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ZLOdeuka-
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Aspect_old
as always great :) star.

ps~ love this song :lol:
Faust
In general: I'm not really too sure if using 1/6 for this is best at all. Spacing is more of less consistent throughout the entire map for the areas where you specifically put them close and apart for instance. Not bad, but maybe you could arrange the notes and sliders to align to the grids better in my opinion. It ends a little abruptly at 02:29 as well. Maybe you could map a little more of it. It feels very incomplete.

Hard:
- 01:13:299 - I suggest this.
-01:16:708 - This would be much better.
- 01:19:369 - Remove this slider, add a note.
- 01:30:740 - (2) & (3) are oddly placed.
- 01:36:063 - Here is what I suggest.
- 01:37:998 - You could shift the sliders to have the flow look like this.
For the following slider, I suggest this.
Place and arrange the next one or few intuitively like this perhaps. These are suggestions, but it would follow suit if you made the changes I wrote about previously. As follows:
- 02:15:982 - (2 - 5) Too close to each other, space them more.
IceBeam
IRC Modding.
_llkey_18
hii lets go ^^ feel free for ignore it :P

General add prewiev point
offset = 1.007 dont forgot to resnap all notes

Easy fine
sliders its hard to read
Hard
01:27:595 - add note there?
01:29:530 - ^
many more maybe its just your style ^^
anyways its cool diff

Star ^_^ ( Cool song)
batman
star. :)
Leorda
Privet!

[General]
1) Delete 4 OSB and RAR file, since that is useless
2) Your bg (2092052_mikki_i_mini2.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 700x525)
3) Resnap the green line

[Easy]
All is unsnapped!

00:34:692 (4) - Too short for easy diff

00:38:482 (2) - Add 1 repeating slider?
00:42:353 (1) - Too short for easy diff
00:50:337 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:00:014 (4) - Too short for easy diff
01:30:498 (7) - New combo, very long for easy diff
01:48:401 (7) - ^
02:06:305 (1) - Too short for easy diff
02:07:595 (3) - ^
02:09:208 (6) - ^
02:12:595 (5) - New combo, very long for easy diff


[SadKangaroo's Minnie's]
All is unsnapped too!

[Hard]
*) All is unsnapped too!
*) Disable the "Display epiepsy warning"
*) Remove the useless finish hitsound

00:21:305 (8) - New combo?
00:28:805 (11) - New combo, it's too long


Great Song
STAR

BUT!!! If you already fix mod at above, please post your mod request again in my mod queue
IceBeam

Leorda wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Minnie's]
All is unsnapped too!
ZLOdeuka can do it by herself I bet.
Leorda

SadKangaroo wrote:

Leorda wrote:

[SadKangaroo's Minnie's]
All is unsnapped too!
I don't need to use DS,if my own spacing is right and readable.
I mean, the object is unsnapped at timing, not DS.
EvianBubble
Hi O_o

General
Make sure all notes are snapped
Fix your inherited timing sections, they are no longer snapped to the beats

Easy
Uh ... why are you using 1/6 beat divisor? O_O
00:35:355 (5, 6) - Spacing, move one grid (lv 2) right
00:46:000 (1) - I suggest moving this one beat back to the tall white tick, it also gives more time before the next note
00:50:355 (1 - 3) - This pattern doesn't feel right to me, I suggest making (1) repeat, moving (2) to 00:51:323 (the tall white tick), and moving (3) closer to fix spacing
01:01:848 (1) - See above comment about spinners
01:03:904 - I don't think you need Kiai time here ... for that short amount of time. Remove it
01:10:678 (1) - 01:17:936 - I also suggest giving more time between spinner and note, but up to you I suppose
01:42:613 (1) - Don't make this overlap with (1) of the previous combo, just doesn't look good
01:45:517 (end of 3, 4, 5) - Spacing is different here. Make it consistent
02:06:807 (end of 1, 2) - Spacing here = huh? Move rest of combo 4 grids (lv 2) right. Also for (2) - I don't suggest put notes on easy on anything less than 1/2 beat, but that's just me
02:20:355 until end - Again with the spinner / beat suggestions

SadKangaroo's Minnie
I'm not a general fan of silent beats ... just my personal opinion, though :S
You should resnap all your notes
01:08:748 (3) - Not a fan of slider overlaps, maybe move this to the left?
01:11:50 - Again, I don't think you need Kiai here
01:20:361 (1 - 3) - This pattern is hard to read IMO, but your choice to change or not

Hard
I suggest using grid lv 3 for harder difficulties. All spacing comments are assuming you are using this grid level
Fix the green lines (timing sections), they aren't on the beats
00:01:732 (1) - Move one grid left
00:06:087 (2) - Move one grid right (along with next combo, etc.)
00:09:232 (2) - Same as above
00:17:458 (1 - 3) - Move one up and one right
00:18:910 (4, 5) - Assuming you moved the above, move one up and two right
00:20:119 (6, 7) - Move one grid up
... Actually this is going to take a while. Just recheck your spacing using grid lv 3, and I'll only point out major spacing from now on, okays? :P
00:40:926 (7) - I don't think this needs to be 0.5x timing ... your choice though :S
00:53:990 (4) - New combo
01:18:426 - Start Kiai at 01:19:394 instead
01:19:394 (3) - Make this slider repeat?
01:21:813 - Add a note here?
01:30:039 (1 - 4) - These slider overlaps look really ugly. Try re - designing this
02:24:232 - Remove Kiai here?

Pretty nice mappings and stuff though. I especially like the use of hitsounds :P
Leorda
Recheck Time

[General]
1) You didn't delete the useless file in your beatmap, click File (on upper-left) and click Open Song Folder. And then, delete the useless file in below
  1. Vintaj - Mickey (ZLOdeuka).osb
  2. Vintaj - Mickey Mouse (ZLOdeuka).osb
  3. Vintaj - Micky (ZLOdeuka).osb
  4. Vintaj - Micky(ZLOdeuka).osb
  5. Vintazh - mikki.rar
  6. 459058b9d4fa3f3d569d498c076e1b1f.gif


2) The combo color 1&3 and 2&4 are same, please delete 2 or find another one
3) Delete the all finish hitsound on each diff, and replace with clap or whistle. Don't overuse the finish hitsound
4) The preview is not set on each diff, to set it, find the current time you want, click Timing and click Set the Current Position as Preview Point. I suggest you to set it in 01:18:426

[Easy]
You didn't change the issue about the slider

00:13:587 (1) - Make symetric?
00:34:636 (4) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:38:507 (2) - ^
00:42:377 (1) - ^
00:48:426 (1) - A bit too far from spinner. Very difficult for new player if this going on
00:50:361 (1) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:51:087 (2) - ^
00:51:813 (3) - ^
00:53:023 (2) - ^
00:57:861 (1) - ^
01:00:039 (4) - ^

01:28:103 (4) - New combo?
01:37:055 (2) - The slider is too short for easy diff
01:38:990 (2) - ^
02:07:619 (2) - Move forward to white tick
02:09:232 (5) - The slider is too short for easy diff
02:18:668 (1) - This spinner are too short, extend it
02:28:345 (1) - ^


[SadKangaroo's Minnie]
SadKangaroo, the object aren't snapped in timeline, to snap it, click Timing -> Resnap all notes -> Yes

[Hard]
Fine, but delete the unnesescary green timing section

Good luck!
Mizu_banned
nyah~ :3
loser101
Love the song :)
Easy

Can't find anything

Normal

00:42:619 (1,1,1,1) keep in one area.
01:50:361 why does it end here?

Hard

Great
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, I won't star the map.

Easy:
Use grid lvl 3.
00:50:361 (1,2) - I think this is too hard for an Easy diff.
01:00:039 (4,1) - Ugly and avoidable overlap.
02:22:297 (1,1) - ^


Hard:
Work with grid lvl 3.
00:27:136 (7,8,9) - Inconsistent spacing that can be fixed with grid lvl 3...
00:30:039 (3,4,5) - ^
00:58:587 (2,3,4) - ^


SadKangaroo's Minnie:
Won't mod... Read the rules.

Hm... Pretty correct map. Fix those inconsistent spacing and I will star.
Tatsuo
Alright, let's get this modding~

[Overall]
Due to offset changes, there are mis-aligned inherited timing sections.
There is no preview point set. Set one.
Consider setting the epilepsy warning to on.

[Easy]
02:29:555 - End Kiai time here.

[SadKangaroo's Minnie]
Why is this shorter than [Easy]? You NEED to make this the same length SK.

[Hard]
Pretty good.

[wicked level]
This is fine.
Not liking how difficulties don't end at same times though.

*star*
IceBeam
Thanks for modding.

Due to new BG:

Combo1 : 220,180,60
Combo2 : 255,81,194
Combo3 : 211,248,67
Combo4 : 208,153,249
Curisu
[General]
Preview Point
Resnap All notes

[EZ]
01:09:474 - Add a spinner?
02:12:619 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard for easy
02:28:345 (1) - end it at 02:29:071

[Sadkangaroo]
00:13:587 (1,2,3) - Too hard jump for normal
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

[color=#FF4000]Set a Preview Point in all difficulties... (Click on the "Timing" tab at the top, and "Set Current Position as Preview Point")
Include Disney into tags?
One of you BG's is 700x525...edit this to either 800x600 or 1024x768
Your Timing Section Lines don't appear to be exactly on ticks. Fix this.
Delete the osb.file and fully submit.
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[Easy]
HP Drain Rate: +1
Overall Difficulty: +1
00:45:039 (x) - add a note here
00:45:523 (x) - ^ same thing
00:52:781 (1) - make this note a slider that extend to 00:53:265 (removing the 2)
02:17:942 (x) - add a note here
02:18:426 (x) - ^ same thing
Make sure to resnap.

[Sadkangaroo's Minnie]
Seems fine...but why is it shorter than easy? Consider making it longer.

[Hard]
Use 1/4 instead of 1/6 and remap some of the notes. Every other difficulty is in 1/4 so...yea...fix it!
^ Once doing the above, I'll remod it.

[wicked level]
^ Capitalize the W & L
Spacing. (cept for jumps)
01:00:765 (x) - add a note here
01:01:006 (x) - ^ same thing
01:01:248 (x) - ^
01:55:84 - 1:58:345 - I reccommend deleting these notes and inserting a break here.
02:17:942 (x) - add a note here
02:18:426 (x) - ^ same thing


Overall...OMG that head of Mickey scared the crap out me at first! LOL ... Fix up you hard, then contact me to mod it alright!?

No Star for now...until Hard is fixed up and checked!
IceBeam

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

[Sadkangaroo's Minnie]
Seems fine...but why is it shorter than easy? Consider making it longer.
kk

Download: Vintaj - Mickey Mouse (ZLOdeuka) [SadKangaroo's Minnie].osu
Vass_Bass
Привет
В общем неплохая карта
Меня смущает эта рожица микки мауса, смотрится мне кажется лишней, сделай лучше его фигурку как показатель комбо, или если уж она тебе так нравится то меня ее положение на каждой сложности

Easy
01:44:071 (2) - сдвинь влево
02:07:619 (2,3) - мне кажется сложно для новичка
02:26:168 (1) - сделай симметричнее

Hard
Вообще не ровное какое-то расстояние между объектами,где-то дальше,где-то ближе,смотрится странно,мне кажется надо выровнять немного
00:17:458 (1) - 1 вверх
00:28:103 (8,9,10) - при таком спейсинге они далековаты от слайдера
00:30:039 (3,4) - между ними то же самое что и там ^
00:43:103 (2) - смотрится оторвано, перемести куда-нибудь так, что бы была связь между 1 и 3

Wicked level
00:23:748 (2) - выровняй так, чтобы 1,2 и 3 были в один ряд
01:17:700 (7,8,9) - может на эти 3 кнопки звуки normal сделать?
01:43:829 (4) - ближе к (3)
02:36:571 (4) - чуть ниже и левее
02:42:861 (8) - по спейсингу и на одну вверх
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