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Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 14 agosto 2009 at 16.17.58

Artist: Oranges and Lemons
Title: Raspberry Heaven
Source: Azumanga Daioh OST
BPM: 85
Filesize: 4611kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,63 stars, 195 notes)
  2. Normal (3,3 stars, 143 notes)
  3. osuplayer111's Insane (4,74 stars, 215 notes)
  4. Yumiko's Hardish (4,36 stars, 179 notes)


Download: Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven
Download: Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven (no video)
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Anime again xD
I reserved this one for sooo much time but now i decided to make it for good :D
Hard completed <3

enjoy~

EDIT: some little fixes here and there xD
Andrea
I love this map. Anyway, i make an insane. I hope you accept it ^_^
Zodiark1020
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Yumiko
Here's my difficulty ^^ I hope you like it ^^

Download: Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven (Card N'FoRcE) [Yumiko's Hardish].osu
Jarby
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Added Yumiko's and osuplayer111's ^^
Thanks for making them ^^

JarJarJacob wrote:

Oh, you.
Oh You D:
Ok, it was from almost two months ago, but there are several post before this one in which i claimed this one D:
Lokamp
Modding time!

Normal
[00:09:67] (4) whistle here
[00:40:37] (5) try to set a finish here...
[00:42:61] (4, 5) ... and in the end of these two sliders!
[00:52:37] (3, 4, 5) set normal finish sounds for this three beats (or something else) instead of soft ones

Yumiko's Hardish (it's good to see how much osu! Italian community usually helps each other!)
[General] the 1st part of the song (until 00:53:00) hasn't enough whistles; try to add some of them: this song is MADE for it!
[00:43:90] (3) finish here
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) set normal whistles here instead of soft ones!
[01:02:43] (3) clap here
[01:17:43] (7) make this slider MORE longer (in spacing, not in timing!)

Hard
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) as seen on normal, set normal sounds instead of soft ones here

osuplayer11's Insane
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) you already know the chorus: normal sounds here instead of soft ones!

...and that's all for now... Star'd!
Topic Starter
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Lokamp wrote:

Modding time!

Normal
[00:09:67] (4) whistle here Intentional (i know it seems weird xD)
[00:40:37] (5) try to set a finish here...
[00:42:61] (4, 5) ... and in the end of these two sliders! Uhm i don't like them a lot because those parts are slow...
[00:52:37] (3, 4, 5) set normal finish sounds for this three beats (or something else) instead of soft ones OOOPS, i forgot them xD (but why normal? D:)

Yumiko's Hardish (it's good to see how much osu! Italian community usually helps each other!)
[General] the 1st part of the song (until 00:53:00) hasn't enough whistles; try to add some of them: this song is MADE for it!
[00:43:90] (3) finish here
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) set normal whistles here instead of soft ones!
[01:02:43] (3) clap here
[01:17:43] (7) make this slider MORE longer (in spacing, not in timing!)
I'm gonna let Yumiko handle this ^^

Hard
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) as seen on normal, set normal sounds instead of soft ones here (but why? I love soft finishes D:)

osuplayer11's Insane
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) you already know the chorus: normal sounds here instead of soft ones! T_T

...and that's all for now... Star'd!
Thanks for your modding ^^
Yumiko

Lokamp wrote:

Yumiko's Hardish (it's good to see how much osu! Italian community usually helps each other!)
[General] the 1st part of the song (until 00:53:00) hasn't enough whistles; try to add some of them: this song is MADE for it! Done
[00:43:90] (3) finish here Done
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) set normal whistles here instead of soft ones! Done
[01:02:43] (3) clap here Done
[01:17:43] (7) make this slider MORE longer (in spacing, not in timing!) I think it's ok. To make it longer in spacing it becomes longer in timing too. I should remove the 0.5x section but i like it ç_ç
I forgot to star it :D

Download: Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven (Card N'FoRcE) [Yumiko's Hardish].osu
HarryOrunitia
Normal:
Nothing, as expected

Yumiko's Hardish:
Ok, claps really fit this difficulty but I don't like them on the reverse sliders, I'd take them off but it's just a suggestion.
00:25:02 (3) - Align this with 5 and 7
00:47:08 (5) - You could try to shape this one so that it has a curve like 00:46:02 (3)
00:55:19 (5) - I don't like the claps here D:
01:04:19 (4) - Move this one 1 square to the right with grid 3

Hard:
01:00:49 (3) - This slider sound weird. I think you can add 1 or 2 repeats or at least some hitsounds?

osuplayer111's Insane:
The parts where you lower the sound volume and then go back to normal volume feel too sudden (For example: 00:07:72 (3)). Also, Normal hitsounds are too loud for the verses (Example: 00:22:72 (1)), even though they fit the chorus imo.


Btw, the map is really nice and I love all the diffs. Starred :D
blissfulyoshi
Normal:
00:54:83 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 5

Hardish:
00:06:30 (3,4) - might want to make parallel to 1,2
00:25:71 (7,1) - make parallel to 5,6
00:29:77 (5) - make this have the same distance from 4 that 3 is
00:30:13 (6) - make the start the same distance from 3 that 4 is
00:37:18 (2) - make this have the same distance from 3 that 1 is
00:39:30 (5,6,7,8) - make the each side of this figure be of equal length (bacially the same as 00:29:77 (5) and 00:30:13 (6))
00:41:07 (1) - align with 8?
00:46:01 (3) - make this have the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:53:07 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
01:10:71 (1) - make a vertical reflection of 2
01:21:48 (7) - make the same distance from 6 as 4 is from 5
01:28:18 (10) - align with 7?

Hard:
00:07:71 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:13:71 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1
00:40:71 (1) and 00:41:42 (2) - make these the same distance from 4 that 00:39:30 (1, 3) are
00:53:07 (3) - make this have the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:49:18 (1) - align with 5?
00:53:07 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:59:77 (1) - make the same distance from 2 that 5 is

Insane:
00:20:07 (3,4) - make a vertical reflection of 2,1 respectively
00:21:13 (7) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is
00:37:18 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1
00:59:77 (6) - make the same distance from 5 that 4 is
01:26:60 (5) - make the same distance from 4 that 3 is

Nice beatmap. Star.
Topic Starter
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

Normal:
00:54:83 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 5 why? it's useless D:

Hard:
00:07:71 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is Fixed
00:13:71 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1 Useless
00:40:71 (1) and 00:41:42 (2) - make these the same distance from 4 that 00:39:30 (1, 3) are Fixed
00:53:07 (3) - make this have the same distance from 2 that 1 is Fixed
00:49:18 (1) - align with 5? No
00:53:07 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is Impossible to do without removing grid snap, so it's useless
00:59:77 (1) - make the same distance from 2 that 5 is Fixed

Insane:
00:20:07 (3,4) - make a vertical reflection of 2,1 respectively Useless
00:21:13 (7) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is Fixed
00:37:18 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1 Fixed
00:59:77 (6) - make the same distance from 5 that 4 is Fixed
01:26:60 (5) - make the same distance from 4 that 3 is

Nice beatmap. Star.
Yumiko will fix her difficulty by herself and will post it here
Yumiko
minyeob
[Normal]
44:954(1)-> Useless New Combo?

[Yumiko's Hardish]
1:15:66(3)-> This jump makes hard to hit 300 on the next circles :o

This map needs BAT modding.
Starred~!
Armin
Ma è perfetta, che cosa ti moddo XD
Stella :D
Topic Starter
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minyeob: Fixed both, thanks :D
mrtn
try offset 489

[normal]
no problems here

[yumiko's hardish]
00:13:18 (7) - new combo
00:15:66 - reinsert break
01:17:42 (7) - new combo

[hard]
01:31:54 (8) - new combo

[osuplayer's insane]
00:22:71 (1) - maybe lower the hitsound volume of this note? It overpowers the music too much imo
00:29:07 (2) - ^
00:30:13 (5 the endpoint) - ^
01:18:30 (2,3,4,5) - kinda confusing

good job as usual. starred
Topic Starter
Card N'FoRcE

mrtn wrote:

try offset 489

[normal]
no problems here

[yumiko's hardish]
00:13:18 (7) - new combo I think it's intentional
00:15:66 - reinsert break Fixed
01:17:42 (7) - new combo Ok

[hard]
01:31:54 (8) - new combo Ok

[osuplayer's insane]
00:22:71 (1) - maybe lower the hitsound volume of this note? It overpowers the music too much imo
00:29:07 (2) - ^
00:30:13 (5 the endpoint) - ^ All done
01:18:30 (2,3,4,5) - kinda confusing I guess he made it intentionally, fixed with new combos

good job as usual. starred
Thanks for modding :)
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing looks good

[NORMAL]

seems good :)

[YUMIKO'S HARDISH]

its all good

[HARD]

can't find anything

[OSUPLAYER111'S INSANE]

nothing...

perfect map. since you play it so safe when mapping i can never find anything to rag on.

well deserved star
tieff
Azumanga. <3

[Normal]
00:06:13 (6,7,8) - Spacing.
01:33:660 - Remove volume?

[yumiko's hardish]
00:04:89 (2,3) - Whistles?
00:08:95 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:09:48 (2) - Whistle on start.
00:23:60 (5) - Kinda random clap.
01:13:54 (4) - Clap.
01:27:13 (6) - New combo.
01:33:836 - Remove volume.

[Hard]
All cool.

[osuplayer111's Insane]
Cool.

I like all diffs, star+kudosu star.
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