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-yuki- - Prime Limitation (Short Ver.)

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Fushimi Rio
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月1日 at 3:43:25

Artist: -yuki-
Title: Prime Limitation (Short Ver.)
Source: Sakura Sakimashita
Tags: opening sorahane TINKERBELL Sakura Sakimashita
BPM: 170
Filesize: 18277kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.48 stars, 127 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 351 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 478 notes)
  4. Normal (4.14 stars, 178 notes)


Download: -yuki- - Prime Limitation (Short Ver.)
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Sakura Sakimashita's 2nd opening.
简直坠毁 谁教教我怎么处理这个宽屏vedio和普屏bg的状况
好好打里侧啊
wantuole
沙发
easy nor画条有点快
整体音效有点轻了
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

wantuole wrote:

沙发
easy nor画条有点快
整体音效有点轻了
已改= =音效加了5%到10%不知道行不行
Purist
hi :)
因为我是新人所以如果哪说的不对的话请多包涵


General

因为音乐的声音比较大所以音效的音量可以调大点
个人推荐在60%左右

Easy

.osu文件里的SliderMultiplier听说还是改一下比较好
00:04:186(1)可以试试这个节奏
00:39:479(1)后移到00:39:656
00:59:420(2)这个呢
01:02:950(1)remove nc
01:14:773(3)感觉这样比较舒服
01:20:597(1)尾部延长到01:21:302
01:26:244(1)^
01:47:520(1)finish

Normal

00:02:775(3)叠好
00:27:127(3,4)^
00:58:009(2)这个滑条会碰到上方的血条
01:47:346(1)finish

Hard

OD-1
00:11:245(1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1)感觉这一串没必要每一个都加nc
另外可以加绿线让音量逐个减小
00:15:656(8)nc
00:16:009(1)remove nc
00:42:832(x)add note
00:44:244(x)^
00:49:715(5,6,7,1)滑条尾没叠在一起
01:09:303(6)nc
01:09:479(1)remove nc
01:14:950(1,1)这两个间距稍微大了点
01:27:655(x)add note
01:29:067(x)^
01:47:346(1)finish

Sakusaki

OD-1
几个比较长的连打可以用nc分下段
00:02:775(7)nc
00:03:304(1)remove nc
00:04:186(6)nc
00:04:716(1)remove nc
还有一段跟上面这个相似的
00:08:598(7,2)叠歪了
00:17:244(4)超出边界了
01:14:244(1,2,3)感觉改成3note就可以了

大概就这么多了 加油 :)
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Purist wrote:

大概就这么多了 加油
Thanks~音效我觉得能听到就行了
lkx_Shore
General
Mod from my queue
音质听起来很渣的样子...
new combo统一一下,每到大白线就用一个会比较好
music track调到1比较好(在song setup的audio最下面
enable countdown可以去掉(在song setup的storyboarding里
Stack leniency最好是调到4
mod得略渣,主要从玩家的感觉上来mod.如果你想的是难,而不是打起来爽而且随手FC,那么可以无视我的mod
这图红线只需要插一个

Sakusaki
HP8→7 (8的判定较高,7是最妥当的
OD8→7
00:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 我猜有人会吐槽这是烂梗.
00:30:480 (5) - 如果你要用这个梗,就别在下面叠note,会很不舒服(至少露出来一点
00:41:068 (1,2) - 来回一次就好
01:00:479 (4,5) - 叠着不舒服
01:35:861 (7) - 去掉note或者改成滑条在白线前停,白线放note
01:41:861 (2) - 去掉note
01:42:038 (3) - ^
01:42:038 (3) - ........你觉得这样打着会舒服吗?从良用滑条带过会比较好

其他地方没什么问题,只是这样打起来感觉不会“非常爽”
可以多套用01:32:597 (4,5) - 这个梗.这样打起来会比较“爽”
音效方面你没怎么添加whistle,这样也行,不过你要添加的话就得整个图加.
如果加了一半不加一半,感觉会很奇怪.
大致加法就是听音,起伏较大的音就加上whistle.
连着加三个以上听着会不太好.所以我一般是加两个就留一个note不加whistle.

Hard
HP7→5
OD6→5
AR7→8
00:48:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 差评!
01:13:361 (3,4,5,6,7) - 改了吧
01:21:655 (4) - ......
01:30:832 (8) - 不要叠着
01:33:126 (4,5,6,7) - 叠太多了
01:38:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 节奏都对不上

hard还是有点小跳会比较好,叠的地方也太多了.建议取缔

Normal
HP3→4
00:01:010 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 叠得太多,打起来不舒服
00:14:774 (4) - 这种滑条下叠note的梗在normal里不要用,新手们会很困扰的
00:45:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/3在normal里是用滑条带过的.(新手打得准起来会很难
01:14:244 (1,2,3) - 这种最好也用滑条带一下
01:45:843 (1) - ...这里可不是用1/3就能对上节奏的地方

Easy
Od2→1
00:04:186 (1) - 取缔,节奏对不上
00:39:479 (1) - ^
01:14:508 (2) - 1/3在easy里还用. 毫无人性;_;
01:25:538 (2) - 只有insane难度才能在滑条上叠note
01:45:786 (1) - 节奏对不上,而且在easy里不要两个转圈连在一起...

渣mod见谅 :?
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_shore wrote:

Sakusaki
01:42:038 (3) - ........你觉得这样打着会舒服吗?从良用滑条带过会比较好
说的是最后一段……?我打着没什么感觉 :?

Hard
AR7→8
我觉得hard还是不要太高……
已改,感谢mod~
音乐已换……虽然感觉还是渣
cmn_891127
Hi, Eggache0
Sorry for delay, you know, Midterm Exam

[Sakusaki]
00:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I really cannot see them clearly, if you really like this pattern, plz add NC, or you can use Ctrl+Shift+R
01:25:185 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:45:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not For Human. Ctrl+R (1,2) and (12,13)

[Hard]
00:12:127 (1,1,1,1,1) - why not use 1/4 reverse slider instead of notes
00:26:862 (2) - not fit here, remove
00:47:420 (5) - NC
00:49:538 (5) - NC
01:23:067 (7,1) - NC at (7) instead of (1)

[Normal]
00:45:303 (1,1) - too close for Normal diff, you can use One Note instead of spinner
00:55:185 (1,1) - ^, end at 00:56:597 and remove (1)
01:17:773 (1,1) - ^, end at 01:19:185

[Easy]
00:01:539 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - NC so frequently
01:17:773 (1,1) - like [Normal]
01:47:520 (1) - special start time

I love mapset of [Sakusaki]:3
GL and Star~
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

cmn_891127 wrote:

Exam too...
Thanks for modding and star!
PinkHeart
换音效看看?现在的clap效果太弱

[Easy]
00:58:906 add note
01:11:965 - (1) remove nc
01:20:436 - (1,2) 这个梗和后面的放在一起太难了 缩短slider circle改到01:21:141

[Normal]
00:14:083 - (3,4) slider有点近……玩的时候看错拍了
00:28:000 - (1) add note
00:45:141 - (1) remove nc
00:46:553 - (3) nc
01:14:083 - (1,2,3) 1/3用slider

star 祝好运
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

PinkHeart wrote:

以上 差不多还是star了 考试顺利
star感谢 太晚了明天再看 不许提考试!
PinkHeart
[Hard]
00:11:259 - (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) 太难了!
00:26:436 - (5,6) 间距和前面请保持一致
01:34:377 - (8) 换到下面的位置 nc
01:34:553 - (1) remove nc
01:45:451 - (1,2,3,4,5) 难按...

[Sakusaki]
00:43:024 - (9) clap
00:43:730 - (7) finish
00:45:141 - (1) finish

另两个难度mod补上
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

PinkHeart wrote:

[Easy]
01:20:436 - (1,2) 这个梗和后面的放在一起太难了 缩短slider circle改到01:21:141 正在考虑...
[Normal]
00:45:141 - (1) remove nc 我觉得不合适...
[Hard]
01:34:377 - (8) 换到下面的位置 nc 位置现在的比较好
麻烦补mod了 抱歉
UnderminE
First of all, loved the song.

[Easy]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50? (Well if you will use 50 and will use that suggestion I did below, you will have to change the volume according to 50)
00:33:865 - This part has to get louder. So I am suggesting you to add these:
I am suggesting you to use whistles for that back-sound during kiai time. Normal-whistle ofc. So if you want to do it, add these time points:
You can use 1/4 beat snap divisor to add easily. Also I used 60%, whistles will be heard better.




After adding all:
01:20:454 (1) - Whistle (but only on this note)
01:21:689 (1) - Whistle on slider (not on hit notes)
01:23:101 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:24:513 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:26:101 (1) - Whistle but only on this note
01:27:336 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:28:748 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:31:042 (3) - Whistle (remove clap)
01:31:748 (1) - Whistle but only on this note
01:32:983 (2) - Whistle on slider
01:34:395 (3) - Whistle on slider
01:35:807 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:37:395 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:38:631 (2) - Whistle on slider
01:40:042 (3) - Whistle on slider

You can do the same trick for the first kiai time, but dunno it's up to you.

00:57:865 - Add one timing section here with kiai mode. And end it here 00:57:954 - Because that part has an effect like BAM and after that song goes normally. That will make a good affect.

About spacing;
You used 0,8x distance but when I check all, some of them are placed with 0,9 and some of them 1,0. You can do this with Hard or Insane diffs, but we don't prefer this kind of spacing on Easy and Normals. (Well, you can do a little bit tricky on Normals maybe, but definitely not on Easy)
I am suggesting you to use 0,9x or 1,0x distance. To change it, press Alt and while pressing change it from top-right.

If you want to see which notes are too far or not, just click on an object and look top-right. If you will use 0,8x, this must be about 0,80-0,90x
Hope you understood :D

[Normal]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50?
Same thing about spacing goes here too. Use 1,0x distance spacing~
You can use that trick I talked about before (whistles on kiai :D). If you don't know how to make it, I can help you with timing sections. I am following your map~
00:04:042 (3) - stack it properly
00:15:159 (4,5,6,7) - This part is too confusing for a Normal diff. Make it a bit easier.
00:20:807 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Same thing
00:26:454 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:630 (1,2,3,4) - You used these four so many times. Why don't you use a repeat-slider? You can see so many repeat sliders in Normal diffs, it's like a solution for things like these.
00:33:865 (2,4,6) - Add same timing sections in Easy diff, remember this one:
00:33:865 - This part has to get louder. So I am suggesting you to add these:
00:57:865 - Add that kiai time here too.
01:11:983 (3) - Move this to somewhere else
01:12:689 (4,5) - Make a slider with these two
Those longs sliders in the end: You can try different kind of shapes for sliders. Using same kind of slider doesn't look good dear.

[Hard]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50?
Use soft whistle time to time, its like you dont have any hitsound except finish-sound.
You can add that kiai time I suggested here too.

There is nothing wrong with spacing or sliders in my opinion. But IT NEEDS HITSOUNDS. Really, try to use Normal-hitsounds too, whistles, all kind of them. You made a nice rhythm in Hard, but its nothing without hitsounds. Try on them more~~

[Insane]
Everything I said in Hard diff goes for this diff too. It needs hitsounds, whistles too much.
You can add that short kiai time I suggested in this diff too.
01:10:572 (5,6,7) - This pattern looks ugly, try something different

[Song Folder]
There are 2 .osb files, delete one please.

Okay that's all, sorry for my shitty mood. All I can say that your map needs hitsounds so much. Star'd, good luck~
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

UnderminE wrote:

Okay that's all, sorry for my shitty mood. All I can say that your map needs hitsounds so much. Star'd, good luck~
Thank you for modding and star. I'll try adding some whistles.
Tenshichan
M4M From my queue~

[General]
  1. Delete Unneeded osb file from your song folder (there are 2 right now)
  2. Your Kiai time must be the same in every diff
  3. Give every diff a Lead-in of at least 2 seconds


[Easy]

  1. 01:44:258 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 01:45:819 (1) - ^
  3. 01:47:206 (1) - ^
  4. 00:02:630 (2,3) - Make it a slider?
  5. 00:05:983 (1,2,3) - How they are placed under the slider is pretty difficult for the easiest diff, I would suggest to try something else there
  6. 00:16:924 (2) - End this slider at 00:17:630
  7. 00:39:159 - Probably make a short slider until 00:39:512 and delete (1)?
  8. 00:47:630 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This may be also unfriendly for beginners, perhaps change it a bit, and I don't think there is a need for so many NC
  9. 00:47:983 (2) - Add finish sound
  10. 01:02:454 (3) - Move it to the same height as (2)
  11. 01:02:807 (4) - Move it to the same height as (1)
  12. 01:07:748 (1,2) - Try this? If you change, don't forget to add finish sound on the slider ends
  13. 01:12:689 (5,6) - Better make them a slider because of the sudden spacing change
  14. 01:21:336 (2) - Might not be suitable for an easy diff
  15. 01:26:983 (2) - ^


[Normal]

  1. 01:44:258 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 00:29:630 (1,2,3,4) - Move it a bit away from the slider so it isn't under it, doesn't look so nice
  3. 00:33:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels somehow a bit wrong. Probably make (2) and (3) into a slider and (4) and (5) too
  4. 00:43:748 (6) - Don't make it overlap the next slider
  5. 00:47:630 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty difficult for normal I guess, maybe make at least one of those combos a repeating slider
  6. 01:08:454 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:09:159 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:807 (2) - Add finish sound
  9. 01:17:630 (1) - Too short spinner for a normal diff
  10. 01:19:042 (1,1,1,1,1) - I think this new combo spam is not needed
  11. 01:40:042 (1) - Remove clap and whistle and add finish sound
  12. 01:42:689 (3) - Move it that it isn't on the edge of the slider


[Hard]

  1. 01:43:039 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 01:44:258 (1) - ^
  3. 01:44:779 (2) - ^
  4. 01:45:125 (3) - ^
  5. 00:00:865 (1,1,1) - No need for new combos here
  6. 00:10:571 (3) - Make it parallel to (1) from the same combo
  7. 00:11:277 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You seem to like this, but I don't know if so much new combos are necessary ^^
  8. 00:20:101 (4) - Better move it on top of (5)
  9. 00:21:865 (2,3) - You should try to make a proper spacing here, because it looks weird
  10. 00:43:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it is better to not stack them
  11. 00:44:277 - Perhaps add a slider here and let it end where (7) is now, and delete (6)
  12. 00:49:218 (1) - Better move it on top of (2)
  13. 01:06:248 (8) - Probably delete it as I think it doesn't follow the rhythm quite well
  14. 01:12:512 (2,3) - This gap is imo a bit far for a hard
  15. 01:22:042 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice, but also a bit confusing pattern, some of the patterns after it are also very confusing ... Probably alternate a bit to make them more readable
  16. 01:39:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't stack
  17. 01:40:571 (6) - Make the curve on the other side so it doesn't overlap with the next pattern
  18. 01:45:469 (1,2) - I think this notes don't fit very well


[Sakusaki]

  1. HP Drain -1? It's too high right now
  2. 00:05:983 (2) - I think it is hard to read that the stream goes in circles here (more hard if players use a skin without transparent 300s and)
  3. 00:34:571 (1,3) - CTRL + G
  4. 00:35:101 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:39:159 (9) - NC
  6. 01:02:983 (4) - Maybe give it a better spacing
  7. 01:10:924 (6) - Delete note and let slider end here
  8. 01:25:042 (2) - As in 00:05:983
  9. 01:49:978 (1,1,1) - Too close to the spinner, shouldn't be a triplet here


Awesome song! Sakusaki is very good, with all the cool star patterns. Good luck to get it ranked! :D
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Tenshichan wrote:

M4M From my queue~
Thanks for mod~
HellDawn
Easy

00:01:395- kiai should start here
00:05:983- dont stack with previous slider
00:39:336- hard to catch for beginner
00:52:218- Finish
00:57:865- kiai should start here
01:20:454- ^

Normal

Kiai's are same > easy diff
00:45:865- RNC
00:49:042- far from previous combos so hard to catch
01:10:218 (1,2) looks bad because touching hp bar maybe 2 grid down ?
01:21:689- finish
01:23:101- ^
01:27:336- ^
01:28:748- ^
01:30:159- ^

Hard

Check spacing.

Insane

Looks great
Star Stream
Timing check from my queue~
1. Offset: 1,430ms BPM: 170.00
Only 1 red line~
Good luck then~
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

HellDawn wrote:

Thanks for mod~

Star Stream wrote:

Thanks for the timing check! Helped a lot...
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