Scorpions - Raised On Rock

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Topic Starter
balvag
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Κυριακή, 28 Νοεμβρίου 2010 at 4:34:31 πμ

Artist: Scorpions
Title: Raised On Rock
Tags: DiamondCrash
BPM: 125
Filesize: 6222kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. DC's Hard (4,39 stars, 247 notes)
  2. Easy (2,65 stars, 137 notes)
  3. Insane (4,92 stars, 322 notes)
  4. Normal (3,96 stars, 214 notes)


Download: Scorpions - Raised On Rock
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st beatmap,I hope you enjoy it!

Mods, please check and...thanks in advance!

*DiamondCrash's Diff added!
*Storyboard edit (added a pulse)
choche
I'm not a mod, but I'll try to help :)

Easy: I see it perfect ;)

Hard: The beats are good, but I found some mistakes:

-00:10:858 (4) It's too close to the previous
-00:10:978 (5) "
-00:29:758 (6) "
-00:40:378 (7) "
-00:40:498 (8) "
-00:43:498 (4) "
-00:43:618 (5) "
-01:04:198 (4) It's too far to the previous
-01:07:618 (3) "
-01:08:038 (4) "

Open AImod,I think there are more Spacing mistakes.

Ask the mods. I think this beatmap will be ranked ;)
DiamondCrash
General;

The timing is wrong. Get a good timer to have a look.
You need an easy.
Remember to add a preview point in the timing menu.


Easy;

Not an easy; this is a normal. Rename appropriately.
01:03:598 (3) - New combo.
01:13:198 (6) - This overlap is unrankable.
02:18:478 (6) - This overlap is unrankable.


Hard;

This is an insane. Rename appropriately.
This should not have to use 1/8s. Use 1/4 for ALL notes.
The overuse of kiai fountains is unrankable.

01:14:398 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is unreadable.
02:19:678 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Message me when you have that done and I'll recheck.
Derekku
Offset was about 35ms late, so 9,563 should work much better. :P Remember to set the snapping divisor to 1/4 and resnap all beats on both diffs.

For the beginning of Hard, I think that a beat every 1/2 starting at 00:07:883 would work better than random 1/4th / 1/8th snapped beats. ;)

[Hard] 01:14:363 (2,3,4,5,6) - haha I love this but I think the overlapping is a bit hard-to-read or unrankable. XP

Not bad at all for your first map, and I'd actually enjoy modding this once you have everything set and in Pending :P
Topic Starter
balvag
Edit 1

Done everything DiamondCrash said and timing fixxed, thanks to Derekku Chan. :D
Also added Easy difficulty.Awaiting orders! :P
Derekku
If you're content with your difficulties and not planning on adding anything else, then go ahead and move it to Pending; especially since most people won't serious-mod until it's out of WIP. :V
Topic Starter
balvag

Derekku Chan wrote:

If you're content with your difficulties and not planning on adding anything else, then go ahead and move it to Pending; especially since most people won't serious-mod until it's out of WIP. :V
Added an Easy one already and waiting for further modding :D
DiamondCrash
Easy;

00:59:483 (2) - New combo.
01:03:083 (2) - Delete?
02:04:763 (2) - New combo.
02:08:363 (2) - Delete?

Download: Scorpions - Raised On Rock (balvag) [DCiNiS].osu
Topic Starter
balvag
Done!

Also added your difficulty Diamond, really thanks for making a diff on my map! :D
KRZY
sorry, i've become a bit lazy over the past few days orz

will mod in the weekend. star for now!
KRZY
[Easy]
00:28:763 (4) - spacing, try not to have any jumps on this difficulty.
01:34:043 (4) - ^
00:55:643 (5) - new combo
01:03:323 (2) - ^
01:05:483 (5) - ^
02:00:923 (5) - ^
02:08:603 (2) - ^
02:10:763 (6) - ^
01:01:883 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:163 (1) - ^
02:07:163 (1) - ^
02:12:443 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:02:603 (3) - add clap at the end
02:07:883 (3) - ^
01:09:083 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 1 grid down
02:14:363 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - move 1 grid up
02:47:003 (6) - new combo

[DCiNiS]
01:37:163 (5,6,7) - move 1 grid right
01:44:843 (5,6,7) - ^
01:37:883 (8) - move 1 grid down
01:45:563 (8) - ^
01:49:403 (7) - ^
01:52:523 (5,6) - move 1 grid left
02:00:203 (5,6) - move 1 grid right

[Insane]
01:08:363 (5,6) - move 1 grid right


Pretty good insane for a first map. Good luck!
DiamondCrash
I didn't do what he said, but I did what I thought he was trying to get me to do, if you know what I mean

Download: Scorpions - Raised On Rock (balvag) [DCiNiS].osu
Topic Starter
balvag
Done,
thank you for modding DJ KRZY and for the star :D
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Delete the osb file and Full Submit next time.

~Easy~
No problems here~

~Normal~
No problems here~

~DCiNiS~
No problems here~

~Insane~
01:03:083 (5) - Fix Spacing.
02:08:363 (5) - ^

Meh, almost anything, don't kudosu this xDD
Cool map and song, though, try to not to copypaste the first half of the map and make it the second half of it for your next songs, sometimes it doesn't work that well. Anyways, good luck with this, pretty nice for a first map. *star*
IceBeam
Hello.

[Easy]
00:31:643 (2) - You may end it at 00:32:123 and add a circle to 00:32:363.
00:41:243 - Add a note here.
00:41:723 (7) - Move to 00:41:963.
00:44:363 - Add a note.
00:44:603 (6) - Move to 00:44:843.
01:45:803 - Add a note.
01:46:043 (6) - Move to 01:46:283.
01:49:643 - Add a note.
01:49:883 (5) - Move to 01:50:123.
01:58:763 (4) - Why it starts so early? 01:59:243 or at least 01:59:003.And don't forget to fill the space before it.

[Normal]
00:31:643 (3) - End at 00:32:123 and add a circle at 00:32:363.
00:36:203 (4) - New combo.
00:36:203 (4,5,6) - Allign to previous moment,please.
00:59:483 - Why don't you add a circle here?
01:36:923 - End it at 01:37:403 and add a circle at 01:37:643.
02:04:763 - Add a circle?
02:37:163 (5) - New combo.

[DCiNiS]
Yep,iNiS style.It's fine,but...colours are different with the same BG.I don't think it's acceptable.

[Insane]
Seems fine.

Good luck,star~
Topic Starter
balvag
Done almost everything.
Thanks Beuchi-chan and SadKangaroo for modding. :D

PS. Didn't do everything SadKangaroo said,sorry dude but in some of those I didn't like how it sounded,but did most of them ;)
Armin
[Easy]

00:31:643 (2) - Clap at the end
00:56:123 (1,1,1) - Remove these new combo? Also, finish-flood.
01:09:563 (1,3) - "Incomplete" sliders. Move the last waypoint in the direction of the slider.
01:39:563 (1) - Finish or clap at the start
01:46:763 (7) - Clap
01:50:603 (7) - Clap at the start
02:01:403 (1,1,1) - Remove these new combo? Also, finish-flood.
02:06:203 (2) - Incomplete slider
02:14:843 (1) - As above

[Normal]

00:31:643 (3) - Clap at the end
01:36:923 (3) - As above
02:48:923 (1) - Make this spinner 1/1 longer.

[DCiNiS]

Oh gawd. No problems found.

[Insane]

Lovely, considering this is your first map. Very funny to play, my favourite difficulty.

Starred. ^^
Topic Starter
balvag
Done!
Thanks for modding Armin :D
banvi
Hello :3

mod
Easy
01:48:923 (3) 1 grid down?(grid lv3)
Normal
01:51:563 (1,2) 1 grid left?
01:54:683 (1) 1 grid right?
01:59:243 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) 1 grid up?
DCiNiS
00:40:283 (8) 1 grid down?
00:53:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Frip Vertically?(just my suggestion)01:08:363 (3) 1 grid down and 1 grid left?
02:05:963 (3) 1 grid down and 1 grid right?
02:13:643 (3) 1 grid down and 1 grid left?
02:48:923 (1) finish 1 next white line?(02:51:323) Please look other diff.
Insane
00:36:923 (2) 1 grid down?
01:03:563 (1) 1 grid left?
02:08:843 (1) 1 grid right?
02:48:203 (5) 1 grid left?

Nice map~ Especially , Rhythm is very good.
star & gl ;)
Topic Starter
balvag
Done!
Thanks for modding banvi ;)
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