinner.
01:35:699 - Add short Kiai Time.
02:03:940 - 02:12:273 - That's horrible too hard. And I don't think, this should be the Insane Diff.
02:05:051 (1) - Why is it moved from (2), (3) and (4)?
02:24:310 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - The Distance of the Circles to the Spinner is way too short. And it looks like Spinner Spamming.
02:31:532 (6) - Remove Whistle. And then add at the Start and End Point Whistle.
02:45:421 (2) - Too close on the Spinner.
02:53:847 (1) - Short it to 02:55:051.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannnkyhuu~
Stefan
Next Post, derp~~

[Insane]:
00:04:310 (2,3,4) - Remove Whistle.
00:07:273 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:09:866 (2) - Remove Whistle and add Whistle at the Start and End Point.
00:12:088 (1,2) - Remove Whistle.
00:13:199 (2) - Remove Whistle and add Whistle at the Start and End Point.
00:20:236 (8,1) - Spacing is wrong.
00:25:607 - Add Circle.
00:25:607 (1) - (If you add Circle) New Combo.
01:00:421 - Add Circle.
01:07:458 - Remove Circle, because it doesn't fit.
01:08:014 (1,2,3) - Maybe this?: http://puu.sh/fn1b
01:10:977 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong.
01:33:199 (2) - This Slider doens't fit. Remove it
02:13:755 (1,2) - Lol. Even for Insane too hard.
02:45:034 - This Inherited Point is unused. Remove it.
02:46:162 (1) - Remove it and extend the Spinner before to the Time.
03:03:292 - (1,2) - Move it on one. [03:03:384 (2,3)]

I give you a Diff where I changed the Combos. Because it would take 5x more of that what I wrote now.
And it's easier to send you the Diff with the changed Combo than to write every single Combo change..
You don't have to take anything. It is the same like the Mod. But I'm really really lazy to explain you every Combo Change..
Btw I JUST changed the Combos, nothing else.

The Map needs alot of Work to be finished. Especially Insane need Work.
But I know you'll do it. Good Luck. ;)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Do you not want me to give you kd for that post too? x3
SinDemonDragon13
Oh gosh, I havent been here for such a long time ._.
Loneight
Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
I think ... sliders in this maps can be get pretty better .

[Easy]
00:56:903 (1) - get it like this ?! http://puu.sh/hkzB
01:29:495 (3,4,5) - this?! http://puu.sh/hkBX
01:30:607 (1) - get it like this ?! http://puu.sh/hkDy

476,176,56903,6,0,B|480:256|400:248|400:248|320:240|324:316,1,239.999971389771
176,220,89495,1,2
228,260,89866,1,0
248,320,90236,1,0
188,340,90607,6,2,B|216:264|76:264|104:340|104:340,1,159.999980926514

[Normal]
I think ... not have spacing is the best .

00:28:014 (2,3,4) - distance is different
00:42:644 (4) - add NC ?!
01:05:792 (3) - add finish in the slider of head ?!
01:31:718 (6,1,3) - (6) (3) add NC and (1) remove NC?!

[Hard]
Spacing is too much ?! OAO

01:22:088 (4,5,6,7) - I think the disance is different...and remove (7) and get (8) start in 01:23:384 ?beacause I feel strange . like this http://puu.sh/hkKb
01:53:755 (5) - add NC ?
02:13:755 (5) - add NC ?!
02:59:495 (6) - add NC ?
03:02:088 (1) - add NC ?!
02:25:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - why the middle is empty ?!
02:25:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think there ... can be much fun :).

[Insane]
00:33:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - get it be much fun ?!
01:05:792 (8,1) - (8) add NC and (1) removed NC ?!
01:21:903 (6) - add NC?
02:49:681 (3,4,5,6) - (3) cover (4) (5) (6)
03:03:384 (7,8,9,10) - add somthing in the middle ?!

[Sindemon's Insane]
01:03:755 (2) - remove it ?!


good song :)

And sorry to my poor English
M a n a
Can I make easy or normal diff ;w;? If not,I'll just mod your map ;3
Topic Starter
Kanari
l1106188: Thank you for modding all the diffs ^^
M a n a: sorry D: Too much diffs already and I already got a guest diff ._. a unexpected guest diff too ; x
Quilt
Normal
Please fixed DS
i think Circle size 4

00:44:495 (3) - deleat note?

00:50:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245488

01:12:088 (2) - delet note?

01:13:199 (4,5) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245489

01:22:644 (2,3,) - move 01:22:458

01:23:384 (1) - move 01:23:199 and add whisle

etc ....

Hard
00:44:310 (7) - move 00:44:495

00:48:755 (5) - lengthens 00:49:125

00:51:718 (2) - move 00:51:532

00:53:014 - add note?

00:55:977 - add note?

00:56:718 (4) - one reverse

00:58:199 - add note?

01:11:162 (2) - delete note?

01:20:977 (1) - no stack?

01:23:384 (7) - delete note?

01:23:570 (7) - move 01:23:384

02:10:607 (4) - remove finish?

02:14:125 (3) - delete note?

02:22:273 (3,4) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245503

02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove whisle

02:42:088 (1,2) - remove whisle

Insane
01:13:384 (11) - delete note?

01:16:532 (10) - delete note and add slider?

01:17:273 - add note?

01:17:458 - add note?

01:23:384 (1) - finishpoint 01:23:940

01:53:199 (5) - move 01:53:014

good song~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu for modding ;D
M O YA
Hello ~

[general]

Slider Tick Rate : 2 => 1

[Normal]
00:24:310 (2) => Stack
01:26:532 (1) => 01:26:532 ~ 01:28:755





[Hard]
AR:7

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01:15:699 (spinner) =>01:15:607~01:16:532
02:26:162 (x) => Add Note
02:45:421 (1) => Remove new combo
03:07:181 (1) => 03:07:273
merchat7
It's your lucky day A mod post from me after not modding anything for 2 weeks :D

For m4m and I liked the preview for this song. Modding this at 3am so I may make silly mistake and I haven't mod in a long time so sorry if I disrespect your mapping style/try to force my mapping style into your map. Remember that everything is just suggestion unless stated otherwise and if I give a long mod, I'm only trying to improve your map

[General]

- Hmm no higher quality video? Well I guess it's fine.
- Maybe name SinDemon's Insane to something else? Like SinDemon's Extra? Seem nicer then to see two Insanes. Or something related to the map, I notice this diff has small circles so maybe something related to it.
- What is Vocaloid2 :S. I checked this and some ranked map has this tag too. What is it?
* I've heard some Nico Nico Chorus song before and there is usually a list of who sang this? Like http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhQ6GQW2lA8 8 people in the description is who sing this. I think this is important since Usa & Hanatan have a couple ranked map on osu (not sure about other singers) and would be a shame if they sang in this chorus and their names not include in the chorus so I recommend checking this.
- Toku-P is composer?
Source: This field should generally only be included for Anime or Video Game songs, and occasionally for Novelty (Movies, TV, or Internet) songs. If the song is from an anime or video game, or is most famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here. Rock and Pop songs should generally leave the field blank: This is not to be used for things like album titles, and video games like Rock Band or Guitar Hero, which use already-popular songs, should not be named here.
Nvm, he's a composer who made song and upload to Nico Nico Douga http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Toku-P. Put his name in tags and put Nico Nico Douga in source. I am aware of this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/16226, but should definitely be change to this. Also this http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 0&g=0&la=0
- Use a silent slider slide for the beginning (not sure how many beatmaps you have, but I'm sure atleast one map you have contains silent slider track; search soft-sliderslide.wav and put it in your folder. Then in the timing setup panel, change the first timing point (the red one) to soft custom 1 http://puu.sh/i7Dg. Then put a timing point at 00:27:273 and change it back to default (to unsilent the slider track). Do this for all diff, slider track sound too loud here.

Should be all hopefully.

[Easy]

- Considering there are 5 diff, I'm wondering why this diff doesn't use the lowest circle size. Please use circle size 3, 4 is more fitting for Normal or harder.
- For a diff with this star rating, the difficulty setting are too high imo. I recommend Hp Drain 1-2, Approach Rate 2 and Overall difficulty 1.
- Hmm I recommend tick rate 1 since due to how slow the slider velocity is, make it all crunch up together and tick rate 2 doesn't work too well for the calm part.

00:00:00 - 00:25:792 - I see why you used ar3, lot of hit circles here. This is not nice to play for beginner due to how slow the approach rate is (you feel like hitting it too early) and you can easily do something else considering the music. I recommend slider (this is why I suggest tick rate 1 as the slider tick will sound overpowering at this part with tick rate 2 and silent slider slide). Basically this,
00:03:570 (1,2) - Slider start at (1) and ends at (2)
00:06:532 (1,2) - ^
00:09:495 (1,2) - ^ and put a new combo here (don't add any to previous notes or the next note)
00:12:458 (1.2) - ^
00:16:903 (4,1,2) - Repeating slider instead and add new combo here.
00:21:347 (1,2,3) - Same thing, no new combo.
Refer to this guide for interesting way to place these long sliders viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194. To be honest, just curving them and making them symmetrical works, example http://puu.sh/i7Ge, but try to experiment a bit with other shape to make it more interesting.
00:27:273 (1) - Would be better if you try some slider shape rather than leaving it straight. Doesn't look nice for me to see long slider left as straight.
00:30:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This really has to do with my mapping preference, but I don't like these hit circles. Same reason as before This is not nice to play for beginner due to how slow the approach rate is (you feel like hitting it too early) and you can easily do something else considering the music.
Consider this...
00:31:718 (2,3) - Slider (emphasize the finish) --- A slider begin is more emphasize then it end.
00:33:199 (1,2) - Slider instead for this as well.
00:39:125 (2,1) - A bit nazi, but move them more to the right, it looks like they touch the previous slider track so seem cleaner to move it.
00:39:495 (1) - This slider isn't perfectly symmetrical, be sure to refer to the slider guide I gave you to make it better.
00:41:532 (2,3) - Just my preference, but when note overlap each other like this in the easier diffs, I recommend a slider. Seem cleaner to me. http://puu.sh/i7IU
00:45:051 (5) - Make this symmetrical with (3) http://puu.sh/i7Ki
00:46:347 (1,2) - Same as 00:41:532
00:47:644 (1) - I recommend curving this slider, no real reason except that it looks nicer.
00:48:384 (2) - I recommend removing this note and adding a repeat to (1). Same reason as before regarding the overlap and this eliminate some of it.
00:58:384 (2,3,4) - Just do repeating slider like 00:59:866 (2), not nice to play stack at this approach rate.
01:02:829 (1) - Snap this to 0.8x distant snapping.
01:03:569 (2) - This slider is begging to be curve http://puu.sh/i7Ma.
01:05:792 (3,4,5) - Repeating slider, you should know why I suggest doing this (5 hit circles in a row is not nice to play at this approach rate).
01:09:495 (3) - Nicer if you try some slider shape for this.
01:14:681 (1,2) - I highly recommend a repeating slider (begin on 1, repeat on the white tick between the two hit circles and ends at 2). Main reason is after a space, it's hard to get the feel of the rhythm again and you need to time your hit precisely for a hit circle while not so much for a slider. Also since two hit circles like this suggests there is nothing between the two notes while I can clearly hear stuff going on there so nicer to have some hitsound on it.
01:15:792 (x) - I'm not sure how hard your normal is, but I would do a repeating slider here too (repeat on 1, ends on 2).
01:16:903 (5) - Experiment with red point (double click a white point two times) to accent some of the vocal/instrument since a plain straight slider doesn't represent the feel very well at all for me.
01:20:607 (3) - ^
01:28:755 (2) - Recommend a slider and end it on 01:29:125 to follow the vocal here more.
01:29:495 (3,4,5) - Recommend a repeating slider to avoid some of the ugly overlaps.
01:31:718 (2) - Try red points etc.

You didn't map the rest? This is a must. Think of it this way, I'm a beginner at this game, I saw this song and try the easiest diff. I find it too easy. I try the next diff and was surprised by how the map goes on for an extra 2 mins and eventually got too tired and fail this diff, not too nice for difficulty spread imo.

[Normal]

-A bit tired to mention some of the same stuff, but I recommend try to use red points/curve/do slider shape for your sliders and mix some slider for some of the part you use lots of hit circle.I will take a quick look through, but remember, like at the beginning, I didn't mention about the hit circles, but I recommend using more slider for this part.

00:26:347 (4,5,6) - Repeating slider to avoid overlap.
00:32:458 (4,5,6) - ^
00:50:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should focus on vocal and not instrument here, use some sliders. This pattern look like something that should be in hard/insane (stream).
00:51:718 (1) - This long slider is weird considering what you did for the previous part, should be map out.
00:54:495 (4) - ^
01:01:162 (3,4,5) - Repeating slider 01:01:903 (6,7,8) - Repeating slider. Similar feel but looks a lot cleaner and nicer to play.
01:10:051 (3) - You don't need this note, play just fine without it.
01:14:681 (1) - I find this interesting actually, but I find it weird you didn't do this in Easy actually. Hmm...it's not a problem I guess.
01:20:607 (5) - Try to avoid kick sliders (repeating slider with more than on repeat), you cannot know how many repeats a repeating slider is going to have and especially for the easier diff, beginners shouldn't have to think "Oh no! A repeating slider, I wonder how many repeats this is going to have" and instead enjoy the patterns. I suggest removing a repeat and add a hit circle instead. Then do slider for 01:22:088 (1,2).
01:34:866 (5,6,7) - Repeating slider, avoid overlap.
01:47:644 (2) - Again, I find these long sliders more suitable for an Easy.
01:56:718 (4,5,1,2) - To be honest, it plays fine and doesn't look that bad but I prefer if you do short sliders instead.
01:59:125 (5) - This is where I would expect a long slider actually. Another problem is this is a kick slider.
02:02:088 (2) - ^
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) - Just do a slider starting on (1) and ending on (4).
02:07:273 (1,2,3) - Definitely consider repeating slider and for all similar pattern.
02:19:125 (2) - Please curve it, the song feel isn't really straight to me.
02:21:347 (5) - ^
Slider speed change is not recommend for Easy & Normal. This is because beginner normally read spacing and when slider velocity change, so does the spacing. I recommend removing it, but if you want to keep it, please use 0.75x. This is too much and make slider really too slow.
02:31:718 (1) - I feel like saying use tick rate 1 due to how many slider ticks this have. Note: For previous parts with lot of hitcircle, please use some long sliders instead, the amount of hit circle make this part feel really intense while the song is a lot calmer here.
02:39:125 (1,3) - Curve
02:46:162 - 03:05:421 - You use too many hit circles. If you are curious why I find this a bad thing, take a look at most recently ranked map. There are never this many hit circles in a row and this song doesn't feel like this as well.

Should be map to the same spot as Insane for difficulty spread. Hmm... my best suggestion is to look at recently ranked map and see what they do. Some people don't want to do this, but this is honestly the best way other than to "map more."

I'm really too tired to mod anymore now, almost 5am. Took a quick look at Hard, Insane and guest diff.

Hard & Insane & guest diff
I find the long sliders quite weird when I can hear something playing during the middle of them. And same issue with lot of hit circles for parts which aren't really so.

SinDemon's Insane
I find the breaks really weird and breaks the flow, and definitely look at those long slider, I'm curious at why you didn't map them out.

The key to making your beatmap better is to mix slider and hit circle better and control when you use some of those long sliders. Be sure to keep working on it, self mod is key. Modding can only do so much, what you try to fix yourself is worth more than 100s of mod post imo.

Definitely take a look at the ranked map with Hatsune Miku singing this song. I see some nice idea in it (not all of the ideas are good through imo) and you should apply some to your map. Don't consider this as copying, but a nice way to learn what works and what doesn't. Well that's all from me. Sorry if lot of suggestion has to do with my preference (I prefer using sliders for most of my maps).

Edits: Fix some errors in post, so tired that I was repeating some stuff and spelling words wrong :P
Topic Starter
Kanari
Ohmaiigawdd.. ._.
I feel like a terrible mapper ; x
Thanks for modding!
I'll update after I come back from school.
M a n a
Sorry for late ><

[Easy]

Decrease the volume please ><
00:15:051 (3) - Switch the hitsound
00:24:310 (5) - New combo
00:27:273 (1) - Add finish in the beginning
00:28:755 & 00:30:236 (1) - Add whistle
00:34:681 (3) - ^
00:39:495 (1) - Start this note at 00:39:866 more fit IMO
00:42:644 (3) - ^ at 00:42:829
00:44:495 (4) - ^ at 00:44:681

[Normal]

00:48:014 (x) - Add note here
00:54:495 (4) - Start this note at 00:54:681
00:56:718 (6) - ^ at 00:56:903 and don't forget to shorten the slider
01:25:051 (1,2) - Clap hitsound is really weird for this song IMO xAx
01:59:125 (5) - New combo
02:24:310 (1) - Too far from spinner
02:31:718~02:44:218 - Remove whistle from slider slide
02:45:051~03:05:421 - Same as 01:25:051

[Hard]

Overall : You use many spinner in the beginning >A<

[Insane]

Overall : AR + 1?A bit overmapped ><

[SinDemon's Insane]

Overall : CS + 1?,Same as Insane

That's all
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Its okayy~
Thannks~
Aurele
Hi Crystal ♥
Your Mod Request from my Modding Queue. ♥

[Normal]
00:05:792 : http://puu.sh/imDk Why not like this? :3 (If you do that, put a whistle on 00:06:532)
00:26:347 : Delete these three Circle and put a Slider like that : http://puu.sh/imEk
00:32:644 : Delete Circle
00:39:125 : Finish
00:42:088 : ^
00:48:014 : ^
00:48:755 : Delete Finish
00:50:977 : Finish
00:56:903 : ^
01:10:236 : ^
01:10:607 : Delete Finish
01:17:273 : ^
01:17:644 : Finish '-'...
01:25:051 : http://puu.sh/imIT
01:25:236 : Delete Clap
01:29:125 : Delete Finish
01:29:495 : Finish
01:31:718 : Delete Finish
01:32:458 : Finish
02:26:903 : Circle
02:34:681 : http://puu.sh/imKF , Please? '-'

[Hard]
00:06:162 : Circle
00:09:125 : http://puu.sh/imMf
00:14:681 : Delete Circle.
00:18:014 : Circle
00:24:125 : ^
00:27:273 : NC
00:33:199 : ^
01:05:792 : ^
01:09:866 : Circle
01:10:236 : Finish
01:15:607 : Delete Spiner and put some beat on it. '-'
01:26:162 : Maybe a NC?
01:29:310 : Circle or maybe a Slider with 01:29:125 (5)
01:57:829 : NC
01:59:125 : ^
01:59:866 : ^ (To be with 10)
02:01:718 : ^
02:03:569 : Delete Circle
02:18:569 : Delete Slider
02:24:310 to 02:36:162 : Break ; Because it's sound really bad.
02:38:940 : Circle
02:41:532 : ^
02:41:903 : ^
02:45:607 : Delete Spiner. é.é
03:02:273 : Circle
03:02:644 : circle
03:07:458 : Delete Spiner, that's too long.

[Insane]
00:06:162 : Circle. .3.
03:05:607 : Spiner Ends at 03:06:903
03:07:273 : Finish / Delete EVERYTHING after that.

[SD's Insane]
WHAT WITH THOSES JUMPS?! LOOOOL.

03:07:273 : Delete everything and put a Circle + Finish


As you can see, I got lazy to mod Insane & SB's Insane. .3.
Good luck on your map Crystal ♥
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkkyhuu~
Ill update soon

Edit: Updated~
Behon
General:
- Consider making the simple sliders with 1 or 2 curve points a little more neat and symmetrical.

Easy:
- 00:58:384 (2,3,4): Consider spacing these circles apart. Putting the 1 next to stacked circles like that is confusing on an Easy difficulty.

Normal:
- 00:56:903 (6): Ending this slider half a beat early (at 00:57:644) fits the lyrics better.

Hard:
- 01:19:866 (8): Space this farther apart from 7.
- 02:00:607 (4): Consider making this a slider to go along with the drawn-out lyric.

Insane:
- 01:58:014 (4): Consider moving this forward to have it start at 01:58:199 to go better with the lyric.

SinDemon's Insane:
The difficulty is bordering on ridiculous, but I guess that's the point. Fine otherwise.
B2IN
hello :D



[Hard]
00:35:792 (1) → (suggetion) delete

02:21:532 (1,2,3) → delete http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/259036

02:23:662 ~ 02:36:069 → (suggetion) breaktime ?


[Insane]
00:09:495 (7) → new combo

00:11:718 (x) → add note

00:19:681 (5) → delete

00:20:236 (7) → end the slider till 00:20:607

00:24:310 (6) → move into 00:24:125

00:24:495 (7) → ^ 00:24:310

01:01:718 (4) → delete

01:13:940 (11) → delete whistle

01:11:903 (6) → delete

01:32:273 (10) → add circle note and move slider into 01:32:458 (Length 01:32:458 ~ 01:33:014)

01:33:199 (2) → change to circle note

01:33:569 (x) → add note

03:31:718 → add inherited points : soft volume 5





[SinDemon's Insane]

I recommend circle size 5





http://puu.sh/jCHs








@,.@
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyouu!
Aoitenshi
[Easy]

01:38:014 - You've only mapped up to this point, unless you still want to map the remaining part, delete the unnecessary timing points.

[Normal]

Same as Easy.

[Hard]

01:23:384 (7) - Not Exactly readable. Rather Hidden.
02:10:607 (4) - ^
Sun Rainbow
Hi~你好啊~我从小草莓那知道了你的图所以看了之后决定做个EXAMPLE给你看看,如果要上传的话请把XD这两个字去掉。。。

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [RainbowXD].osu
Topic Starter
Kanari
@Ain053 I think i'll just keep it like that.
@SunRainbow o.o ... i cannot understand i have poor Chinese ._. sorry D:
Sun Rainbow
OK……I know your bestmap from baby strawberry,and i think i can make a example diff for you (Can you Update it?XDDD)
Curry
yow!

Easy:
start ->00:25:051 - add notes on every 2nd white tick, even if its an easy, this is every 2nd white tick and should be fine, maybe make some 2white tick long sliders instead of single notes aswell to mix things up
00:15:051 (3) - new combo
00:27:273 (1) - make this 2sliders->1st 3ticks long -> pic
00:35:421 - add note
00:36:162 - this slider is just wrong imo, try this -> pic
00:39:866 (1) - vocals start on red tick->please move slider on it
00:42:829 (4) - ^
00:42:829 (4,5) - remove 5, make 4 1/2 longer -> fits vocals better
00:46:347 (1,2,3) - feels strange, maybe just make it a single slider?
00:49:125 (4) - move 1/2 later to fit vocals better
01:02:829 - why kiai here?
01:05:792 (3,4,5,1,2) - maybe add a slider instead of just single notes?
01:20:607 (3) - remap this please, those long sliders are superboring even on easydiff
01:24:310 (4) - remove please
01:31:718 (2) - remap this please, those long sliders are superboring even on easydiff
01:34:310 (3,4) - urgh

-not gonna map it till the end?

normal:
00:14:681 (4) - remove
00:16:162 (1) - should start at 00:15:977 since vocals start there
00:18:940 - try this pattern here -> pic ((2) is on 18:940)
00:28:384 (3) - add finish
00:30:236 - add finish
00:31:718 - ^
00:37:273 (1) - remove and simply put single notes on:00:37:644 - 00:38:014 - 00:38:384
00:44:495 (3) - make it a slider ->remove 00:44:866 (1) - and end the slider here
00:46:347 - please change to this, plays 10x better -> pic
00:50:421 (2,3) - remove 3, make 2 end where 3 ended
00:54:681 (4) - should start at 00:54:495

wont write anymore on normaldiff since the rest is the same as i wrote before, just PLEASE take care of all those superlong repeated sliders, they are superboring and just look like you didnt want to map them
theres so many possible pattern you can use to make the map more fun to play...

Hard:
gonna continue tomorrow/later.... so much stuff here aswell
mostly gonna be about all those spinners.... way to many, 80% of them out of position->should be removed
and some parts are mapped strange...

insane:
is kinda more like a hard diff imo, mod on it will come later today/tomorrow aswell


_______________________

maybe remove hard diff+rename insane->hard?
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thanks for modding!












I feel like a horrible mapper now ._.
Curry
2nd round!

general:
open ALL diffs .osu fíles in texteditor->flatten out the slider velocities

currently it looks like this: SliderMultiplier:0.99999990463257
should look like this: SliderMultiplier:1.0

easy? EASY!
ok

.osb file->delete since you dont use it
MikuSPiCa_Style_by_refeia.jpg ->is it used? if not->delete

okay, so far so good. lets move on to the diffs!

hard:
general:
-id use a bigger distance snap (1.0 should do better than .8, trust me ;))
-speed up sliders on some parts (i will give you timings below modnotes)

beginning - 00:20:607 - booooring, could you try to map a little more than just the piano her? just mix in some sliders on the vocals to make it a little more interesting
00:22:088 (2) - you shouldnt hide this one
00:22:458 (3) - remove, dont even try to keep it since it is just COMPLETLY out of place
00:25:792 (5) - make this a slider starting 00:25:607 - ending 00:25:977 -
00:26:532 (7) - make this a slider aswell (1/1 slider)
00:28:755 (1) - add finish on first hit
00:30:236 (3) - ^
00:33:199 (1) - ^
00:34:681 (3) - ^
00:39:125 - please map this part properly, as it is you could also just make it a break and you dont want that in a hard diff
00:32:458 (6) - new combo, remove NC from 00:33:199 (1) (and make that slider symetric please)
00:45:051 (8) - since you stop following the vocals->new combo, otherwise its very confusing
00:46:162 - add note?
00:46:347 (1) - try out this instead->http://puu.sh/m61M
->00:47:644 (3) - new combo plox
00:50:607 (5) - if you keep it like this->new combo (same reason as before)
00:51:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt fit at all imo, you just mixed up music+vocals, but even that isnt done properly->please remap and decide on either vocals OR music
00:54:681 (2) - shorten this one down to 1/2 slider and start another slider at big white tick (make that 1/1 or 3/2 slider)
00:55:792 (1) - remove
00:56:718 (4,5,6) - extend 4 by 1/4, keep reverse ->remove 5+6
00:57:644 (7,8,9,10) - doesnt feel right, you could just make 7 a terry-long slider and follow the vocals, would work very well here
01:00:607 (2) - move this on red tick right after the slider, add 1/1 slider at 01:00:607
01:01:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reposition those, you could make some really sweet patterns with them instead of stacking them up in such an awkward way
01:08:014 (1) - make 1/1 slider
01:09:495 (3,4,5) - dont see a reason for your spacing, especially since the song calms down at that moment
01:13:199 (5) - you could make this a 2big white tick long slider
01:15:421 (1) - no please-.- , when i hear the music i already feel like there must be a 1/2slider after the 4hit-combo
just check this->http://puu.sh/m6bp
also note that i change your new combo on 01:16:903 (1/now 5) since this makes much more sense
01:17:644 (3) - remake this into-> 01:17:644 1/2 slider, 01:18:014 - hit, 01:18:199 - hit, 01:18:384 - 1/2 slider
01:18:755 (4) - new combo
01:18:940 - add note
01:19:866 (8) - you could make this 1/2+1/1 slider starting on big white ticks
01:20:977 (1) - i would remove it
01:21:162 (2) - extend by 1/2
01:24:681 - add note
01:25:977 (4) - remove
01:26:532 (3) - like 01:19:866 (8)
01:29:125 (1) - NOOOOOOOO
01:31:718 (1) - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

ok... so i modded only on this part for over 2hours now.... i could keep on, but its basicly the same stuff over and over again
you should notice that most parts of the song can be mapped with very simple 1/2 1/2 1/2 1/1 patterns

fix the modded parts and carry those changes over to the other parts aswell, when you are done with it you can just PM me for a re-check

will mod insane later

/EDIT:

nearly forgot to give you the timings...
ok, so basicly you can use 1.0 sliders, but i would fasten them up as the song "gets quicker"
examples:
00:39:125 - 01:02:644 (try SV1.2)
01:14:681 - 01:35:421 (SV 1.4?)
02:12:273 - 02:24:310 (SV 1.2)
02:36:162 - 02:43:199 (SV 1.2)
02:45:051 - end (SV 1.4?)
by making the sliders faster you will increase the flow of these parts, especially on the kiai times the song gains so much drive and you should carry this over into the mapping, just try it out and you will probably see yourself how much better the flow of the map is compared to the song
(if you dont know how to make the sliders faster: add inherit timingsection at the posted points->go to timing+control panel->Timing tab->Slider velocity multiplier)
you will have to make major work if you do so, but if you do all those changes i pointed out, it will only be like 5% more work, so you should really try it out
Topic Starter
Kanari
Almost everything fixed!
Thanks
Aurele
insane :

85 Errors : http://puu.sh/mbRL
Topic Starter
Kanari
._.
I did some messed up stuff to Sun Rainbow's diff when I was editing it in text file, all fixed now.
Thanks~
kurohana
Mod Request from My Queue ✿

-General-

delete the .osb file in the song folder and full submit
Source: Toku-P
Tags: Vocaloid2 Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Douga
be sure to change tags and source on all diffs :)
cut the mp3 file? 03:07:644 - 03:35:327 isn't used

-Easy-

00:15:051 (1) - unsnapped slider end, this fits the song :3
00:21:347 (3) - new combo to fit the pattern
00:25:792 (2) - unsnapped slider end again, maybe this? fix spacing if you agree ^^
00:27:273 (1) - unsnapped slider end, there are a lot of them... this?
00:36:162 (1) -
00:39:866 (1,2,3) - for example
128,156,39866,6,0,B|164:56|256:16|348:56|384:156,1,350
or
00:42:829 (4) - new combo, and this?
00:45:051 (6) -
00:47:088 (3) - fix spacing if you agree :3
00:47:644 (1) - fix spacing if you agree
00:49:125 (4) -
00:50:607 - add note?
00:50:977 - ^
00:51:718 (1,2) - spacing
00:54:681 (3,1) - spacing
00:56:903 (1) - unsnapped slider end and if you agree, fix spacing
00:59:866 (2) -
01:01:347 (4) -
01:01:347 (4,1) - spacing
01:03:569 (2) -
01:09:495 (3) -
01:16:903 (5) -
01:16:903 (5,1) - spacing
01:18:755 (1) - fix spacing if you agree :3
01:20:607 (3) -
01:25:051 (4) - new combo and
01:25:051 (4,1) - spacing
01:26:532 (1) - fix spacing if you agree ^^
01:30:607 (1) - use another sliderform, maybe (http://puu.sh/nyrj)
01:31:718 (2) - rhythm like this?
01:34:310 (5,6) -
01:35:236 - add note?
01:35:421 (1) - slider end at 01:38:384
03:31:532 - unused timing section

-Normal-

00:13:940 (3,4) - spacing
00:19:866 (3) - new combo
00:23:569 (5) - new combo
00:23:940 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:347 (4) - overlap with 00:24:310 (2), maybe change?
00:27:273 (5) - new combo
00:27:829 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:495 (3) - set this note at 00:44:681?
00:48:014 (6) - new combo
00:48:569 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:681 (4) - new combo
01:29:125 (2) - 3 grids down
01:34:866 (5) - new combo?
02:07:088 - add note
02:18:755 - add note?
02:24:310 - maybe use 0.75 spacing? it looks much better then
02:20:236 - add note? if you agree, new combo
^ if you not agree, 02:20:607 (4) - new combo
02:30:236 (6) - new combo
02:31:718 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:681 (2) - new combo
02:36:162 (1,2) - spacing
02:47:644 (1) - remove new combo
02:48:014 (2) - new combo
02:48:384 - add note
02:52:458 (1,2,3) - rearrange them, looks confusing Oo
02:58:014 (1) - remove new combo
02:59:866 (4) - new combo
03:02:088 (8) - what's this?
03:31:532 - unused timing section

-Hard-

00:06:532 (5) - new comba and whistle on beginning and end (should sound like 00:10:977 (1,2,3))
00:12:458 (1,2) - this jump doesn't fit the music
00:14:681 (4) - remove note for a nice silent effect ^^ (00:15:051 (1) sound good then)
00:15:329 - remove new combo
00:16:162 (2) - new combo
00:16:162 (2,3,4,5) - whistle
00:20:792 (5,1) - spacing
00:22:088 (2,1) - spacing
00:22:829 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:310 (4) - new combo
00:26:718 - add note
00:27:829 (2,3) - cover completely
00:32:458 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:199 (3) - new combo
00:36:162 (1) - remove finish
00:50:607 (1) - remove new comnbo
00:58:384 (8) - new combo
00:59:495 (1) - remove new combo
01:16:162 (7) - new combo
01:16:903 (1) - remove new combo
01:19:866 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:162 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:532 (3) - new combo
01:27:644 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:977 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:495 (1) - remov new combo
02:07:644 (3,3,3,3) - stack all completely
02:19:866 (7) - new combo
02:24:310 (1) - slider? fits better
02:24:310 - in this part the notes are stacked, thats very boring while playing...
02:26:532 - add note
02:26:903 - ^
02:27:088 - ^
02:37:644 (5) - new combo
02:40:236 (4) - new combo
03:03:384 (1) - remove new combo
03:31:532 - unused timing section

-Rainbow's Insane-

00:10:236 (8,1) - spacing
00:12:088 (1) - remove new combo
00:12:458 (3) - new combo
00:13:384 (7) - stack under 00:12:458 (3)
00:13:940 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:310 (3) - copy 00:18:940 (2) and replace it (ctrl+h)
00:27:088 (2,3) - sounds very off >.<
00:36:069 (2,3) - spacing
00:38:199 (5,6) - sounds strange >.<
00:52:829 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:940 (3) - new combo
00:57:088 (11) - new combo
00:57:273 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:384 (3) - new combo
01:01:532 (10) - new combo
01:02:088 (1) - remove new combo
01:22:088 (4) - remove new combo
02:06:532 - remove this break
02:09:125 - ^
02:10:236 (1) - remove new combo, this?
02:29:588 (7) - remove this note
02:29:958 (10) - ^
02:39:125 (2,4,7) - new combo
02:44:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - remove clap, and then whistle on 02:44:310 (1)
02:47:829 (8) - new combo
02:49:125 (1) - remove new combo
02:49:495 (2) - new combo
02:56:162 (1) - remove new combo
03:02:088 (1) - remove new combo
03:02:829 (3) - new combo
03:05:421 (1) - remove new combo
03:31:532 - unused timing section

i like this song :3 good luck, pm me for recheck ^^
Topic Starter
Kanari
I think i'll jsut leave the mp3 as it is.
Thankyhuu~
Sun Rainbow
http://puu.sh/nNWc
SB and Hitsound
Please full update it thanks :)
Sun Rainbow
Topic Starter
Kanari
Updated!
Thankss~
Kryptogram
Hi There, Sorry For my Late Mod ;_;

[General]

Nothing, But i think you can improve more your hitsounds

[Easy]

The mapset its not done but i mod what its done

00:21:347 (1) - Add a whistle
00:34:681 (3) - Change whistle for a finish ?
00:54:681 (3) - try this
41,206,54681,2,0,B|188:320|272:176|420:292,1,400
01:03:569 (2) - Add finish at the end
01:08:384 (x) - Add a Note for better spread
01:20:607 (3) - Add finish at the begin
01:25:051 (6) - Remove one reverse arrow and add note here 01:26:162 (7)

[Normal]

00:15:051 (4) - Add whistle at the end
00:16:162 (1) - Add whistle in the first reverse arrow and the end
00:19:866 (1) - Add whistle at the begin and in the second reverse arrow
00:22:829 (2) - Add whistle
00:24:310 (2) - Add whistle at the begin
00:34:681 (4) - Add finish at the begin
00:39:125 (1) - Remove Note, its too close of the end of the previous spinner
00:56:532 (2) - Awkward Anti-jump :$
01:34:866 (1,2,3) - Change this 3 notes for a slider http://puu.sh/nT7C

[Hard]


00:12:458 (1) - Add whistle at the begin
00:15:051 (1) - Add whistle at the end
01:25:977 (x) - Add a Note
02:12:458 (2) - Add finish
02:45:607 (1) - Change this spinner for a Slider ?

[Rainbow's Insane]

00:38:940 (6) - Remove Note, End Previous slider there
01:14:681 (1) - Add finish
01:26:532 (1) - ^
02:06:347 (x) - Remove Break
02:45:051 (1) - Add finish
02:56:903 (1) - Add finish at the begin

I Like how you used the clap's in Ths difficult

Well Hope It Was Helpful, Hope it gets Ranked

Good Luck !
Topic Starter
Kanari
Its fine~
Thankkyhuu^^
suzutsukikanade
Requested in my queue, i check this map before the request.
Your map is fine in my opinion but i see a spacing error in Insane, in 00:35:977 (1,2,3): This stacking is weird, change to this:

Good map :D
i want to star but i can't.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you^^
I'll have Sun Rainbow fix it when he comes on~
riffy
Yo~

Mod request from your signature

General?
wtf! combo colors looks weird

Insane
00:10:977 (1) - spacing
00:12:088 (2) - nc (new combo) / remove NC
00:19:681 (4,1) - a bit messy. don't touch sliders
00:21:347 (5,9) - stack them> (put (9) on start of (5))
00:58:384 (1) - x316 y 172
01:28:755 (9) - this sliders are messy! try to use something likethis
01:55:792 (1,4) - stack start points
03:15:792 (5,1) - stack them
03:16:532 (6,2) - overlap

Hard
00:15:051 (1,1) - new combo spam
00:28:755 (1,3) - stack properly
00:33:199 (1) - this sliders are messy! try to use something likethis

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

fine for me. but still needs a bit more modding :|
GL~
Cygnus
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
SPOILER
  1. Map needs more improvement, so I'll basically just mod easy, and shoot a star.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
SPOILER
  1. 00:42:088 (3) - Inconsistent spacing. http://puu.sh/oEvN

  2. 01:01:347 (4) - This slider is unrankable imo.

  3. 01:26:162 (7) - Spacing.
Topic Starter
Kanari
I think the slider is fine so ill keep it~
Thanks for mod and star! ;D
Poggo
Hey :3


General
1) Slider tick rate on all diff's should be identical
2) - 01:02:829 - remove this kiai time

Rainbow's Insane
00:04:310 - this slider not beautiful( this look better
392,64,4310,2,2,B|424:116|348:180|304:144,2,159.999990463257,2|0|0
00:06:347 - make this slider not double and add note on 00:06:903
00:12:273 - remove new combo
00:18:940 - remove this slider and add note on 00:19:125
00:40:421 - remove this slider >< make this http://puu.sh/qUcR
01:22:088 - remove NC
01:55:421(4,5,6,1) - wow wow it's UNRANKBLE bcz hides reverse slider(1)
01:59:125 - remove NC
01:59:681 - ^
02:00:792 - ^
02:01:347 - ^
02:01:718 - add NC
02:01:903 - remove NC
02:02:458 - ^
02:03:014 - remove NC
02:03:940 - add NC
02:04:310 - remove NC
02:11:903 - ^
02:32:644 - ^
02:45:236 - ^
02:56:162 - ^
03:05:421 - ^
03:09:495 - make this slider shorter and add note on 03:10:051
03:31:718 - on end spinner make volume more silently

Hard
00:21:903 - add note
00:47:088 - make this look better
00:48:384 - add note
01:04:310 - sound better http://puu.sh/qUtC
01:08:384 - add note
01:17:273 - add NC
01:18:755 - remove NC
01:19:866 - add NC
01:26:532 - make this
248,128,86532,6,2,B|292:68|404:124|384:200,1,200
01:50:607 - add note
01:51:347 - ^
01:53:014 - ^
02:45:607 - remove this spinner and put notes
03:03:199 - add note
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu~
Sun Rainbow
Sorry I decied to remap my diff...
ertyukjh010


Hello :)
Oh, 41000.... What the

[Easy]

00:27:273 (1) - ugly. Make it use a 4 point. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302321
02:12:458 ~ 03:05:792 - Some useless inherited point. Delete it if unused.

[Normal]

00:03:570 - Useless inherited point
00:39:495 - NC bug
02:58:014 (3) - Move ↑ 1 grid. Make it same horizontal with 02:56:903 (1,2)
03:05:792 (1) - End at 03:07:273 pls. Because the spinner length is too short and too little time between the spinner and the next note

[Hard]

02:10:051 (1) - Stack some mess and easy to miss this note.
02:22:273 (6) - Stack with 02:20:977 (3) at beginner. And end at 02:23:569 better.
02:31:532 (6) - reverse at 02:31:718 and reverse more 2 times.
02:45:051 - NC bug
02:56:903 - NC bug

[Rainbow's Insane]

竟然在外國人的圖驚見彩虹君!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!owo
00:22:829 (9) - 向下移動1格,與00:21:347的開頭重疊
00:27:088 (2) - 坑嗲啊ww,這個減速真心太突然=3= 還有節奏應該是這樣:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302333
00:40:421 (2) - 折返點應該是00:41:162
02:39:310 (2) - 我想您原意是放在02:38:755 ?
02:40:792 (2,3) - 上面改了這兩個可以刪掉
02:41:718 () - 上面改了這裡可以add note
02:45:236 (1) - Remove NC
03:28:014 (1) - 在03:27:829開始吧? 音樂感覺在這邊

That all :)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyhu! ^w^
DerekMcD
[General]

You fix overlapped stuffs, because their unrankable.

[Easy]

Their are some overlapped stuffs.
Finish the whole diff...

00:36:162 (1) - Fix this slider.
01:18:755 (1) - It's overlapping (5).

[Normal]

00:45:051 (2) - Fix this slider in a better way.
00:46:347 (3,4,5) - It's overlapping (2).
00:56:903 (3) - Fix one like this. puu.sh/s34G
01:22:088 (1,2,3) - Overlapped.
02:42:088 (4) - Try x:340 y:152?

[Hard]

00:12:458 (1) - Move the 2nd point two grids left.
02:22:273 (6) - Overlapped.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankks~
I'll mod your map soon! ^^
Topic Starter
Kanari
Blehhh! ><
Fixed a few things and moved to WIP since Sun Rainbow has exams and is gunna take a while to remap his diff ;w;
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Like that song x333 I wish you good luck with it ^-^
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~
>w<
Chloe
Hello ~ Mod request from Chloe's Modding Queue


  • [General]
  1. All the difficulty, the SB option of the Setup page, plz cancel the Letterbox during breaks.

  • [Normal]
  1. HP-1
  2. 02:43:940 (6) - Change to two 1/2-note
  3. 02:59:866 (3) - Keep the spacing



  • [Hard]
  1. 01:30:977 (1,2,3) - It's dull , re-arrange it
  2. 02:07:088 (1) - Add a note.
    I feel that this map need to be arranged some triple click. But everyone have their own mapping style, you can just ignore this/




  • [Insane]
  1. 03:05:699 (4) - Move it?But I can't determine that...
    Great.. I could not pick any dissatisfied. A nice Insane-Diff.
    Stared!


Hmm... sry for later. because I was very busy for last a few days and also now... Maybe I'll back for a recheck when got some free time.
Yeah That's all I found ^^ Bye~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you ~ ;D
>w<
Melt
I love this song >.<

star ~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Meltt ~
Thank you >w<
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~


[Easy]
00:48:384 (2,3) - alignment~x:388?~or~~~
00:51:718 (1,2) - 2 alignment 1(end)?~

[Normal]
00:59:866 - nc~
01:00:421 - remove nc~
02:03:384 - add note?~or move 02:03:570 (3) - to this time point?~
02:55:977 - .hmmmmmm~~~maybe u can move 02:56:162 (2) - ~to this point~~~~then~move 02:56:532 (3) - ~to 02:56:347 - ~this time point~~~~~~just suggestion~

[Hard]
00:31:718 (5,6,7,1,2) - just suggestion~00:31:718 (5,6) - alignment~then change 00:33:199 (1) - slider appearance~~~then......just look more beautiful~

01:48:569 - add note?
01:48:755 - delete this note?~
01:48:940 - add note?~
01:49:125 - delete this note?~
01:49:310 - add note?~.....................idk why this rhythm listen feel a little strange~~just suggestion~hmmmm~~maybe u can change like 01:56:718 - to 01:59:032 - ~this is good~
01:51:532 - to 01:53:199 - ^~
01:53:569 (1) - to 01:56:162 (6) - ^~

That all~~~if sun rambow done his map ~u can tell me~~~i will remod it~xD
Nice song~ and mapset~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you A-tan ~
I will fix it after school. >w<
DarkSkyKnight
sucky mod lol..

em..

Red mods are retarded ones that don't really make sense even to myself so yeah....

General:

00:03:570 I think you should let this part be softer in volume, make it 40% perhaps, then add a new timing point at 00:15:421 to 50% and then finally at 00:27:273 turn it to 60%.

[Easy]
00:46:718 (2,3) - I think you should move these two upwards because it is visually gives more distance spacing.
00:51:718 (1) - This overlaps with 00:49:125 (4) in an awkward way
01:26:162 (7) - Maybe it shouldn't overlap with 6.

[Normal]
00:27:273 (1) - This should perhaps go somewhere so it doesn't overlap with the rest of the combo.
00:27:829 (2,3,4) - It's ok but maybe there's a better way to map this part, try transforming 2 and 3 into a slider?
00:42:829 (2) - This should perhaps not be that long, but perhaps make a slider from 00:42:829 to 00:43:199 and then the slider 3 from 00:43:384 to 00:43:755. From here on maybe you could let slider 3 repeat two times, or let it repeat only one time + the same circle on 00:44:495 (3) etc.
00:56:903 (3) - Perhaps flip this vertically so that it does not overlap with 00:54:681 (1). At the same time don't infringe the distance spacing...

on the whole there's a lot of minor overlapping. Occasional ones won't affect the map much, but too much of these make it look a bit awkward.
some are fine though...

[Hard]
01:29:125 (1) and 01:31:718 (1) - these two spinners don't appear to fit the music.
02:32:644 (7,8,9) - because of previous stacking the visual distance of these notes from 6 appear to be lesser. Try moving it down by one grid.
02:40:977 (3,4,5) - I prefer putting these three notes even further apart but that's up to you.
03:03:199 (4,5) - .....it's a trap. em..this is not good because 4 blocks 5 as 5 is short, making it visually as if 5 is a single circle on its own.
03:05:236 (1) - perhaps this spinner should be moved to 03:05:884 and at 03:05:236 you should add some notes to fit the vocal part.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank yhuu ~ >w<
Regou
Collab Insane requested by baka rainbow~
Coming soon
Sun Rainbow
http://puu.sh/CHW2
Diff by :Me and Regou~
Regou
*P.S.
Start to 01:35:421 by Sun Rainbow

01:47:273 to 03:33:940 by me
Topic Starter
Kanari
owo okayy ~
Regou
Rainbow_Regou (4.97 stars, 189 notes)
what's happening Q___Q 笨蛋彩虹你是在做什麼
anyway here's the finished one

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Topic Starter
Kanari
Okayy ~
Sun Rainbow, can you hitsound your diff too? ><
Or maybe get Regou to help you?
Regou

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Okayy ~
Sun Rainbow, can you hitsound your diff too? ><
Or maybe get Regou to help you?
Oops, I see, Sun Rainbow sent you the hisounded one but it didn't include my part orz
Wait
I remember he said he did this , maybe he sent you the wrong ver?
btw did this for him first and fixed some minor stuff for him
SPOILER
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Title:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
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Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Nico Douga

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Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
delete osz file~...if u not SB~

Combo3 : 196,136,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255
删掉一个把~这两个颜色很相近~或者换个颜色?~【delete a colours, because these r colour too similar~~i think......maybe u can change it~


[Rainbow_Regou]
00:18:755 - 删掉这个note?节奏感觉对不上。。~然后~...看图把~xD

00:21:162 - 删掉again~xD~~~只是建议~
00:30:236 (1) - 没摆好?~
SPOILER

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00:32:829 (4) - 减少一拍?~后面的slider感觉好空虚orz~把后面的slider移到这个结尾把~。。。额。。。果断上图。。。。试下吧。。。我觉得听起来舒服点。。

00:47:273 (2,3,4,1) - 距离有点乱。。
SPOILER
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01:23:477 (4) - 减少2拍?~然后在01:26:532 - add note?~

02:09:495 (1,2) - 距离太远了。。。。最好近一点把~第一次读图很容易错。。。~
03:27:644 (1,2,3,1) - 改成这样?~

thats all~
good luck!~xD
Regou

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

02:09:495 (1,2) - 距离太远了。。。。最好近一点把~第一次读图很容易错。。。~ 才騙1PC就算了吧
03:27:644 (1,2,3,1) - 改成这样?~ 那個音樂是明顯的1/4 note啊...

thats all~
good luck!~xD
Topic Starter
Kanari
Sun Rainbow will fix his part soon ~
Aurele
Rainbow_Regou, oh okay. LOL

edit: here's a star. So your map could be Bubbled if a MAT thinks it needs to be bubbled. (You know, this new system. (y))
Regou

Gabe wrote:

Rainbow_Regou, oh okay. LOL

edit: here's a star. So your map could be Bubbled if a MAT thinks it needs to be bubbled. (You know, this new system. (y))
I wrote "Rainbow x Regou" in my own file ._. But...
Aurele

Regou wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Rainbow_Regou, oh okay. LOL
I wrote "Rainbow x Regou" in my own file ._. But...
It's better with Rainbow x Regou than Rainbow_Regou, because it's like if the difficulty was made by Rainbow_Regou and not Rainbow AND(x) Regou.
Topic Starter
Kanari
I'll change it after Sun Rainbow updates from the previous mod and i'll move the map into pending as well.
Sun Rainbow
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow_Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Nico Douga Regou

[Difficulty]
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Topic Starter
Kanari
Updated ~
B2IN
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

m4m

[General]
fine :3
[Normal]
consider. The front part in diff is generally too stiff.
01:29:125 (2) - Consider moving.01:26:532 (1) - this stack touches it
02:40:977 (1,2,3) - try this :3
[Hard]
01:29:125 (1) - This part does not fit the spinner..
02:10:236 (2,3) - right 1grid
02:19:495 (6) - Neatly stack to the slider
02:20:977 (3,4,5,6) - try this

02:23:570 (7) - remove ?
02:27:273 (1) - same.This part does not fit the spinner
02:45:144 (2) - remove
02:52:366 (4) - ^
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:18:569 (9) - um.. this overlappning is not good . consider stacking or respacing :3
01:17:273 ~ 01:18:940 - try this

01:25:236 (1) - end the spinner at 01:26:347. and add the note to 01:26:532
03:05:792 (1) - try this
Length: 03:05:236 ~ 03:06:903


good luck for rank !


My map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/49720

ty !
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you ~ >w<
I'll mod your map soon ~
KRZY
[Easy]
[quote="Ranking criteria: Guidelines":040ca]Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.I suggest you map this difficulty 'till where the other difficulties are mapped to if there is no special reason not to.

01:09:495 (1) - Divide this into two sliders, one covering 01:09:495 ~ 01:10:236 and the other covering 01:10:977 ~ 01:11:718.
01:16:903 (5) - NC
01:18:755 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:607 (4) - NC
01:22:088 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:088 (2) - Divide this into two sliders, one covering 01:21:903 ~ 01:22:644 and the other covering 01:23:014 ~ 01:23:940.

[Normal]
00:06:532 (1) - Stack this under 00:05:792 (4), and move the following three notes (00:07:273 (2,3,4)) to where 00:06:532 (1,2,3) are located currently. Place notes after this period accordingly.
00:16:162 (1) - Remove one repeat
00:19:125 (2,1) - Move these to 00:18:384, and remove one repeat from 00:19:866 (1)
00:21:347 - If you take the two mods above, you'll have to fill in this spot. Same goes for 00:22:088.
00:23:569 (3) - Try to place this note so that it does not overlap with the following slider.
00:26:347 (4) - Move the repeat somewhere else so it does not overlap with the previous slider. An example would be:
00:36:162 (1) - Make this a slider without a repeat, as there is no reason for a repeat to be there.
00:42:644 (1,2,3) - Try the below to avoid putting a note right after a slider and to better fit the music:
01:29:495 (1) - Remove finish at the end of the slider.
01:31:718 (4) - Remove NC.
01:33:570 (3) - End this slider at 01:33:940 and add a note at 01:34:310 to avoid putting a note right after a slider and to better fit the music.
02:08:755 (1,2,3) - Remove these notes.
02:10:051 - Add a note.
02:18:755 (2) - Remove.
02:20:977 - Add a note.
02:31:718 (1) - Divide this into two sections, one being 02:31:718 ~ 02:32:273 and the other being 02:32:644 ~ 02:34:125.
02:35:051 - Either add a note here, or remove 02:34:866 (2).
02:52:273 - Add something here. Personally I would recommend something like this:

[Hard]
00:47:273 (2,1) - Make these two parallel for better aesthetics.
02:27:273 (1) - Unfitting place for a spinner. Map it out.
02:39:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I would map this part 4/4 instead of 3/5.
03:03:199 (4,5) - Not a good idea, very difficult to read where the slider ends.
03:05:236 (1) - This spinner ends in a place that is different with Normal. Make them match.

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:18:199 (8,9) - Replace with a single note at 00:18:199, as the rest is not mapped to anything.
00:26:347 - Add a note, since you've been following the vocals in previous sections.
00:32:458 ~ 00:38:384 - Currently, this part does not fit the music at all. Try something like the following. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:44:310 (4) - Start this slider at 00:44:495 instead. End at 00:44:866.
00:45:607 (2,3) - Switch these two to better fit the music. Place them accordingly.
00:46:347 (1) - Make this a repeating slider with the repeat on 00:46:718 to better fit the music.
00:48:014 (1,2,1,2,3) - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:51:532 ~ 00:53:940 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:54:495 ~ 00:56:718 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:58:755 ~ 01:00:977 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
01:20:236 (7) - Break down into a slider and a note.
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - This slowdown is unexpected, and unnecessary.
01:24:310 (3) - Remove repeat .
01:25:236 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:25:051, and end it at 01:26:162.
01:26:532 - Add a note.
01:27:458 (1) - Remove.
01:35:607 - Is this timing section necessary?
01:35:792 - ^
02:16:903 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 is uncalled for. Nowhere in the music does it suggest a rhythm of 1/3.
03:05:236 - Add a note.
03:05:421 - ^
03:05:607 - ^
Why did you decide to map until the end of the song in only this difficulty? Refer to the ranking guideline I quoted on [Easy] mod.


Needs much, much more work before it can be considered for a bubble imo. Pay special attention to [Normal] and [Rainbow x Regou], as big chunks of these difficulties are mapped with disregard to the music. Try hard, and good luck!
Topic Starter
Kanari
QAQ
Thank you for modding!
I'll fix them soon. ><
Regou

KRZY wrote:

[Rainbow x Regou]
02:16:903 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 is uncalled for. Nowhere in the music does it suggest a rhythm of 1/3.(Oops,unsnapped, and fixed)03:05:236 - Add a note. Fixed
03:05:421 - ^ Fixed
03:05:607 - ^ Fixed
Why did you decide to map until the end of the song in only this difficulty? Refer to the ranking guideline I quoted on [Easy] mod.


Needs much, much more work before it can be considered for a bubble imo. Pay special attention to [Normal] and [Rainbow x Regou], as big chunks of these difficulties are mapped with disregard to the music. Try hard, and good luck!
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Nico Douga Regou

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.59999990463257
SliderTickRate:1

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224,292,170607,1,8
220,340,170699,1,0
188,376,170792,1,0
84,296,170977,6,0,B|0:216|44:92,1,207.99999628067,4|8
348,224,171532,1,0
456,296,171718,2,0,B|480:244|472:188,1,103.999998140335,2|0
348,108,172088,1,8
224,164,172273,1,2
348,224,172458,5,4
228,280,172644,2,0,B|184:324|112:312,1,103.999998140335,0|8
32,132,173014,2,0,B|92:36|232:84,1,207.99999628067,4|2
228,280,173569,1,8
440,324,173755,6,0,B|500:232|464:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2
332,108,174310,1,8
312,100,174403,1,0
292,96,174495,1,0
268,96,174588,1,0
244,104,174681,1,2
224,120,174773,1,0
212,140,174866,1,0
208,164,174958,1,0
216,188,175051,2,0,B|240:244|224:304,1,103.999998140335,8|0
112,352,175421,5,4
48,28,175607,1,0
176,68,175792,1,8
300,168,175977,2,0,B|288:220|328:264|400:288|456:240,1,207.99999628067,2|0
420,96,176532,1,8
284,24,176718,1,0
168,124,176903,6,0,B|148:180|176:248,1,103.999998140335,4|0
300,288,177273,1,8
172,356,177458,1,0
52,280,177644,2,0,B|24:176|48:52,1,207.99999628067,2|8
300,288,178199,1,0
416,224,178384,6,0,B|432:168|420:96,1,103.999998140335,4|0
204,236,178755,2,0,B|192:296|204:348,1,103.999998140335,8|0
268,88,179125,2,0,B|228:44|164:44|104:72|96:132,1,207.99999628067,2|8
64,264,179681,1,0
204,236,179866,5,4
352,256,180051,1,0
452,352,180236,1,8
352,256,180421,1,0
360,116,180607,2,0,B|384:68|452:52|508:72,1,155.999997210503,2|0
496,68,180977,1,8
468,200,181162,1,0
352,256,181347,6,0,B|300:232|244:240,1,103.999998140335,2|0
120,284,181718,2,0,B|64:296|12:264|-8:204|32:136,1,207.99999628067,8|2
356,28,182273,1,0
408,216,182458,1,8
220,168,182644,1,0
356,28,182829,6,0,B|412:12|472:24|512:64|520:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2
384,160,183384,1,0
384,160,183477,1,0
384,160,183569,1,8
136,368,183940,5,2
256,304,184125,1,0
140,240,184310,5,4
124,220,184495,5,8
104,200,184681,5,8
88,180,184866,5,8
252,40,185236,5,0
204,128,185421,2,0,B|256:148|316:128,1,103.999991941452,14|0
256,192,185792,12,2,186903
72,88,187273,6,0,B|112:104|156:96,1,80
212,176,187644,1,8
308,136,187829,1,0
412,156,188014,2,0,B|448:224|424:328,1,160,2|8
144,272,188569,1,0
40,256,188755,6,0,B|28:300|44:344,1,80,0|0
144,272,189125,2,8,B|156:228|144:188,1,80,8|0
156,172,189403,1,0
176,160,189495,1,2
276,124,189681,2,0,B|300:156|292:208,1,80,0|8
192,64,190051,1,0
288,24,190236,6,0,B|372:56|388:172,1,160,4|8
456,220,190792,1,0
356,248,190977,2,0,B|332:304|352:368,1,120,2|0
351,365,191347,1,8
448,316,191532,1,0
448,316,191718,6,0,B|472:240|448:132,1,160,2|8
368,100,192273,1,0
276,148,192458,2,0,B|232:172|184:164,1,80,2|0
180,168,192736,1,0
160,168,192829,1,8
88,92,193014,1,0
60,192,193199,6,0,B|112:256|96:356,2,160,4|8|2
88,92,194125,1,0
120,72,194218,1,0
156,64,194310,1,8
192,68,194403,1,0
228,80,194495,1,0
288,168,194681,6,0,B|328:252|440:256,1,160,4|8
396,144,195236,1,2
396,144,195607,1,0
260,312,195792,1,8
104,200,195977,6,0,B|60:120|108:44,1,160,4|0
260,312,196532,1,8
352,352,196718,1,0
352,352,196810,1,0
352,352,196903,2,0,B|368:300|356:260,1,80,2|0
264,136,197273,2,0,B|256:180|264:216,1,80,8|0
360,176,197644,5,2
164,160,197829,1,0
384,180,198014,1,8
136,160,198199,2,0,B|104:184|44:176|8:156|4:108,1,160,4|0
92,64,198755,1,2
192,344,199125,6,0,B|228:264|328:280,1,160,4|8
408,216,199681,1,0
448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0
496,208,200236,1,8
444,120,200421,1,2
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8
4,316,201903,1,0
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8
116,24,202644,1,0
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8
440,152,203384,1,0
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0
428,308,203940,1,8
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8
160,312,205051,6,0,B|120:344|32:332|-20:272|8:168,1,240,4|0
104,228,205792,2,0,B|120:188|120:140,1,80,2|0
24,104,206162,1,8
119,149,206347,1,0
228,164,206532,5,4
448,100,206718,1,0
320,268,206903,1,8
316,48,207088,1,2
112,324,207644,5,2
104,328,207736,1,2
96,332,207829,1,6
256,192,207921,12,2,213940
Atema
Hi ! From my modding queue :)


Easy

- I don't really understand why you did not use the distance snap in the beginning. Ok, the notes got the same spacing between them but I don't see why would you put a distance changement in an Easy. Well, I dunno if i'm clear but I advice you to respect it even in the beginning. Plus there are some (few) others distance mistakes, please recheck your map and follow the distance snap each time (not for the stacks ofc)

- Please, finish to map this diff, you can't have a difference where the play lenght is twice inferior as the others, that's not "fair" ^^

Normal

- Make this diff ends at the same time as the Hard diff ? Just just have to make the last spinner a little bit longer ^^

00:26:347 (4) - Please unstack this :it look weird when you just had every note and a stack on white ticks to have here a 1/2 and quite long stack.
00:30:977 (2) - Spacing
02:43:940 (2) - Make it end here 02:44:310 - ?

Hard

01:34:866 (1) - Put them like this 01:30:977 (1,2,3) - but going up and not down so it makes a parallel ?
02:10:607 (4) - Unstack this one please
02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Loved this part XD
02:45:144 (2) - Remove this note ?
02:52:366 (4) - ^
03:03:384 (5) - "Unstack" this please ^^

Rainbow x Regou

01:57:644 - Map this break ? =O
02:24:495 - ^


Well good job, good luck ! :)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thanks ~
;-;
I guess i'll finish mapping easy then.
Verlaren
Hai~

Hard:
01:15:977 - maybe NC?
01:16:162 - slider must end in 01:16:347
01:16:532 - add circle.
02:45:144 - remove circle.
02:47:088 - maybe add note?

Rainbow x Regou:
00:18:569 - remove note.
00:18:199 - unsnapped note. slider must be end in 00:18:569
01:30:051 - ^
02:39:495 - slider must be end in 02:39:681
02:39:866 - add note. (hitsound --> clap)
03:00:977 - remove note
03:00:607 - slider must be end in 03:00:977
03:11:347 - remove note
03:10:977 - slider must be end in 03:11:347
03:24:125 - slider should be completely on the screen. He's must be fully visible

Don't forget to place hitsounds.
If you would need my help, contact me at any time.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~
Regou

Verlaren wrote:

Hai~

Rainbow x Regou:
02:39:495 - slider must be end in 02:39:681
02:39:866 - add note. (hitsound --> clap)
This doesn't sound really bad, and this properly give a better game flow
03:00:977 - remove note
03:00:607 - slider must be end in 03:00:977
You know, end every slider on White/Red line is very, very boring, and doing these changes won't really make a different
03:11:347 - remove note
03:10:977 - slider must be end in 03:11:347 No, the piano sound make the pitch isn't that correct so this would be better to hid that sound :)
03:24:125 - slider should be completely on the screen. He's must be fully visible It work fine in my computer

Don't forget to place hitsounds.
If you would need my help, contact me at any time.
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]

[Easy]
00:46:347 (1,2,3) - difficult rhythm For Easy.
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:56:718 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:384 (2,3,4) - difficult for Easy
You should have long break.
You catch mass oof vocal but it is not easy...

[Normal]
00:15:051 (4) - NC
00:42:644 (1) - completely separate with before slider
01:30:607 (2) - completely separate with before circle or stack with No.2 circle.
02:20:977 (4,1) - add and delete NC

[Hard]
02:45:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - distorted

[Insane]
01:02:829 - KIAI TIME!?remove KIAI TIME.
02:12:458 - ^
nice map!

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thanks ~
Dino99
Hi~ :D

<Easy>
  1. AR+1?
  2. 00:15:051 (1) - Remove whistle is better IMO, because I don't hear bell here :<
  3. 00:15:421 - whistle to follow the bell~
  4. 00:39:125 (2) - finish here have a good effect :3
  5. 00:42:088 (3) - Remove finish
  6. 00:47:088 (3,1) - Stack a little>_>.. It looks not really good.. try to make them don't stack?
  7. 00:48:755 (2,3) - Blanketing it better~~ http://puu.sh/OhrN
    348,160,49125,2,0,B|360:208|352:264|294:294|236:277,2,200
  8. 00:56:903 (2) - A little ugly QAQ.. Too twist..
  9. 01:09:495 (1,2) - Make them a bit curve? I think it's better~ http://puu.sh/Ohxc
  10. 01:21:903 (1) - Strange!!.. I strongly suggest change The slider's start at 01:22:088 - , (and add finish here :>)
  11. 01:22:644 - finish
  12. 01:23:384 - ^
  13. 01:33:940 - ^
  14. 01:34:495 - ^
  15. 01:43:199 (1) - This spinner should start at 01:44:310 - , I think it's better~~
  16. 02:04:310 (1) - Too twist >.<
  17. 02:07:088 (1) - Remove this slider? it sounds a bit strange..
  18. 02:36:069 - a bit louder :< How about 35% volume? I think it more fit the music
  19. 02:52:458 (1) - finish
  20. 03:04:310 (2) - ^
  21. 03:04:310 (2) - Change the slider's end at 03:04:866 - is better~ (Don't forget add finish at 03:04:866 - it really fit the music :>)
  22. 03:05:421 (1) - I highly suggest that change the slider's start at 03:05:792 -
<Noraml>
  1. 00:03:570 (1,2,3,4) - If you want make them to be straight... http://puu.sh/OhNl Here is the code ;)
    52,52,3570,1,2
    180,148,4310,1,0
    308,244,5051,1,2
    436,340,5792,1,0
  2. 01:14:681 (1) - Ugly.. QAQ Try to fix the shape better~
  3. 01:17:644 (3) - ^
  4. 01:22:088 (1) - finish
  5. 01:33:940 - ^
  6. 01:34:495 (5) - ^
  7. 01:43:199 (1) - Same as Easy
  8. 01:50:236 (2) - How about 4 grid up? :>
  9. 02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm... stack with 4 circle is not good in a Normal diff.. Use a slider with 2 arrows to replace them?
  10. 02:52:458 - finish
  11. 02:53:014 - ^
  12. 02:53:755 - ^
  13. 03:04:310 - ^
  14. 03:04:866 - ^
<Hard>
  1. 00:51:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange ryhthm :< This is better IMO~
  2. 01:05:792 (1,2,3) - Blanketing it better!!~~~ http://puu.sh/OhZ1
    412,92,65792,6,0,B|412:140|488:136|464:196|484:236|420:264,1,200,4|0
    332,256,66903,1,2
    396,196,67273,1,6
  3. 01:22:088 - How about this ryhthm? I think it's better~
  4. 01:31:718 (1) - This spinner is really strange here... I super suggest remove it and add some circle to replace!! ><
  5. 01:43:199 (1) - Same as Easy Orz..
  6. 02:13:199 (4) - Bad shape :< fix it plz!! ><
  7. 02:43:940 (5) - Add some green to Turn the volume gradually up?
  8. 02:52:458 (4) - finish
  9. 02:53:014 - ^
  10. 02:53:755 - ^
  11. 03:04:310 (2) - ^
<Rainbow x Regou>
  1. 00:17:458 (5,6) - 疊到了不是很好看..
  2. 00:18:199 (7,8) - 怪怪的節奏._. 這樣吧~ :>
  3. 00:35:051 (4,5,6) - 疊到一點>_> (4)再往上一些吧
  4. 01:02:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 星星歪掉了OJZ.. 幫你重做了個.. http://puu.sh/OibJ 給個密碼吧~ @w@
    276,80,62088,5,0
    222,145,62273,1,0
    268,216,62458,1,0
    350,194,62644,1,0
    354,109,62829,1,0
  5. 01:43:199 (1) - 這轉盤位置好怪.. 01:44:310 - 改這邊開始吧!!
  6. 02:44:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 音量漸增吧~ 挺好的
Okay~ That's all~
Good luck!!~~~~~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyou! >w<
Aunxfb
From:Fishball's NEWBIE modding queue

Here goes~
[Easy]
00:03:570 - change slider velocity to 0.75x
00:03:570 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away(00:04:310 - )
00:05:051 (2) - ^
00:07:273 - add circle
00:08:755 - ^
00:09:495 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:10:977 (2) - ^
00:13:199 - add circle
00:15:421 - move this timing section to 00:15:051
00:15:051 (1) - remove reverse(shorten it on timeline)
00:16:162 - add circle, NC(new combo)
00:16:903 (1) - remove NC
00:16:903 (2) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:19:125 - add circle
00:19:866 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:22:088 - add circle
00:23:569 - add circle
00:32:458 (3) - add NC
00:33:199 (1) - remove NC
00:41:718 (2) - snap to 00:41:532
00:42:088 (3) - snap to 00:41:903
00:49:125 (3) - slider start at 00:49:310,shorten slider so it ends at 00:50:607
00:53:940 (2) - add whistle(although I dind it hardly noticeable...)
01:02:829 (1) - remove circle
01:01:347 (3) - extend slider so the last circle ends at 01:02:829 ,add finish to last circle
01:03:569 - add circle
01:03:940 (5) - remove slider
01:04:310 - start a slider here, end it at 01:04:681,NC
01:13:199 (4),01:14:681 (1) - remove circle(s)
01:13:199 - start a spinner here, ends it at 01:14:681
01:44:310 (1) - delete spinner?(seems like an extra to me)
01:50:607 (1) - delete circle
01:50:977 (2) - start slider at 01:50:792 ,end at 01:51:532
01:51:718 (7) - delete circle
01:52:088 (7) - start slider at 01:51:903,end at 01:52:273
02:52:458 (1) - add finish to last circle too?

[Normal]
00:26:347 (4) - add 2 reverse
00:28:384 (4) - snap this to 00:28:569
00:51:718 (1) - shorten slider so it ends at 00:53:014
00:53:569 (2) - snap this to 00:53:384
00:53:755 - add circle
00:54:681 (1) - end slider at 00:55:977
00:56:347 - add circle
00:56:532 (3) - snap to 00:56:718
01:14:681 (4) - add NC
01:20:607 (1) - remove NC ,add finish to last circle
01:22:088 (1) - remove NC and finish
01:22:829 (3) - snap to 01:22:644
01:23:014 - start spinner here, end it at same position
01:34:125 - add circle?
01:47:644 (1) - let slider start at 01:47:829
01:50:607 (1) - let slider start at 01:50:792
02:35:236 (4) - add reverse(extend on timeline)
02:48:014 (1) - delete circle
02:47:273 (5) - add finish
02:47:644 - start a slider here,end it at 02:48:014 ,NC
02:48:570 (3) - remove finish on first circle
02:55:421 (1) - add 1 reverse
02:56:162 (2) - snap to 02:56:347
02:56:718 - add circle


[Hard]
00:13:199 (2) - delete circle
00:12:458 (1) - add reverse
00:19:495 (2) - delete circle
00:18:940 (1) - extend slider so the second circle is at 00:19:218(Whole thing ends at 00:19:495 )(You may need some other fix for this(or just ignore this))
00:19:681 (2) - remove reverse,extend it so it ends at where it should
00:26:903 - add circle
00:27:088 - ^
00:42:088 (8) - add finish
00:45:421 (2) - snap to 00:45:607
00:46:162 (4) - delete circle
00:48:755 (3) - change this into a circle
00:51:347 (1) - snap this to 00:51:532
00:51:718 (2) - extend slider so it ends at 00:52:644
00:52:829 (3) - delete circle
00:53:199 (4) - let this start at 00:53:384 and ends at 00:53:940
01:17:644 (2) - let this start at 01:17:458, end at 01:18:384
01:21:718 (3) - snap this to 01:21:903 ,add NC
01:22:088 (1) - shorten slider, add 1 reverse(whole thing ends at 01:22:644).remove NC'
02:21:532 (4) - remove circle
02:22:273 (5) - remove slider
02:21:718 (4) - move to 02:22:088
02:23:570 (5) - remove circle
02:22:829 - start a slider here, end it at 02:23:940,add whistle/finish on second circle
02:26:347 - add circle
03:03:199 (4) - delete circle

[RainbowxRegou]
I'm not skillful enough to mod this,but I do see that it needs some modding, go get some experienced modder :P
Topic Starter
Kanari
I didnt change anything for the beginning of the easy diff but the rest I changed ~
Thankyou for modding ~ ;D
pimp
general

remove your osb file and full submit

normal

00:39:866 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:48:014 (1) - this note is a bit overlapped by the previous hitbursts, not good in normal imo
01:30:607 (2) - overlapped by hitbursts, i gess this one is not so serious but consider avoiding it too
01:47:551 (1,2,1) - i dont like how "skinny" this sliders are. you could try "S" sliders. i know s liders are too obvious but yeah, this is just my own opinion
02:55:421 (1,2,3) - this combo sounds really strange, i would sugest you add 1 repeat to (1) and move (2,3) to the next red ticks, but it will be difficult for normal because (3) will be too close to the next combo, consider changing the style of these two combos


hard

00:46:347 (1,2,3) - align then a bit more simmetrycally
02:22:273 (6) - overlapped by the previous hitbursts, still visible but looks bad imo
02:56:903 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
03:03:199 (4,5) - i gess this placing does not works in small sliders, and looks confusing/ugly (imo)
03:05:236 - maybe a note here and in the next white tick? you are using it in normal i gess hard should use too
03:05:792 - i dont know much about this, but i think you should not end the kiai here. move this inherit to the previous note or to spiner end?


rainbow x regou


00:18:199 (7) make the slider end in the white tick?
00:18:569 (8) remove note?

i'm going to finish this mod later :o

edit
sorry for keep you waiting i was really busy ;_;


rainbow x regou


you are using 1x slider speed in the slow part of the song and 0.50x in the normal part, thats a bit strange imo
btw i think 0.50x is too slow for this sliderspeed

the rithym is so strange, in the 1st minute you are just filling the white/red tick as much as possible
try to follow the vocal and make it harder when it "calls for it" just like you did at 00:41:162 (4,5,6,7,1)
and dont force yourself to fill everrything

00:32:829 (4,1,2,3) - this pattern does not fits here imo, try to follow the vocal?
00:35:421 (6) - this long slider sounds really bad imo, ans using 0.50x slider speed its not "insane",
you should try to make it end at 00:36:162 in the long white tick

00:36:718 (1) - this reverse slider sounds bad, try to make it end in the long white tick
00:42:088 (1) - you should consider shortening this slider, it looks like a normal/easy long slider imo
try shortening it to 00:42:644 in the red tick, and make a 1/1 beat slider in the white tick
00:50:607 (3) - make this slider end at 00:51:532
00:51:532 - you made a slider speed change here while the slider still moving at 0.50x if you dont follow my sugestion above, move this inherit to the next white tick

01:57:644 - map this part too

01:17:273 (1,2,3) - this notes looked like a sudden slow down, this is my own opinion
try to keep the fast rithym of the previous notes and keep using the clap pattern?
01:33:940 (1,2) - align them better

thats all

good luck :)
Nathien
Well, ill give it a try, but dont expect to much =)
if its not helpfull just ignore it ^^

modding attempt
Easy:
01:50:607 (1) - 2 problems with this, first: to go with the vocals it would be on the blue line (but probably u knew that already ^^) 2nd and more important: while playing this part i was in another flow, so that i tried to hit the circle to early. Especially for beginners this might be difficult, so maybe move it somewhere else?
01:50:977 (2) - delete that slider, set a hitcircle there
01:51:347 (3) - set a slider to the next red line here
01:52:088 (4) - delete that slider
01:51:903 (4) - hitcircle here
01:52:273 (5) - hitcircle here

Normal:
00:26:347 (4) - this one is a bit difficult to read since its a compltely different beat
01:35:421 (1) - spinner giving 15k bonus ... mb a bit to long? the highes i've seen on ranked maps gave me 13k :o
02:55:977 (2) - i'd add a note here somehow, either give that slider more reversearrows or just put a hitcircle. Everytime i play i desperately search that note ^^

Hard:
01:22:088 (2) - make this one one tick shorter and add a reverse, sounds better to me
01:47:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a strange mix of vocal- and beat-based notes, maybe its just me but it sounds a bit weird ^^
02:10:607 (4) - this was my first real "wtf"-moment while playing ^^ without watching the editor i would probably still search for that note >_< mb set it to x256, y48 ??
02:12:829 (3) - set this note to 02:13:014 (3)

rainbow x regou:
00:30:236 (1) - at this point i'd increase the sliderspeed again, it feels very very strange to have that insanely slow sliders there >_< + the music wants more notes! dont steal them ^^
00:30:607 (4) - missing note
00:31:347 (4) - missing note
00:35:421 (6) - this slider starts and ends in the middle of nowhere :o
00:36:718 (1) - same here, no real start no real end. It would be better if it would either fit the vocals OR the music (like drumbeat or sth)
00:39:866 (3) - maybe it would fit if there was no hitsound on the reverse, but i would rather make one more reverse and set them on the white lines like the beat wants them ^^
00:42:088 (1) - ok, here is a usefull start and endpoint, but im still missing notes, maybe add sounds to the sliderticks? would probably help. That goes for a lot of sliders, just try to give them slidertick-hitsounds.

well, thats what i found so far. Maybe (or probably) you did most of them on purpose, but since im a quite unexperienced modder i just showed you what caught my eye =)

its a great map anyway and somehow i began to like the song while listening it over and over again xD so good luck with it!
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~ >w<
I'll get to modding your map soon.
I'll update when PimpG continues with his mod ~
terametis
Hi :)
from your queue.

These are all suggestion.

[Easy]
00:49:125 (3)         I feel this pattern is difficult. It is not on vocal, so beginners must look at the approach circle. How about this? 01:12:755 (2)         Why different Distance snap? It has the potential to confuse the beginner.
01:50:607 (1)~(5)      These are symmetric, but it is not an easy rhythm. I propose to make the same rhythm as part of one before. 
[Normal]
00:28:755 (1)         Different Distance snap.
02:55:977 (2)         How about this? 02:59:125 (4)         Add finish.
02:59:495 (1)         Remove finish.
03:00:607 (2)         Add finish at the end of slider.
03:01:718 (6)         Remove finish.

[Hard]
00:28:014 (4)         I feel, Finish sound is a little noisy. If you want anything hitsound, I recommend change to whistle.
01:50:792 (1)         This jump is really confusing.
02:45:051 ~ 02:51:718  Please add some finish. This song really fit finish.
02:56:903 ~ 03:01:718  ^

[Rainbow x Regou]
I feel noisy sliderslide sound. If possible, I propose remove it.
00:18:199 (1),(2)      I don't like this pattern.
00:27:273 ~ 01:02:829  This song really fit finish and whistle. I wish add some hisounds.
02:55:421 (2)         <3

That's all.


I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~ :)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkkyhuu ~
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