Lunatica - Words Unleashed

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Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 августа 2010 г. at 21:57:54

Artist: Lunatica
Title: Words Unleashed
Tags: Roddie sadkangaroo claymore teresa clare priscilla laki raki yoma abyssal irene awakening
BPM: 170
Filesize: 21566kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Armageddon (5 stars, 995 notes)
  2. Meteor (5 stars, 504 notes)
  3. Rain (1,9 stars, 57 notes)
  4. Roddie's Storm (3,03 stars, 164 notes)
  5. SK's Catastrophe (4,54 stars, 216 notes)


Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed
Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Armageddon PENDING APPROVAL

Thanks Roddie and SadKangaroo for guest difficulties



Note: Video added for Claymore fans, Please don't download video, be cause it contain spoilers from anime. AMV was taken from You Tube

Enjoy! :D
dkun
Armageddon (5 stars, 994 notes)
01:59:757 (1) - Remove this slider? I feel that it's unnecessary.
02:36:992 - Add kiai time here to 02:51:198?
03:57:816 - Spacing on this entire section, what the hell?

Meteor (5 stars, 503 notes)
00:28:522 - Spacing?
00:39:816 - ^
01:17:934 - ^

Rain (1,9 stars, 57 notes)
Nothing too major here.

Side notes
This is one insane map, looking forward to seeing this get ranked.
Take a ★ !~
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~

[Overall]
Wtf? Delete desktop.ini from your songs folder and full submit! <- I lol'd at this xD
Seriously, what's up with the different ending points in your beatmap? Please map your difficulties full length just like how Armageddon is. Although four minutes is rather long.
I'm not a big fan of how your starting points differ from [Rain]
Armageddon seems cramped. Might want to space it out a bit.

[Rain]
This beatmap is WAY too short compared to your other difficulties. You definitely need to map way more than this.

[Meteor]
Might want to raise circle size by one?
01:04:345 - You broke the flow here. I hated it. Why not just keep continuing what you are doing?

[Armageddon]
For such a long difficulty, there are no breaks. Four minutes of straight playing? What is this? I don't even.
There's nothing wrong with this really.

I wouldn't feel right starring this. There's just things that throw this otherwise good beatmap off.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Yes
No

Armageddon (5 stars, 994 notes)
01:59:757 (1) - Remove this slider? I feel that it's unnecessary.
02:36:992 - Add kiai time here to 02:51:198?
03:57:816 - Spacing on this entire section, what the hell?
This difficulty is gonna be approved, not ranked. Final part is part of jumps. It's okey.

Meteor (5 stars, 503 notes)
00:28:522 - Spacing?
00:39:816 - ^
01:17:934 - ^

Jumps.



Thanks you very much.

[Rain]
This beatmap is WAY too short compared to your other difficulties. You definitely need to map way more than this.
No. 1 minute is rankable stuff.

[Meteor]
Might want to raise circle size by one?
01:04:345 - You broke the flow here. I hated it. Why not just keep continuing what you are doing?

[Armageddon]
For such a long difficulty, there are no breaks. Four minutes of straight playing? What is this? I don't even.
There's nothing wrong with this really.
PENDING FOR APPROVAL (Only this difficulty). READ DESCRIPTION OF THIS MAP :evil:
Roddie
Hi :3

Overall, I would strongly suggest on Meteor to increase circle size and decrease Over-all Difficulty because Meteor plays a lot like Armageddon but shorter. ._.

I'll make you that Normal I promised.

Star for now!
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Fixed Hyb :3 Thanks ^_~
Bikko
poof!
Roddie
Finished as promised~

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb's Normal].osu

Rename my difficulty as you wish but keep my name in there. :P

Hope you like it. 8-)
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Hybrid's difficulty added :)
Thanks hyb ^_~
Krisom
Modding as requested on queue

Nice song! Reminds me of sonata artica

[Rain]
Uhhh, map it fully? AT least up to the second Kiai time! Any song/diff under 1 minute long is unrankeable (Btw, it's 45 secs of gameplay) so you'll have to make this one longer
01:13:610 - The Kiai Time should always be on a white tick. Move this to 01:13:698.
Nice!

[hybs's]
BREAKS INSIDE A KIAI TIME?!?!?!FFFFFFFFF map those please, it's just plain ugly u.u
...In fact, all your breaks could be removed, I mean, they are so short thatthey doesn't help the player recover during play sections.
There's nothing in terms of gameplay I can point out here, good job.

[Meteor]
01:13:610 - The Kiai Time should always be on a white tick. Move this to 01:13:698.
You lack a Kiai time at 02:03:110 - , The music it's the same than in 01:13:698 - So both places should have a Kiai.
00:50:051 (3) - You can't tell that this is a slider. It's buried by the hitsplash of 00:49:257 (1).
02:14:404 (1) - Why is the repeat silenced? It's like the only slider that does this. Either remove the silence or silence other sliders that follow this note on this diff.
Ok, I think the jumps are REALLY out of place in this diff, other than that (and the avobe mentioned) it's great.

[Armagedon]
Overmapped imo. anyways, I can't play like this yet so I cant mod it. Look out, the Kiai times are also wrong here.



I'd add whistles at the soft part of the song (The intro). Other than that, ncie song. I see a lot of potential (buried by random jumps and different diff lenghts) and goot hitsounding, so I'll star
Roddie

Krisom wrote:

Modding as requested on queue

[hybs's]
BREAKS INSIDE A KIAI TIME?!?!?!FFFFFFFFF map those please, it's just plain ugly u.u
...In fact, all your breaks could be removed, I mean, they are so short thatthey doesn't help the player recover during play sections. ^fixed.
There's nothing in terms of gameplay I can point out here, good job. Thanks. 8-)
Thanks for the mod, Krisom. :P

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb'Storm].osu
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
thanks Krisom.

All fixed
Mianki
Rain:

Felt too short for me. Make it as long as Meteor? (but don't map the intro, if you do)
00:52:522 (3) One grid right
01:29:228 (1) Move the upper part of the slider a bit to the left, so it looks symmetrical

hyb's Storm:

01:05:581 (1.2.1) (1) One grid up. Then (2) and next (1) one grid up and right
01:27:463 (1.2.3.4.5.6) Distance snap these (2 and 6 were a bit off)
01:57:639 (4) One grid left and down
02:05:581 (2) One grid right and down?
02:32:051 (2) One grid down

Meteor:

Reduce HP Drain 1 or 2 ticks?
00:08:757 (1) One grid down?
00:52:169 (3) One grid down? (it makes sense then if there's every other a bit up and down)
01:03:816 (1.2.3.4.5.6) Distance snap (but skip this if you did put those little jumps there on purpose)
01:57:463 (3.4.5) Distance snap

Armageddon:

00:01:698 (1.2.3.4) Distance snap
00:06:639 (1.2.3) ^
00:14:582 (2.3) ^
00:45:110 (1.2) ^
00:46:345 (4.5.6) ^
01:32:934 (5) One grid up?
01:49:169 (2.3.4) Distance snap
02:13:345 (3.4.5) ^ (4 is too close)
02:53:228 (5) Distance snap
03:11:051 (2) ^
03:12:816 (5) ^
03:23:581 (2) ^
03:57:816 Warning sign before these jumps? :D (Not necessary)

Epic map, star~
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Thanks for modding
Roddie

Mianki wrote:

hyb's Storm:

01:05:581 (1.2.1) (1) One grid up. Then (2) and next (1) one grid up and right
01:27:463 (1.2.3.4.5.6) Distance snap these (2 and 6 were a bit off)
01:57:639 (4) One grid left and down
02:05:581 (2) One grid right and down?
02:32:051 (2) One grid down

^All fixed.
Thanks for the mod, Mianki. :D

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb's Storm].osu
Vass_Bass
Привет~

Хорошая песня. понравилась
Не хочешь другие цвета сделать? а то не очень смотрится,особенно зеленый в глаз бьет
По поводу Rain..я считаю что это не очень хорошая сложность, думаю надо либо другую сделать либо совсем убрать,как-то и ни туда, и ни сюда

hyb's Storm
01:15:463 (3) - спейсинг
02:16:169 (3) - ^

Meteor
забавная сложность
00:11:758 (2) - 1 вверх
00:12:640 (2) - 1 вправо
00:11:758 (2), 00:13:170 (4) и т.п.- как-то некрасиво смотрится когда так косовато идет, может сровнять все?
01:18:286 (2) - не по спейсингу
01:18:992 (4) - ^
02:11:581 (1) - сделай посимметричнее

Armageddon
00:09:464 (1) - сделай поближе к двойке
01:58:875 (2,3) - 1 вниз
02:11:846 (1,2,3) и 02:12:287 (1,2,3) - как-то по времени не попадают
02:16:522 (2) - 1 вверх и влево и (4) под двойку туда же
02:39:992 (1) - начиная с этого момента... как-то слишком много тройных, может из заменить короткими слайдерами?
03:05:228 (4,5,6) - спейсинг
03:57:816 (х) - жестокий момент
стар
Roddie

Vass_Bass wrote:

Привет~

hyb's Storm
01:15:463 (3) - спейсинг
02:16:169 (3) - ^
I'm sorry. I don't understand Russian. :(

But from what Louis told me, it's a spacing problem I have to fix.

Thanks for the mod, Vass. :D

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [hyb's Storm].osu
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Спасибо :: )

All fixed.
IceBeam
IRC Modding.

And here comes the worst difficulty osu! ever seen.Enjoy.

Download: Lunatica - Words Unleashed (Louis Cyphre) [Kangaroos In Disaster].osu
IceBeam
Edit:
I missed "Edit" button for the post above.

So,sorry for doublepost.
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