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Triple Bounce - Magic Melody (Nightcore Mix)

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Topic Starter
Tony
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, October 11, 2011 at 2:09:26 PM

Artist: Triple Bounce
Title: Magic Melody (Nightcore Mix)
Source: Nightcore III
Tags: wcx19911123 BounceBabe
BPM: 164.22
Filesize: 4268kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2 stars, 141 notes)
  2. Insane (4.89 stars, 409 notes)
  3. Normal (3.23 stars, 188 notes)
  4. wcx's Hard (4.86 stars, 384 notes)
Download: Triple Bounce - Magic Melody (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd Nightcore map and also my 10th map! I hope you enjoy this too <3
Thank you wcx19911123 for the nice Hard diff!
Thank you BounceBabe for the nice SB you made for me :3
Thank you Outrunner for the mp3 fix :3

Mapset
[Easy] 100%
[Normal] 100%
[wcx's Hard] 100%
[Insane] 100%
Raffey
http://puu.sh/5wIJ
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Offset: 1060

Done so far;)
Topic Starter
Tony
full submited~
thanks :D

too short too short too short~~~
Outrunner
better mp3 ---> http://www.mediafire.com/?5veyolq6xf9v55t

Timing:
BPM: 164.22
Offset: 1004

Good luck with this :) .
Topic Starter
Tony
thanks very much. I have asked a couple of players to find the better quality. and here it is from my romanian friend <3 hope that someday you will want to start mapping
BounceBabe
Here we go... since you've got a >> SB << now, remove "Letterbox during breaks"
Just copy everything from the "SB" folder into your mapfolder ;3 - Don't forget to full submit.

Good luck ♥
Lnzr_old
accept a normal diff? .
Topic Starter
Tony
sure! but be aware, I might not add it if it's not good or if I won't like it :D
Lnzr_old

Tony wrote:

sure! but be aware, I might not add it if it's not good or if I won't like it :D
okay :P
wcx19911123
Topic Starter
Tony
You're so hardworker <3 Thanks alot :D

This message is too short!
HellDawn
General
You should add wcx19911123 and bouncebabe in tags

Normal
00:17:810- New combo cuz highest combo *-*
01:45:497- ^
00:21:281- NC? I dont know or here 00:23:656-
01:51:343- ^

Hard
Pretty nice diff <3
UnderminE
Easy
You used rhythms like this very much: 01:03:846 (1) - I mean, with this way, this easy looks really boring <_< what about using something like this http://puu.sh/69L0
Where is the kiai part o.o Needs a kiai I think.
And some whistle suggestions:
00:46:674 (2) - %60 whistle at the beginning and the ending
00:52:519 (2) - ^
00:59:827 - %65 whistle
01:00:558 - ^

Normal
This diff sounds too silent to me <_< Maybe use hitnormal for silent parts (I mean no-sound parts)
Plus same long sliders here too. They are boring ;_;

Hard
That's what I'm talking about hitsounds. well used hitnormals.
02:15:092 (5) - x: 328 y:68 ?

Insane
Okay you know what I said about hitsounds (especially hitnormal) anyways.
02:31:533 - set volume to %5 like you did in normal diff.

I think that's all. Nice song, good luck~
IceBeam
Hey there,Tony!

I'm really not sure if adding SB maker's nickname to Tags is neccessary
Personally I don't mind - just make sure it's allowed

Also,countdown doesn't work - disable it?

Otherwise seems good~

[Easy]
00:03:927 (3) - I'd extend it to the next white tick.White or blue - both fit,but white tick would be better,as it's the easiest difficulty.
00:09:773 (3) - ^ Again,and personally,white sounds even better.
00:30:233 (3) - Honestly,I was expecting this repeat at 00:30:781,but I guess it's alright,as it's an Easy..
00:56:538 (2,3,1) - A bit nazi,but maybe change the placement of the objects to make 00:58:000 (1) symmetrical?
01:31:614 (6) - Extend to white tick?
01:36:363 - Hm,a bit weird space,as there's a beat in music,though it's readable.But I'd suggest to add a note here too.

[Normal]
Setting are totally similar to Easy' ones,except the circle size ._.
Is it okay? I mean,maybe reduce HP Drain/OD in Easy then?
Anyway I'd like AR +1 here.

00:03:926 (5) - Well,as in Easy,personally,I like white tick much more,but it's up to you.
01:04:942 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make a pentagon shape out of these?

Nothing major here~

[wcx's Hard]
00:53:251 (4) - A bit odd,I'd remove this repeat and place a circle (00:53:616) in the center of the field.

Otherwise it's just great!

[Insane]
00:06:849 (1,2,3) - Mirror it to the different side? Cause it's a bit close to previous object,though I read it well.
00:12:695 (1,2,3) - I remember I had a map with symmetrical sliders using different slider speed.Someone told me it's not allowed,so you should ask for bat's opinion about this.
00:18:541 (1,2,3) - ^ Nice slider shape btw ;)
00:28:588 - Hm,I feel like a note is missing here.It should follow these lyrics.
00:32:059 (8) - Nazi,but 1 grid right and down looks better.
00:46:126 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ah,I should stop being nazi,but it looks odd to me :/ I mean,maybe make some pattern using all 6 circles and not stacking the "useless" one?
00:50:328 (8) - Few grids down to avoid overlapping with the next slider?
01:08:048 - Missing a note?
01:23:576 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hm,and now I'd suggest to use a pattern like you did at 00:46:126 (4,5,6,7,8,9) :D
01:45:315 (4,5,6,7) - Again,use some kind of diamond/square shape?
02:24:043 (6,7,8) - Place them in one line?

That's it!
I haven't seen your maps for a while,dude,but this one is really,REALLY nice
Keep on the good work~
Topic Starter
Tony
long time no see IceBeam! As always I received great mod from you :3 Hope that I'm gonna rank that BAD apple pretty soon(?) :)
TicClick
General stuff
— Is 'Nightcore III" an album title? If so, remove it from source field; it never contains album title

Easy
01:06:769 (1) - why there is a clap? It should be on the third beat, at the beginning of this slider: 01:07:499 (2) - (then remove it from slider's end). You may also use whistle on 01:06:769 (1) -
01:08:961 (3) - add clap here

Normal
00:42:655 (1) - place it actually in the center; move a lil' bit up
01:04:942 (3,4,5,6) - make these finishes more quiet
01:38:921 (3,4) - repeating slider instead of these? Don't know if this is a good idea
02:06:689 (1) - and so on — hey, I remember you have claps on second and fourth beats on Easy. Sounds cooler

Hard
00:04:018 (4) - add whistle for slider's end
00:06:484 (6) - ^
And soooooo on, moments like these
00:23:565 (1) - uncomfortable for me
00:24:387 (8) - break after it?
01:25:859 (4) - whistle for slider's end
01:53:535 (1) - what if you start it right after the stream?
02:29:158 (1,2) - cool

Insane
00:15:435 (1,2,3) - it's just me, but I never like wide-spaced streams and triplets
01:06:769 (3) - something undefined. Either make its beginning more 'straight' or remove this red anchor
01:09:692 (4,6) - though I'm not sure you should try, but anyway, take a loooook
01:18:461 (1,2,1,2,1) - hm. I would make something like.. "stairway" instead of this cross (I also would remove the last note and just add one more repeat)
01:20:287 — you don't need to 'start' break from this point. Move it back to 01:19:922
01:35:267 (1,2,3,4) - two squares in a row? Matter of style, but I'd rotate the second square to make it better
01:52:074 (1) - the same with the break after it
02:12:534 (1,2) - something undefined again
02:15:457 (1,3) - it's too sharp. Make this gap wider

That's all I can see.
Topic Starter
Tony
fixed some of your suggestions~ thanks :)
KayeSara
Req from jojo's queue
Baka Modding~
Time for ignorable modding~All of them just a suggestion.

[General]
  1. You need a Kiai timing
    offset 66769 - 79922
    offset 120843 - 150072
[Easy]
  1. Good enough~
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:628 - add note
  2. 00:23:656 (1) - make it begin 00:23:473, and end at same time
  3. 01:45:315 - add note
  4. 01:51:343 (1) - same as 00:23:656 (1)
    Nothing ><
[wcx's Hard]
  1. 00:21:738 (2,3) - gather it in a slider, as you do like 00:19:546 (4)
  2. 00:22:469 (5,6) - ^
  3. 01:49:425 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:50:156 (5,6) - ^
    That's it
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:974 (3) - delete it, add note in 00:13:974, and make a slider from 00:14:157 to 00:14:887
  2. 01:18:461 (1,2,1,2,1) - Awsome part! Really cool~
    OK, there's nothing should mod~

Moreover, I'd like this song and the girl in BG ;) star~
Good Luck~
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from: Jojo's mod queue~

General:
Preview are not the same. Please check them in osu files.
Offset are not the same. Please check them in osu files.
Offset is 1004.02029398699.....why? check osu files again... fix all of them to 1004.



Easy:
nothing to pick.


Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:21:281 (3,4) - I am not a fun using double notes like this in a 3star diff when a song bpm is not low, maybe slider instead?


wcx's Hard:
Hitsound
01:18:461 (6) - werid claps during this. I suggest to delete them.
01:18:461 (6) - Strongly suggest volumn increase by degress here. 20 to 40 is fine for me. and tail finish 50.


Insane:
Issue/unrankable stuff
I suggest HP drain-1.
00:17:628 (4,5,6,7) - this is really hard to read.... I really think it should not use 1.0 spacing here, because the triples before are using 1.2. and maybe add a new combo here: 00:17:628 (4) - for warning..
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:06:119 (3,4,5,6) - I prefer you don't stack here, for me it is more comfortable if 3 is downer.


Gerneal thing are very important, please make sure you fix them all.
Then good luck~
wcx19911123
updated here
about timing , I'm not sure what to do. please help me to fix the timing in my diff 0.0
don't forget to resnap all notes and timing sections :3
Download: Triple Bounce - Magic Melody (Nightcore Mix) (Tony) [wcx's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Tony
fixed some of your mods + those timing issues ~
changed offset to 1006~
artpiggo
Insane
00:24:389 (1) - move up little bit
01:52:076 (1) - move right little bit
02:09:613 (1) - why don't make same slider as 02:08:883 (7) flip horizon
02:16:190 (3) - flip vertical and move to (204,132)

wcx
00:23:932 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - try gradually increase volume in every red-white line note.

normal
00:13:793 (2) - add note
00:59:464 (3) - rotate 180 selection centre
01:33:077 (1,2) - err... this way express better.


easy
cool.

9.5/10 GO GO
Topic Starter
Tony
most fixed~ thanks artpiggo for the mod and for those awesome stars :!: :!:
merchat7
As requested, Late mod..

[General]

- I don't see why you didn't use kiai time? But I guess you have a reason. However, I would prefer if you do a short kiai toggle at 01:06:771 and 02:19:844. It gives a nice effect.
- Use more timing point and change the volume of the hitsound for Easy and Normal. You use 70% volume hitsound for most of those difficulties which is quite boring.Do the same thing as Insane?

[Easy]

-1 hp drain for lower star rating?

01:05:309 (1.2) - I suggest replacing the finish at begin of slider (2) to whistle and make a crescendo effect with the timeline.

Can't find any problem, pretty nice.

[Normal]

00:15:437 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Much more beginner friendly if you use short sliders here (make 3,4 a slider 5,6 a slider and 7,8 a slider).
00:21:283 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:33:808 (3.1) - Remove (1) and make slider (3) end here instead? The hitsound from slider (3) end blends with the hitsound of slider (1) and make it sound weird.
01:43:125 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as previous suggestion.
01:48:970 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:56:460 (2) - Ctrl + J this and put back in same spot, more interesting.

Looks good as well.

[wcx's Hard]

00:18:543 (1) - Don't see why you didn't curve this slider.
00:32:609 (4,6) - Space it out so it look like a hexagon. http://puu.sh/6GEn Nicer for me.
02:11:075 (2.3,5.6) - ^

Good as usual.

[Insane]

- Hp drain 8 is quite high considering there is lot of streams (miss a stream, massive hit to hp) -1 hp drain?

00:07:582 (3) - This kick slider was unexpected, can you place it so that it's more readable?
00:23:475 (9,10) - Can you rotate (9) 90 degree clock wise and (10) 90 degree anti clockwise, much easier to read. Or like this? http://puu.sh/6GFh Also just noticed that (10) has 3 repeats while (9) has just 1. How about making the stream two notes longer and removing the two repeats from (10)?
01:18:463 (1,2 1,2) - I find these kick sliders hard to read as it hard to tell when they will end. Can you try something different? Easiest way to change this is to just make one long kick sliders rather than 4.

Nice as well

Considering adding kiai time to emphasize certain part. If not, please add kiai toggles where I mentioned. I generally don't like nightcore, but map doesn't has many error so I guess I'll star.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Tony
thank you! fixed some~
IceBeam
bubbled

short irc mod
14:19 <IceBeam> : i saw there was a merchat17's mod on triple bounce
14:19 <IceBeam> : ask wcx19911123 if he wants to change anything
14:19 <IceBeam> : and i'll mod it again
14:19 <Tony> : ok :D
14:19 <Tony> : thx
14:29 <Tony> : wcx is now online and he checks it :D
14:30 <IceBeam> : cool =p
14:35 <Tony> : he checked I he didn't want to change anything
14:35 <IceBeam> : k!
14:35 <Tony> : I'm gonna double check my other diffs then
14:36 <Tony> : did you remember that you said in your mod about tags?
14:37 <Tony> : I saw some ranked maps with SB maker nickname in tags~
14:37 <IceBeam> : sb maker?
14:37 <Tony> : yeah :D
14:37 <Tony> : and about the mirror sliders, with different speeds
14:37 <Tony> : I asked RandomJibberish, and he said it's ok if I have ticks
14:38 <IceBeam> : yeah xD that was actually a bit nazi cause there were ticks
14:38 <Tony> : xD
14:48 <Tony> : yuhuu fixed random spacing error on Insane
14:48 <IceBeam> : btw LOL
14:48 <IceBeam> : I found really nazi one
14:48 <IceBeam> : 01:40:384 (1) -
14:48 <IceBeam> : in easy
14:49 <IceBeam> : 1 grid right for symmetria? =3=
14:49 <Tony> : 1 grid right ?
14:49 <Tony> : oh wait
14:49 <IceBeam> : yeah,so the middle tick would cross the "y" axis
14:49 <Tony> : slider shape problem
14:49 <IceBeam> : yeah,a bit
14:50 <Tony> : I thought i fixed this
14:50 <Tony> : oh well then I'm gonna fix next two similar shapes
14:51 <IceBeam> : kay!
14:51 <IceBeam> : otherwise it's clear to me
14:53 <Tony> : okay done and uploaded
14:53 <Tony> : :D
14:54 <IceBeam> : okay
14:54 <IceBeam> : in normal
14:54 <IceBeam> : 00:16:899 (7,8,9) -
14:55 <IceBeam> : maybe add another note to 00:17:447
14:55 <IceBeam> : to connect there rhytm together?
14:55 <IceBeam> : just asking ._.
14:56 <Tony> : can i do something like this: move (9) back 1/1 and add a repeat?
14:56 <IceBeam> : of course :o
14:56 <IceBeam> : well
14:56 <IceBeam> : then if you're gonna change it
14:56 <IceBeam> : there're lots of similar moments ahead
14:56 <IceBeam> : 00:23:293 (9) -
14:57 <Tony> : I know :<
14:57 <IceBeam> : so it's not required
14:57 <IceBeam> : just how you feel what's better
14:57 <IceBeam> : 01:45:134 (9) -
14:57 <IceBeam> : 01:50:980 (9) -
14:57 <Tony> : I'll let it the way it is :<
14:57 <IceBeam> : alright!
14:58 <Tony> : somebody posted these things on another mod but I quite like the way it is :<
14:58 <IceBeam> : ok! np
15:05 <Tony> : 01:02:935 (7) - i'm so stupid
15:05 <IceBeam> : what diff?
15:05 <Tony> : insane
15:05 <IceBeam> : what's wrong with it?
15:06 <Tony> : look at distances
15:06 <Tony> : xD
15:06 <Tony> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161673 this is better
15:06 <IceBeam> : honestly it's not that noticble xD
15:06 <Tony> : xD
15:07 <Tony> : updated ~
15:07 <Tony> : 01:29:058 (3) - wtf again
15:07 <IceBeam> : 00:06:303 (4,5,6,1) -
15:08 <IceBeam> : that's the only thing that disturbs me honestly
15:08 <Tony> : oh
15:08 <IceBeam> : what's about that spacing - i don't ever map using DS xD
15:08 <IceBeam> : so it's sooo minor
15:08 <IceBeam> : and that thing
15:09 <IceBeam> : it's technically rankable
15:09 <Tony> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161674
15:09 <IceBeam> : because of new combo
15:09 <IceBeam> : yep
15:09 <IceBeam> : that'd be much better
15:09 <Tony> : updating then
15:10 <IceBeam> : fine otherwise
15:10 <Tony> : done~
15:11 <IceBeam> : so,will you fix that tiny spacing lacks? :D or you're done with changes?
15:11 <Tony> : i think I'm done
15:11 <Tony> : just a sec
15:12 <Tony> : ok I'm done :D
15:12 <Tony> : please post this log
15:13 <IceBeam> : it's not really neccessary ._.
15:13 <IceBeam> : but ok xD
15:13 <Tony> : it is lol XD
ztrot
damn man sorry about your wait I wish you would of come gotten me instead I stumbled on to this one month old bubble but good news its great :D ranked
merchat7
Grats
Topic Starter
Tony
np, it's never too late :) thanks a lot
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